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I'm perfectly normal. Who told you I was crazy? Not me. Cuz I'm totally not, ya hear? I'M NOT!!! Oh, and I write stuff, which you should check out. ... ...you all made me this way... ...


This is my life now. It's a good life, too: Free food, free schooling and a roof over my head. A future laid out for me. I have everything I need to make the most of this. But then she shows up and makes me question whether I want to or not. She is infuriating, annoying, outlandish, boorish, exquisite.

She reminds me of what I've lost.
She reminds me of home.

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Comments ( 16 )

Aint that cute. But seriously why Ali gotta run away to her room. That probably just makes vee think she still has to keep looking.

This was beautiful, truly. It was somewhat confusing at first but then it really grew on me, this concept is absolutely wonderful, and with the best pairing!

2949430 I may have overdid the assumed knowledge thing at first, but it still worked out. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

2950080 This comment...its...its so nice...:fluttercry: thank you :yay:

Well done Story, you have done me proud!

I actually didnt work it out on the first paragraph. took me a while to understand what was when going on^^ but I got it now and I must say.... this has now become my second fav OctaScratch fic ever^^ VERY good work^^ 5/5 Moustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

:pinkiegasp: By the maker, that was an awesome fic!!!:pinkiehappy:

I hadn't actually noticed the human tag at first and was reallllllyyyy confused when I read how SHE was confused by her fingers. :derpyderp1: Then I looked back at the start and saw the human tag, and it all made sense. It was really well done. Good work. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Almost wish there was more. Like if they get back home, or what they do from there (but then again, I've always liked to hear what happens after the 'happily ever after' :ajsmug: so this is fine too, I'm just curious)

It took me till about halfway through to figure out what the hell was going on, and I love it!!!:pinkiehappy: This was done so well, a kind of balance I hope and dig for when I write and you did it with perfection!
Your mooch has been approved! :raritywink:

Why is she described as having diamond blonde hair?
Just wondering.

2961162 it was meant to give the impression of her hair glimmering around her head, to give an early subconscious connection to her being a 'saving angel' sort of thing. But, you know, whatever :ajsmug:
If you're wondering why it isn't...blue, then, really, what human has naturally blue hair?
Hope ya enjoyed it, though. I actually have another idea like this, but it'll be a while.

Wow, this was wonderful.:moustache:

I was confused at first; However, only by reading it all the way through did the answer clearly come about. :pinkiehappy: I love these types of stories. It's difficult for me to find one created as amazingly as yours.:derpytongue2:

My favorite pairing AND an incredibly, pure, creatively original idea..:rainbowkiss:

SO MUCH YES :raritydespair:

Like, Fav & Follow!

2961214 yeah but I just mean in the movie twilight's hair and skin color stayed the same. (not that I wasn't questioning that either because I don't think I've ever seen a purple person)

This is very good, very poetic, very well written. I don't like it, but that's just because I don't like the writing style, and doesn't mean that I can't see that it is exquisite. This deserves a place of honor. Tier 4

This was a surprisingly smart, emotional story. Thank you.


It is intentionally vague on their origins, because, come on, you all worked it out in the first paragraph ;P

Thanks for not treating us like we're stupid. Too many authors feel the need to handhold, and too many readers expect it. It's nice to have a story that doesn't insult the reader's intelligence.

The electrocardiogram's an appropriate image. This one was an emotional roller coaster. Fantastic work. Thank you for it.

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Dense, but I definitely did not see that explanation coming.

Have you ever seen a heartbeat line? The ups and downs show you're alive

Whoa. That's deep. o.o

How wrong I has.

Found one.

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