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Prane
Aspiring writer, self-proclaimed hardcore gamer, adept of human psychology. Does not consider excessive pride for a vice.
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Hello and welcome to Twilight and the Art of Fingering!
I hope that you'll enjoy reading it - it's my first attempt in using [Human] and [Romance] in the Mature and Sex environment. So what is it, exactly? I can't really tell and could use some help to categorize it properly. Too deep and polite for a clop, too shallow for a romantic, sensual fiction - neither, both, something in between?
More or less constructive criticism is encouraged, of course - don't hesitate to tell me what you think! And what if you stumbled upon this story, but it's not really your cup of tea? Worry not, as you are bound to find something amongst my other recent projects!
And thus they slept through the Fall Formal allowing Sunset Shimmer to attain the Element of Magic and the fall of Equestria began.
Nice Story. I´m looking forward to read the other stories you have written.
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Judging by how Twilight had no idea how to use her new body when she went to Monster High World, I think Sunset Satan's army of high school teenagers would experience the same thing upon arriving in Equestria.
3199389 Ya know, that's a good point. Methinks Sunset didn't quite think that part through.
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A good handful of plot elements in that movie were not thought through very well. Or at all.
Haven't read anything yet, but your coverart killed me already
Will be enjoying this one
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Thank you for your feedback! It's seems I made somebody furious, judging by the downvotes on my original post and on those from people who commented positively on the story (DarkChiyo, Caroline). Oh well.
3198986
Yep, and then Principal Celestia should organize a seminar regarding responsible sex. You never know when a one-night stand would unleash a demon horde!
3199389 3201512
I know, right? That whole last-second plan was dumb - her ponified minions would be most likely obliterated by Celestia and Luna, or stomped into the ground by the Royal Guard. Still, I love Sunset as a character (I mean she's clearly manipulative, sneaky and clearly knows a thing or two about magic).
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That was the plan all along! I mean, not killing you in particular, just hitting somebody at random with the coverart. Glad it worked!
Any plans on a follow up story or a second chapter?.
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Definitely no second chapter, this story is closed.
As for the follow up story, well, there are at least few possibilities on how this would develop: Twilight getting back in thirty moons for a repeat, human Rarity playing with all of her friends at once, but the most interesting option I'm digging is human Rarity coming to Equestria to find Twilight, and stumbling upon pony Rarity! You know, double the Rarity, double the fun.
However, I don't see myself as a full-time clop writer, so it might as well take decades before I'll go back to this genre. Still, it was a great experience to write it!
There always the idea of Rarity meeting the human world twilight.
Would really enjoy seeing a fellow up story from you.
and then Fluttershy shots the door open and sees Twilight and Rarity naked hugging with love juices all over the ground
I clearly live in the wrong part of Europe...
Celestia is watching you masturbate!
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Well, nothing like making fun of Europeans from time to time! Of course I'm from Europe, too, but given that most people on this site seem to be from the USA I figured that I'll include that satirical point of view.
And then the door opened and Celestia walked in.
it would have been great if the speaker wasdenoted in the speach tag routinely, possibly with a few more words on the situation in order to get the situation just right
I thinkI saw a few details that are clearly off, if it was the choice of words, or a typo?
Still, two girls doesn't choose the words like that, right?
3447813 Actually, it is a matter of how many actually make the point actively, or you will never know who isfrom Europa, vs Amaricans, from the US of A's?
I may need t go over the films again in order to check how they expressed things, but it sounds off to have a refference to Eouropa in this context, even if it is supposedly in the Human world, is it?
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I wrote this thing over a year ago, so typos, needless narrative pieces and general mistakes are pretty much guaranteed. Fortunately I've managed to fix a lot of them in my writing as it is of today.
As for your other comment, I originally thought of the EQG universe as part of our known world, and that's why referring Europe happened. Right now I'm imagining as a separate place, though in many ways similar to the USA.
5541099 I know that feeling only too well. I have to go back and correct such problems in my stories on a quarterly basis, just to pick up what I have develloped since the chapters were originally written.
The largest problem is missing speach tags. Even if it feels obvious when you write it, that isn't natural to your audience, which is why we publish the stories.
I kind of picked up on the Equestria Girs' scenario. That part came through pretty clear. They are Humans in the film, and the sequel. I finally managed to see it, assuming it is the real deal, since the proMo materials included scnes that are never touched in the version I saw.
The entire FiM seems to touch the state side, but even in the film, thy, and we should stay clear of too human/earth near refferences on this case, at least in my oppinion. It kind of pulls the story out of the fantacy world feel that supports the characters and the story.
Even if they have no Masgic at the Canterlot High, the underpining for it apparently is precent, even if it takes Twilight, or in the second case, the sirens to awaken it fully.
From time to time, they slip in a few careless refferences, where they should have avoided it.
The EQg is just one of at least Three Canon realms where they live and can be. If you recall the PowerPonies?
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I don't do that, so that's why some of my older stories, including this one, may appear subpar.
5541342 We all perform our arts in our own way. simple as that.
Since it is a One-Shot, there was never a reason to come back to it, unless someon, just like me pointed at something to look into.
At least I managed to enjoy the story enough to read the entire story.
There are a few details that kind of got in the way, but I managed to read the entire story.
Honestly, I'm not a fan of clopfics. But I remember reading and quite liking some of your other stories a while back, so out of curiosity, I decided to give this a shot. It was pretty decent, for what it is.
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Whoa, you've dug out this old fossil of a story, haven't you? I've never been a fan of clopfics either, so this one was sort of an experiment for me. It's probably lacking and terrible (I wouldn't know - I've never read it after publishing it!), but at least I learned a little more about writing overall. An interesting exercise, but not much else.
7380139 Fair enough.