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Jlargent


Not much to say really, I write stories for the Brony Nation and the Pegasister Alliance that's all I do really.

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I like this ship,but no one writes it

and finally,someone else realizes that spike is(technically)twilight's son!

2902399 That's because no one thought of it. So technically I'm the first to do so.

This is the first SunLight story I've seen. Like and fav

the dialogue could use a little work, but past that i'm really looking forward to seeing how this turns out!

Ok I can just imagine Shining breaking into Flash's room then proceeding to beat the ever loving crap out of him.

2902916 Nah, there won't be much left after Cadence, Celestia and Luna finish with him.

good start so far, although i don't know if it would be right of celestia to disipline Flash sentry simply because he cheated on Twi. Now if he had done something illegal or harmful to equestria. reguardless i'm still gonna see where this leads. sunset and twi sex would be hot

2903242 Hell hath no fury like a monarch scorned. Celestia sees Twilight as a daughter so it would make sense that she would want to punish Sentry for his actions.

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Which would be a gross misuse of her power. I'm not sure Celestia is one to do that... especially since she's usually extremely lenient. That's the same mare who was willing to forgive Luna, and Discord, and probably Sunset Shimmer as well. Just singling out Flash Sentry like that shouldn't go without her getting called out, and called out hard; doubly so since she'd be using the power of her office to punish somepony for petty revenge.

2903817 Flash has hurt Twilight on an emotional level that deems it necessary to warrant action.

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Yeah, like I said: Using the power of her office for petty revenge. If there is a clause that explicitly prohibits guard members from infidelity that's another matter. Even so, going above and beyond the punishment warranted would be completely arbitrary.

Also: I do believe what Discord did also counts as hurting on an emotional level^^

Anyhow: If Celestia et al are so dead-set on throwing the book at Flash Sentry and more, I can't see her as in the right on this.

2903884 Meh for the most part I am making this up as I go so maybe I'll resolve that in the next chapter.

I'm with The Great Derpsby, Celestia doing anything to punish Flash for cheating on Twilight would be overstepping her bounds in a big way. At least with Shining Armor and Cadence they're related(brother and sister-in-law), so they would be more then within bounds to rip Flash limb from limb.

That's it where's my FN P90.

2909825 Actually no, this is strictly Twilight's POV. As much as I want to make it a multi-person POV it would take up too much story to cover.

2908494>>2903884 Well let's just say I'm going to have the princesses take an 'Hooves off' approach to punishing Flash.

I like celestia plan....flash sentry is dead

Ok I'm liking this...Let the chaos rain.

3045805 Well that remains to be seen for the rest of the story.

3162355 I'll stick to the one I have posted.

3162367 Ah, I agree. It looks better anyway. :twilightblush:

3162378 Looks like you did, because I went to the "Source" and it seems to have been deleted.

3162408 Fixed it. It now goes to the artist's tumblr page.

I feel there is a need for more Sun-Light. Oh god that's an awesome name. ANyway. Do go on. Every bit of this is good. Torturing Flash and shipping SunLight. Do go on. Do. Go. On.

3182652 Agreed, Sunlight is the new Twixie in my opinion.

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Nothing will replace my love for Twixie. But, this does come in a nice tie for third for favorite Twilight ship.

1. Twixie
2. Twirity
3 (1). OctaLight
3 (2). SunLight

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Yeah. It's almost as uncommon as this. I still love it. Dunno why exactly. Maybe just cause Octavia and Twi in one ship.

3186415 Hey I love Octy and Vinyl but that doesn't mean that I ship them with others.

3255077 Glad you like it, I'm working on chapter 3 so get ready for it.:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

I got an update for the new chapter yet there is a password on it?:rainbowhuh:

i usually stay away from sunset and twilight shipping, but this is good.

3284375 Sorry the chapter isn't finished yet I accidentally clicked on Publish.
3284409 Thanks! I'm trying my best not to screw this up too badly.:twilightsheepish:

3284859 Until we actually see Spike's mother Twilight is the designated mom..

3284910 Until we see filly Twilight get ****ed by a dragon and lay an egg, she is the midwife.
She may be considered the adopted mother, not the biological mother.
I doubt she'd boast about raising a child at this stage in her life.

3288772 That's debatable considering that we don't know the full extent of Twilight's past with Spike prior to the series.

3288800 We know she hatched him due to a sonic rainbow.
That is canon.
We also know she was raised in Canterlot by loving parents.
I highly doubt a fullgrown (or teen, I guess) would/could go all the way to Canterlot to rape a filly.
Remember that this show is a family show. I doubt they'd even imply any sort of rape or a dad that would leave his impregnated spouse/fillyfriend.

3288905 Ah but that begs the question of where did Spike's egg come from? I think that Spike went to the dragon migration to find that answer and the fact that he wanted to hang out with his fellow drakes was a ruse to this.

3288933 I assume it was a diplomatic ploy of one form or another or that maybe a female dragon donated it because she couldn't care for it properly?
Maybe he was sent to ease diplomatic tensions (let's not forget this would be very common in ye'ole societies like Equestria and it's neighbors...)

But the fact that you suggest that an equine mammal laid an egg is absurd.

But who cares where it came from. It did NOT come from filly Twilight!
Why don't you go and ask Hasbro/Lauren Faust!
See what they'd say!

No mater where the egg came from, it did not come from Twilight.

3288981 There is also one other theory that you neglected: The mother was killed by rival dragons and Spike's egg managed to survive.

3288996 and?
I'm still right, Twilight definitely did not lay that egg.

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