1.OUT! Twilight gets stung by a bee: Exactly what it says on the tin. Twilight has a close encounter with an insect.

2.RELEASED! Rarity Evicts a mouse: I'll give you three guesses.

3. GOGOGO! Fluttershy has a serious conversation with a bowl of milk: A really sad story, actually.

4. READ IT! The song of the sea: A pony poem I wrote, on a whim.

5.IT'S THERE The Gopher: WARNING SAD: My first attempt at flash fiction.

6. (SAD WARNING) The Dust Beneath My Feet: Another sad, flash fiction, this time with Luna as the central character.

7. (Sort of silly) A thing-explainer simple story. Go read it, it's really interesting. Hard to explain though.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 46 )

But you see, Twilight was in a mighty hurry in gathering these flowers, probably because she had a lunch appointment with another one of her friends who is also not appearing in this story, and simply did not have time to inspect each and every flower for bees or any other undesireable hitchhikers. I suppose she should have brought her towel.

Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy reference?

this is the greatest example of stoner humour ever :pinkiehappy: I love it!

Bwahahahaha! This is priceless! I love this! Favorite, like, it deserves both! I'm just cracking up right now! This is perfect!

This story wins on so many levels that I don't even know where to start.

Today I learned not to judge a book by its... title, I guess, because both the title of the story and the title of the chapter were flat-out lies.

Well played, my friend.

Wasp the hell is this? Hi've never been so insulted in all my life!

I was expecting the bee to sting Twilight, but I wasn't hoping for it. I win! :derpyderp1:

I see. Douglas Adams and Monty Python humor.

The least you could've done was Twilight react some to the bee flying out of her mouth . . .

You like this story bee-cause of the puns?2872832

You had best bee-lieve that I enjoyed this silly little story.

Ever heard bee buzzing in auto tune? Trust me it is horrible.
*Auto tune*

Now this is something that'll get everybody/pony positively buzzing.

2875450 This story was hilarious, Princess, even the puns will keep me rolling on my bed clutching my sides due to the pain from laughing so hard.

Well I would say that there are too many Bee puns. Well it was good regardless of that annoyance, and the references were nice. I think that you could do a once through to see the errors in spelling.

Examples: Understandanly => understandably. coencided => coincided. hurtaling => Hurdling dandilion => dandelion

Honestly, I expected many more puns, but I only spotted 6 puns and 2 references.

I enjoyed the bee-ness of it all. Also the conclusion was bee-yond enjoyable... I hope Bee-God is merciful to those who make bee puns in vain...

Stunning and beautiful. It was enthralling and mesmerizing. I love it all.

Not too bad; just hone your writing skills, and... what?

3302145 Me too this poem is worth reciting. :pinkiesmile:

well that was not what I was expecting to see when I fired up my laptop today :rainbowderp:

It's Review Time!
No Daddy, no!
Wow, so- BEES!
...Sorry.... that happens at times.
Anyway, this fic was quite amusing. I giggled and chuckled all the way through.
Favorite Line:

The plight of our little bee was completely lost on her, and none of the events that transpired were anywhere near her convoluted train of thought, instead being shut out by thoughts of how she hated the cliffhanger at the end of the Encyclepidia Ponica, D-E.

Final Verdict:


. It dawned on the insect that thouh it was now free to fly,

though :twilightsmile:
Other than that, fantabulous story. I was hoping she'd get stung, since twilight getting stung by bees is my fetish, but...

Quite a beautiful piece—as an enjoyer of poetry, I found this pleasurable.

>that feel

3464999 this is something I've actually wanted to try out for a while. I've got a few books of short stories that work like this.

If the title says [Character] gets stung by a bee, you're going to think that [Character] gets stung by a bee.

Noooooooo I dident want her to bee stung wat are you talking about:scootangel:

Do you write these half-asleep?

4598774 No. What on earth would make you think that? :twilightblush::twilightblush:

Okay, maybe only half-asleep...

Aaaaand now I need to go find something cute and silly to balance this out...

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