Twilight Sparkle joins Rainbow Dash for a ground-side Wonderbolts show in Ponyville. She highly enjoys herself, and given Rainbow Dash's status, she is allowed to meet the entire team! Somehow she manages to secure a date with Soarin, a stallion who fancies himself as something of a playcolt. Twilight gives in, but Soarin gets a little more than he bargained for when Twilight tries to take a more academic approach with the night's events, and he may face his toughest challenge yet.
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Chapters (1)
Now that was kinda nice! You all over the place with geners, aren't you?
~Skeeter The Lurker
2802016 I try.
Okay I'll try but it's going to be pretty hard to read something right now. But I'll read it later.
2802022
Versatility is a nice thing to have. I applaud you for it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
OH BOY IT'S THE...
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I enjoyed it, no regrets.
2802083 Not to spoil anything, but if you're following the Non-Bronyverse I can say that TD will not die alone.
*TD finds another human.*
*Turns out it was a changeling.*
*Rocks fall.*
*Everyone dies.*
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Shh! Don't let the author hear you!
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Haha, you say that like the author's goal is torture TD or something.
Wait.
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At first I felt sorry for Soarin. Then Spitfire showed up and I lost all sympathy for him.
"That's why we're going to do everything by the book!"
Aaaaaaaaaand that's the point where everything starts going downhill, right?
Edit:
"I thought I was going to lose my bet with Spitfire."
He deserves whatever punishment Twilight has in store for him.
Edit #2: dat ending...
Awww...
Poor Soarin.
Still, should know better to cheat on a mare like Spitfire.
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I think you mean Fleetfoot my good sir, Spitfire would probably neater him if he tried to make a bet like that to her.
That....was a whole new definition of fun right there. Perfect, just perfect.
Nice one.
I laughed so hard at this line.
Twilight Sparkle, master troll. Who would've thought?
But really, this was a blast to read. Keep up the entertaining stories.
2807354 Cough cough Tara Strong Cough cough.
HOLY PUCK! I didn't want to read this after seeing the 'Sex' Thing, BUT THAT WAS PRICELESS!!!
2811604 I'm not big into clop at all, so anytime you see 'sex' from me, it isn't clop.
For a second I was a little stunned to read Fleetfoot as a character. A quick google search informed me that my name isn't as original as I had thought
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In any case it was interesting to observe two separate interpretations of Twilight in the same bit. After being convinced that you had written the oblivious study Twilight you shove the real and competent Twilight right at the end. Incidentally, I wonder what Celestial would think of Twilight once those got out.
By the by, not including this story, roughly what age are these ponies in your head -canon?
cool unexpecting
Soarin's gonna come back and pee on her bed. That's what you do when a girl laughs at you.
2836264 umm I hate to say it but I for some reason can't get a girl... maybe its cause I am a bit fat.. not to much just a bit... that or a total social recluse that hides in his room all day exept when at work.... but I don't think a girl would laugh at me.. might get scared but not laugh... yet I still can't find a girlfriend....
Zomigosh. Women scorned indeed. That was evilly funny!
Most Excellent.
Brilliant!
:pinkie
I saw the sex tag and was like
BronyWriter doesn't like clop. What is this? Propelled by curiosity I read on. I am delighted to say that I giggled and blushed through the entire thing. Great job and awesome ending.
Ps- I liked the pennies and growling. Nice touches.
Haha! This was mildly amusing take on a many-times-done concept at first, but the punchline was worth it. Nicely done.
2811604 I can't get the image out of my mind. A hockey puck, angelic wings sprouting from its back, raising into the air as all the players watch, amazed.
I have mixed feelings about this story.
Lol really good
Nice story, but there's some things you may want to edit.
That should be "his".
You're missing an ending punctuation mark.
There should be a comma after "Rarity's".
You're missing a beginning quotation mark.
I'm pretty sure that Fleetfoot is female.
And you're missing a beginning quotation mark.
Even Spike can do way much better than Twilight!!!!