I like celestia plan....flash sentry is dead

Ok I'm liking this...Let the chaos rain.

3045805 Well that remains to be seen for the rest of the story.

apologize for the pic but I couldn't find a good human Twilight and Sunset picture for this.

Gotcha covered bro: derpicdn.net/media/W1siZiIsIjIwMTMvMDUvMTgvMThfMzBfNDVfNDk0XzMyODEwNF9fVU5PUFRfX3NhZmVfdHdpbGlnaHRfc3BhcmtsZV9raXNzaW5nX2VxdWVzdHJpYV9naXJsc19hcnRpc3RfcGl4ZWxraXR0aWVzXzUxMmU1M2FlYTRjNzJkZDM5ZDAwMDVlMy5wbmciXV0/328104__safe_twilight%2Bsparkle_shipping_equestria%2Bgirls_kissing_sunset%2Bshimmer_artist-colon-pixelkitties_sunlight.png

3045974 I'll consider it.

3046116 What about this one? derpicdn.net/media/W1siZiIsIjIwMTMvMDUvMTQvMDJfNDBfNDVfNjg2X2ZpbGUiXV0/324457__safe_twilight%2Bsparkle_humanized_equestria%2Bgirls_sunset%2Bshimmer_corndog.png

3162355 I'll stick to the one I have posted.

3162367 Ah, I agree. It looks better anyway.

3162373 I got lucky finding iit.

3162378 Looks like you did, because I went to the "Source" and it seems to have been deleted.

3162408 Fixed it. It now goes to the artist's tumblr page.

3163204 Sweet! Thanks.

3165466 No problem!

I feel there is a need for more Sun-Light. Oh god that's an awesome name. ANyway. Do go on. Every bit of this is good. Torturing Flash and shipping SunLight. Do go on. Do. Go. On.

3182652 Agreed, Sunlight is the new Twixie in my opinion.

3183101

Nothing will replace my love for Twixie. But, this does come in a nice tie for third for favorite Twilight ship.

1. Twixie
2. Twirity
3 (1). OctaLight
3 (2). SunLight

3186027 Octylight? Huh, that's a new one.

3186110

Yeah. It's almost as uncommon as this. I still love it. Dunno why exactly. Maybe just cause Octavia and Twi in one ship.

3186415 Hey I love Octy and Vinyl but that doesn't mean that I ship them with others.

3255077 Glad you like it, I'm working on chapter 3 so get ready for it.

MOAR!!

I got an update for the new chapter yet there is a password on it?

i usually stay away from sunset and twilight shipping, but this is good.

3284375 Sorry the chapter isn't finished yet I accidentally clicked on Publish.
3284409 Thanks! I'm trying my best not to screw this up too badly.

2902399 she's more of a midwife :/

3284859 Until we actually see Spike's mother Twilight is the designated mom..

3284910 Until we see filly Twilight get ****ed by a dragon and lay an egg, she is the midwife.
She may be considered the adopted mother, not the biological mother.
I doubt she'd boast about raising a child at this stage in her life.

3288772 That's debatable considering that we don't know the full extent of Twilight's past with Spike prior to the series.

3288800 We know she hatched him due to a sonic rainbow.
That is canon.
We also know she was raised in Canterlot by loving parents.
I highly doubt a fullgrown (or teen, I guess) would/could go all the way to Canterlot to rape a filly.
Remember that this show is a family show. I doubt they'd even imply any sort of rape or a dad that would leave his impregnated spouse/fillyfriend.

3288905 Ah but that begs the question of where did Spike's egg come from? I think that Spike went to the dragon migration to find that answer and the fact that he wanted to hang out with his fellow drakes was a ruse to this.

3288933 I assume it was a diplomatic ploy of one form or another or that maybe a female dragon donated it because she couldn't care for it properly?
Maybe he was sent to ease diplomatic tensions (let's not forget this would be very common in ye'ole societies like Equestria and it's neighbors...)

But the fact that you suggest that an equine mammal laid an egg is absurd.

But who cares where it came from. It did NOT come from filly Twilight!
Why don't you go and ask Hasbro/Lauren Faust!
See what they'd say!

No mater where the egg came from, it did not come from Twilight.

3288981 There is also one other theory that you neglected: The mother was killed by rival dragons and Spike's egg managed to survive.

3288996 and?
I'm still right, Twilight definitely did not lay that egg.

3289105 Who cares? I mean for all intents and purposes Twilight is Spike's mother adopted or not.

3289127
> I love to argue
> You were incorrect when you said mother
> You responded to my arguments
> Never respond to my arguments
> I frustrated you with my arguments
> I laugh at your frustration
> Despite how nice your story is, you are hardly the first to write a Sunlight fic
> ^Had nothing to do with our previous argument
> You aren't very good at arguing
> Please don't join a debate club, you (based on current observations) wouldn't be suited to it

3289338 I graduated in 2002 that ship has already sailed.

While I like the idea, this was very poorly done. It's almost painful to read with how out of character the Princesses are and how choppy the writing is. Not to mention the POV changes. Why don't you just do it in Third Person Omniscient? You can do everything you're doing now, but without the jarring POV changes.

3317166 I'm more used to first person since I like to detail how they are feeling at the moment and make it more 'real' for lack of a better term.

let the fun...begin

MORE I WANT MORE!!!!

When r u gonna update?

3590011 I'm writing chapter three as we speak but it will take a bit to finish.

3590075 Sweet!

La suite please ?

3666093 Translation please?

This fic seems pleasing a like and fave for you and i can't wait to see what crazy adventure lies ahead.

“I say we hang him by his stallionhood and leave him there until he learns his lesson.” Princess Luna said.

at first i was like but then i was like

(Sorry I didn't comment on the first chapter!)

I don't understand where the sarcasm is supposed to be during the Celestia part, and the singular paragraph of Luna PoV feels awkward, like it could've been done cleaner as part of Celestia's section. Otherwise though, really good stuff! :) The description of the wind chimes at the beginning is interesting, although it seems to be drawn out a bit much when the guard comes in. Oh, well :p

Looking forward to more! Hooked so far :D

Oh that's good celestia is brilliant

Pineapples!