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The Goal... 200+ mph in the Standing Mile. To Tartarus with academy records, I want to hold a Land Speed Record.


A millennia ago, two sisters clashed. One for her rule, and one for freedom. One emerged victorious, and one was banished. A thousand years later, the younger sister is due to return, and with her return comes the threat of revolution.
Luna fights for the freedom that she believes in, and will do whatever it takes to bring it about. But can she bring down her own sister, and put an end to the Equestrian Union?

Edited by Bad_Seed_72

Credit to the title goes to the awesome DustyPwny

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 56 )

Ooo. This looks fun.

I'll give a follow and see what happens.

~Skeeter The Lurker

As a member of Socialist Party USA, I have high hopes for this fanfiction. :twilightsmile:

Do not disappoint me, comrade.:trixieshiftright:

Atta boy Pops! Good to see this up! :twilightsheepish:

Sorry but no, even with the socialist spin it is still NLR/SE and that on my list of things I will vote down no matter what

2989223 You are gonna downvote for THAT FUCKING REASON without even reading the story.

You are a cunt who needs to be slapped across the head with a fucking bat.

If you are going to downvote a story, at least do it for a fucking legitimate fucking reason.

Your ONLY redeaming feature is that you have the balls to stand up and honestly say why you downvote.

Still, I would have some respect for you if you at least had a legitimate reason

Yes I did, and by using name calling and threats you are making yourself look like a bigger ass than me. If you want my reasons here they are:
1) The plot is over done it has gone beyond cliche
2) The base plot is the same as nearly every other NLR/SE/Tyrantlestia fics out there
3) Misscharaizations

My reasons my not be completely legitimate, but they are mine and I will stick by them.

2989592 Pretty fucking weak reasons if you ask me, considering just how many FoE stories I have seen posted EVERY GODDAMN DAY, And yet, as "beyond cliche" those stories have become, they keep cranking them out, and even making the feature box, so it kinda takes a fucking shit on your logic. And as for misscharacterizations, maybe I forgot to put the AU tag... but if you want fucking canon, just go watch the damn show.

People such as yourself, who go in and downvote just because of the particular genra or style, are the reasons so many writers quit, because your assfuckery is what discourages them to the point where they just give the fuck up. YOU are the enemy of EVERY aspiring writer out there.

2989759 Ooorrahhh! I feel you on that shit.


I'll tell you why you're wrong.
1. I was a reviewer of the plot line, and it's beyond unique. No one else has really done what this man has done here.
2. The base plot is really just not the same as any other NLR/SE/Tyrrantlestia fanfiction. I'm one of the reviewers, if you forgot in the last two seconds.
3. There's an Alternate Universe tag for a reason.

So, most of your reason are really are not legitimate, just person opinions. Next time, go bother some douche dick that writes a trolll fic. They like that kind of attention anyways.

Pops, keep writing. Don't let that jerkass stop you from creating your Magnum Opus!

2989912 Semper Fi Devildog! (91-95 here... got out a Corporal)

2990045 Thank you Dusty. You are one of the reasons I WILL NOT quit. I do not want to let you down for this.


And I will continue Of the Same Breed for you too. It's least I can do for not finishing one of my works in over five months. :pinkiesad2:

2990086 These two stories shall TAKE OVER THE FANDOM! :pinkiecrazy:



For the Republic! :flutterrage:

For Emmeria!

May the Golden King smile upon us!



There is so much win, pie and AWESOME in this comments section right meow. :rainbowkiss:


That's pathetic that you have a "list of things to downvote no matter what." :unsuresweetie: Being closed-minded is not a virtue, and will hinder you in life. Downvote based on poor execution, not on author or content. I'm guessing you probably downvoted all of the comments that didn't agree with you, eh? Is it cold up there on your pedestal? :twilightoops::rainbowlaugh:

Good to see this out, Biker. Looking forward to more. :rainbowkiss:

2990979 Thank you, Babs, and I will have more for you soon, I hope. You are a LIFE SAVER (trademark and shit, YO!) when it comes to the Apple Family accent.

As for that crack-head, twatwaffle that you replied to... I think I figured out why he dislike's Luna so much. He must really be Scootaloo in disguise!



Awesome! And thank you! Ah sure do enjoy that accent. :ajsmug:

:rainbowlaugh: He'd better prepare his anus. :rainbowwild:


Hey buddy! Grow up!


Show me your toothpaste!


2991066 That is fuckin PRICELESS!!!! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

2990074 Ah, you serve in both Gulf wars?

2991368 I am a Gulf War Era veteran, which qualifies me for the American Legion, but I did not actually see combat, so I do not qualify to join the VFW

2991379 Oh I see, well in my eyes you were always there and ready to go, so to me the counts for a great deal. Nonetheless, thank you, Semper Fi.

2991386 Thank you. The closest I came to combat deployment was in 94, when Saddam moved to the border again, and Clinton warned him to back off... I was a Squad leader for a combat loaded squad all ready to board the plane and head over... then Saddam backed off, and I did not have to go.

At one point, we had a Batallon formation, where the SgtMaj informed us that this was to be a strictly voluntary deployment. Me and another Corporal looked at one another, and were the first to stand behind him. a third of the Bn followed us

2991447 Damn dude, that's some powerful shit. You are definitely a guy I would want to have by my side in a conflict.

2991463 Leadership by example. At times, all it takes is one person to show the initiative.

wow, really great, I really like this story. :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry: I can not wait for the next chapters. :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:Do you think it will be soon? :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry: I really hope I have, alive Nightmare Moon! :heart::heart::heart: the next chapter.:moustache:

P.S. I use Google Translate.

3006844 I'm 2300 words into Ch 2 now. Will be working more on it tonight if I dont pass out early lol :twilightblush:


Just got promoted to Sergeant Major a few weeks ago. Currently doing my third tour in Afghanistan.:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

3008042 How long have you been in?
Not too many bronies our age lol

Ten years. Joined up when I was 20, became a brony in '10.

Another job well done Pops! I love it! :twilightblush:

3028341 The next one will have even more Awesome Sauce for your reading pleasure!

More Krav Pega Fluttershy! :flutterrage:
We meet Shit-Kicking Pinkamina! :pinkiecrazy:
AJ goes all Rocky Balboa! :applejackconfused:
("I see three of them!
"Aim for the Alicorn in the middle")
(Rocky IV reference... sorry)


I've no problem with references, even if I don't get them at first!:pinkiesmile:

I was kind of hoping that Luna would get to explain what really happened 1000 years ago.

3114547 I am thinking in ch 5 or 6, she will be telling Twilight what really happened.

Twilight knows "what" happened, but she does not know the REAL reasons why, believing what Celestia tells her.

I'm sorry for not posting on this sooner, but...dammit, you made me hate Shining Armor!!! I mean, the guy's kinda irritating in the show, but you made him a legitimate bad guy here.
Bravo for the excellent beginning! :rainbowdetermined2:

3145790 That is not the only think that will have you in shock... Keep reading.

Finally reading this on something other than Google Docs!
*shot for being late to the party* :twilightsheepish:
I had this silly thought going through my head during the bee/wasp/hornet attack:


And now, into the woods!~:rainbowwild:

3145952 What did you think of Dash's "road pizza" comment? lol

LOL the whole bit with Flutters going ape-shit reminded me of Smile HD...is that bad? :twilightoops::twilightsheepish:

3146159 LOL road pasta...ironic since I had lasagna for lunch :rainbowlaugh:

3146189 Yeah... as you can see, the story is well deserving of the AU tag

3146193 Tasty! Pony pasta!!! :pinkiecrazy:

3146222 That pony needs a blowjob.
Can't wait for the next update...and from what I can gather, the sun really DOESN'T need Celestia to raise it. What scandal! :rainbowwild:

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