Naruko (Female Naruto) thought she knew a bit about these bonds the Hokage always talked about. However when she tries a mysterious Jutsu she is sent to a new land. In this new land, she will come to learn the truth about friendship and bonds, and at the same time realize she had no idea about such things before in her life.
She will learn a lot from this land and make friends while she and the others go on adventures and learn more about Equestria's past in the process. She and Twilight will also learn of a threat which puts all of Equestria in danger. Naruko will do all she can with the others to save their home, but what of Konoha? Will she return there? Will she even ever want to go back? This will have to be seen as the story unfolds.
Naruto and My Little Pony crossover.
i like it and wow this wow
2788267 Thanks! I plan for it to keep going like this as the story progresses. I will still have the more normal day to day stuff as well, but I will make sure it lives up to both the adventure tag and AU tag without getting too crazy.
very much so wow
2788478 ok
2789114 Not entirely sure to make of this comment but I like it!
Dude. Seriously? (Sighs and face-palms) Just fix this please.
2793403 Thanks for pointing that little embarrassment out. It isn't easy reading the chapters of the story and making corrections all day. I only hope there aren't too many mistakes like that one.
Pegasi are natural Sages!!!!
Are you referencing "Friendship Contract"? If you don't know what I mean by "sage" it is a person or animal that can tap into the power of nature itself which is called "natural energy".
2809878 I have never heard or read "Friendship Contract", but that is close to the idea I have in mind. I figured since they are in charge of managing weather, something nature creates, they are instead kind of guiding it rather than full on controlling it completely and creating it. If that makes any sense.
2812703 In chapter 25 Jiraiya made the off-hand comment word-for-word "Next you're going to tell me the pegasi are natural sages." to Twilight Sparkle and in Chapter 35 the author just went out and said that pegasi are natural sages.
2813547 Sounds like it might be a good read sometime. However, I think I might steer clear of it for now. I don't want to find myself copying or anything if I can avoid it. So i guess I am not the only one to have seen this type of connection. I guess that means their might be other Naruto unicorns fics as well.
Anyways I hope you enjoy future chapters when they come out for this story and that it is originally enough to be read on its own.
2813859 Yeah, it is a pretty good read, but I think you are the first Unicorn Naruto fic writer, I have seen alicorn and earth pony Narutos, but not Unicorns, so good on you for that bit and "Friendship Contract" isn't about Naruto becoming a pony, it's him becoming their summoner after doing the summoning jutsu without signing a contract, which doing so brings you to the home of the animal you have a natural affinity to.
Also, that sphere that Naruko launched at Nightmare Moon, was it supposed to be a derivative of the Tailed Beast Bomb or the Rasengan?
If it is the latter she shouldn't know that yet if at all.
2814324 Ah yes... Naruto as an Alicorn or an Earth pony that can use Jutsus. That was a trend on fanficition.net I noticed along with him having a marem. I disliked this. I mean come on... Jutsu... Magic.... I guess they forget the large amounts of Harry Potter and Naruto crossovers that treat the two as similar. This is part of the reason I first thought up this concept of a unicorn Naruto. I have other reasons for this later but I won't spoil those.
As for her knowing a variation of the Rasengan... Well She was trained by Kyuubi in this story to some extent, and had to change things to suit herself (a common Female Naruto trope). She also learned form both Twilight and Princess Celestia! This is why as I pointed out in this story and will continue to do so, Twilight is better at magic in general than Naruko. However, Naruko has more talent in combat magic because of her previous training.
Worry not though since I am bringing in a powerful character form a different world. I plan to instead expand upon the talents of the Mane 6, and they will naturally, because of what I have planned, gain a lot of badass without being too over the top. Hopefully this will maintain balance while keeping their individuality. We will have to see if I live up to this ideal or not as I write more.
Now that you have mentioned more detail about "Friendship Contract" it has a similar premises to a story I read on fanfiction.net. Hopefully it is just a similar idea approached differently and not someone coping the other. However, "Friendship Contract" seems to be further along than the story I read. Either way I will definitely have to read it now and I probably won't be too scared since it is different by a good bit from this story.
2814447 I will give you the link, but there is a warning, it seems like the fic is dead, http://www.fimfiction.net/story/23662/friendship-contract
Also what I meant by the rasengan comment was it based on the rasengan itself and not just a coincidence?
2815469 Yes it was based on the rasengan. She won't call it that since the name was given to her by Jiraya who Didn't meet before coming to Equestria.
2817203 Did she get the idea of the technique from the Rasengan specifically without knowing the name or did she base it of the Tailed Beast Bomb like her dad did? ( Which is completely canon, those who said that the Rasengan was a handheld TBB were onto something.)
2817303 Got the idea similar to how her dad did. I think I pointed out in the first chapter she started training with Kyuubi, but had to sometimes make modifications to better suit herself.
2817742 It only said it was to hunt and defend herself, not making ninjutsu.
2818574 I guess I figured it would be understood Kyuubi taught her other things as well. For instance when she thought about showing the instructors a wind nature jutsu during her final portion of the exam.
However, I was mostly meaning it was first mentioned she started training with him in the first chapter. I guess I should have made it clearer, I meant she had been training with him since she was young not that this was proof out right he taught her. I guess I should have also pointed out I later show her working with him on a collaborative jutsu she created using both fire and wind.
I figured this just showed it would be possible for her to have learned other things during her training as well. I just didn't want to spend too much time in the story showing all of the many things she trained on while in Equestria. She is now older than Shippuden Naruto, because she is almost 17 instead of just 16. Those four years of training I thought would make a rather dull chapter.
Really enjoying this story. I like that Naruko has settled on staying in Equestria, there was really nothing for her to go back to. On a side note; I wonder what happened to the fail safes that where part of the seal?
Keep up the good work!
3014697 They didn't have a reason to activate in this story. Naruko never tried to remove the seal, so daddy didn't come out to say a few words and reseal Kyuubi. Also because Kyuubi and Naruko got along better in this story Kyuubi's hatred didn't try to take over Naruko, and so Kushina didn't appear. Whether Naruko will see them or not is something to be seen later in the story.
I am happy you are enjoying this story. I always thought Naruko/Naruto wanting to return to Konoha no matter what kind of annoyed me. The little seed of doubt planted early and her slightly better intelligence in this story kept her from being blindly loyal as well.
3016927 I'll look forward to seeing if that comes up then.
Out of curiosity, how is chapter 11 going?
3018693 slowly.
I have a couple of story affecting things to come up with before i can make a lot of ground on the chapter.
I get the feeling Naruko should be careful what she wishes for.
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maybe. Or maybe it will end up being exactly what she wants? Who knows?! 
Something will happen and it hasn't happened yet in the story.
Wow just wow word's can not describe how awesome this story is.
3496272 Well I am glad you really like it! I will do what I can to keep it that way!
this story is great keep up the good work....
and if i ever find the two people that hit the dislike button there going to get the "smile HD" treatment..
Another awesome chapter
I can't wait to read the next one. keep up the good work also cruse you and you cliffhangers 
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3500131 Nice to know you like it. Also nice to know there shall be consequences! They didn't even bother say why.
3500525 Sorry about that
but I couldn't resist and the chapter was long enough as it was. 
I'm really enjoying this story! (Read it all day instead of doing homework) I'm a bit concerned with how Fluttershy is acting when in combat, but at the same time, it was pretty awesome . Will you have Naruko train her and the others when the threat coming to Equestria is revealed to the group? I can't wait for the next chapter!!
3560383 I feel your concerns about Fluttershy's behavior. I will be careful with Fluttershy and in the next chapter, which is pretty far along already, everything will be hopefully kind of explained. It will lead to something that will be a huge part of the story! I won't go into too much detail now though...
As for Naruko training them... Well I haven't really put too much thought into that. Do realize though, Naruko is a unicorn, not an alicorn. She has the unicorn thing fairly well down, but she doesn't know too much about how earth ponies or pegasi ponies and their respective magics work. If she were to train them in any way it would be very basic training. I am not saying this will happen, but the only ones she could really thoroughly train would be Rarity and/or Twilight.
Well, I could only get through half of chapter two before I started to become physically ill from poor writing and bad story. Unfortunately, there are too many flaws to actually note or I would try and list them for your benefit.
As it stands... I can see why I haven't heard of this story yet.
You misspelled Cadance. Other than that you're good.
Yaaa a another chapter
, I cant wait to see what will happen next also I wonder which one the main six will be next to find there balance and have a life changing moment. When will naruko tell the rests of the girls her past. keep up the good work I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Very good and true about kindness also you gave an epic feeling to the inner battle (fluttershy vs crueltyshy) my only (not complain but more like nitpick) is why crueltySHY this character was not shy, but again maybe i am nitpicking, good chapter sir and good story so far.
3615453 yeah my bad... I get the musical term she is named after and her real name mixed up all of the time.
3616238 Glad you are enjoying the story. As far as who is next... Who knows... All I will say is that each will before the story is over....
3616470 I am glad I did get that point about kindness across and you experienced the feeling I was going for with that inner battle. I went with Crueltyshy because she represented the cruel side to Fluttershy. Also I thought it sounded good.
3618715 does this mean once pinkie finds balance with her dark side she wil start pulling off cristian brutal sniper stuff (I.E pulling fucking swords and other blades outta nowhere)?
3631540 maybe... I still haven't gotten all of the particulars worked yet about the balance part of the story. I have many different ideas in my head to choose from for everypony.
I really love this story. It should be interesting to see where you have the other temples located and what challenges they will present.
3767818 Glad to hear you are still liking it.
I have several ideas about the other temples already. I will have some problems with making the challenges varied, apart from the individual challenges each of the mane six will face to find their "balance", but this is part of the fun.
I won't go into detail here, but some of the other temples will take the ponies beyond Equestria!
Also it will be a little bit until the next temple expedition... But I think (or hope) people will like what happens before then.
The writing seems a little amateurish in places, but overall I quite like it so far.
It does occur to me that canon Naruto (or in this case Naruko) always did exhibit an attitude that fits right in in Equestria. His 'defeat means friendship' ability to smack sense into people, and his belief that 'if an ideal and the world conflict, the world is wrong' really fit in in Equestria far better than they ever did in the Elemental Nations.
I always enjoy it when this updates. I like the victory party and the explanation of why Naruko and Fluttershy weren't there for the Ursa Minor. Twilight's responses to Spike about Trixie were a good touch, as was her desire to learn fūinjutsu.
I am interested in seeing what happens to Trixie, as her personality felt less...abrasive than in canon.
While the chapter is a filler it lays good groundwork for issues that will need to be worked on; Rarity being able to ignore biting remarks if she is going to deal with the ponies of Canterlot, Rainbow Dash learning not to insult a third of Equestria and Applejack needing to be less confrontational.
4333583 I'm glad to hear you enjoy the story. I know it was filler but it was needed. There are the points you made about the characters. I also kind of sneaked in a possible tidbit about the story's secondary plot. If people don't figure it out now they will by the next chapter.
As for Trixie, I do have plans for her in this story. Her personality changes were meant to come off like the seem to have. I feel they are more expansion upon her character using a possible interpretation of her in my opinion.
I'm glad you liked the victory party. I was a little concerned about it. I still think I might have stretched it too much, but what is done is done. On to writing the next chapter!
4333648 I will be looking forward to the next chapter then. Hopefully it won't be 5 months until then, even though the wait would be worth it. The party might have been a little stretched but it works and doesn't hurt the story.
On rereading this story I have to say that given recent events in the manga, comparing Celestia and Ōtsutsuki Hagoromo (The Sage of Six Paths) is not far off.
***Spoilers for chapter 670+ in Naruto***
Both saved their worlds from an extremely powerful opponent (Discord / the Jūbi) with the aid of their sibling (Luna / Hagoromo's twin brother), they both desire peace for their world and both lost family to darkness (Luna / Hagoromo's first son). And both have ties to celestial bodies (controls the Sun / created the Moon).
Sweet an update, an I know I probably have said this before but I cant wait for the next chapter to come out.
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4335714 Glad you're excited. Unfortunately I am not too far into the next chapter, but I will get on it soon enough.
Minato Namikaze*
Why is Celestia acting so arrogant? "Sup bitches, I'm Celestia, come suck my dick."