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Lets give this a looksee, shall we?
-Mis
I came for the dark souls, and I got the dark souls. Nicely written as well!
I wonder if Sparkle's magic counts as Sorcery or Miracles? Probably a bit of both.
Elite knight armor, Astora's straight sword, and I'm going to guess one of the kite shields. Good set up that... Still loving my Artorias greatshield.
liked it but you know, everyone uses the elite knight set. i would love to see a story where the dark souls character uses giants armor or havels
I shall keep an eye on this.
2636731 You never know ;]
Everything talks in Dark Souls. Even mushrooms. I doubt he would be surprised.
Well, that was pretty dern good I tell you what, instead of the Knight going to Equestria, Twilight goes.... and he gets invaded right after meeting her.
Was half expecting the invader to be in Giant's armor with the father's mask and a Chaos two-hander.
Finally! More Dark Souls!!
Thanks
So, the knight stabbed the fucker and stole his humanity eh?
dark souls and mlp? exactly what the doc ordered!
i was waiting for something like that since joining this fandom
Ying!
Gwynevere vs Celestia.
Amazing chest ahead.
Silly Twilight, now is the time for some jolly cooperation.
2636731 The knight's set is so iconic though!
Oh what a world we live in when a DS player wants to see something besides our trademark armor!
I tried hamming up that last line, how'd I do?
In honesty, I haven't read enough DS fics to see the trend you say is happening. Though I have seen a Naruto cross where he took on the Thief set (or, at least I think it was the thief set...
).
Dark Souls fic, and it looks good?
Praise the Sun! \o/ I look forward to more good writing from you!
Just a bit of editing: You put a comma after every piece of dialog. This is almost correct. Replace whatever punctuation you put inside the quotations with a comma is a "said" tag comes right after, unless the punctuation is an exclamation or question mark. In that case, simply remove it. Behold:
Last nitpick; you don't have to have Twilight go "AHH!" if you're going to say she screamed immediately after. Pick one or the other, it saves room.
Other than that, the chosen undead now has a purple mount!
2656427Thanks a lot for the help !
One minor problem i have with this.
You cannot be invaded inside Firelink, and i would love to see Twilights reaction to a giant armor, mask of the father, chaos Zweihander wielding ganker invading them over and over again just to be destroyed by the Knight every time.
Oh and could it be that this Knight is Oscar? The one you meet at the beginning and who gives you the estus Flask? Because he got around quite a bit before hollowing in the Asylum and after you send him back as a hollow to his own world wandering into Darkroot garden where you find his armor.
2661028I am aware of the fact that people cannot be invaded in Firelink, a very small amount of the world will be changed to make the story work IE : invasion locations, but the lore will be the same. The identity of the Knight will come in the next chapter.
The story has been updated to a mature rating due to gore.
In the first line it says "a grown escapes her lips" Should it be groan? I am just guessing. Also the story is amazing, I was hoping for a really good Dark souls cross-over.
2668375 I see no problem with that, and you make describing the ruined Burg seem easy.
2668495Fixed
2668505thx
MOAR!
Pretty good!
Noticed this mess up though
Sain should be sane...
Very Good!
I expect some sexy Tarkus in the future.
And welcome to the cosmetics department.
Should be debt.
Well shoot, that sure was nice, Twilight can barely absorb the damage from a beginner hollow and already she's breathing heavily... this shall be quite difficult, especially seeing as how she isn't undead, only
her companionship with Aston and the estus will keep her alive.
A CLIFF HANGER!
More editing from your local rock formation:
'Shan't' is used incorrectly here. It's 'shall not'. Here, he's saying he won't hear of it in the future, which makes no sense.
I think you meant 'sane'.
And 'liar' here.
Considering his reaction to it, I wonder if Twilight will ever use her magic that way on anyone else?
hmmmmm.................................... you have my attention.
Can't wait to see more, liking this one.
I love the pacing of this story. MOAR!
2801179thanks lol
D: I demand another chapter! Really want to see how this plays out.
I have to ask this question.
Solaire.
Will he appear at any point? Why do I ask? Because I am one hell of a Sunbro
2801325Yep
2801330
Yes, This has fulfilled my need of Jolly Co-operation.
THIS IS THE PART WHERE TWILIGHT FALLS DOWN AND BLEEDS TO DEATH! Either that or she completely obliterates the demon with her magic.
2801397 Not a Twi-fan I take it?
Love Dark Souls.
I was kinda hoping that the skeleton of whoever it was they found initially would come to life and the story would take place in Equestria so that all the ponies we know and love would have an opportunity to interact with it, but this is cool too. Although why doesn't Twilight just levitate every enemy off a ledge? Or just burn them with her levitation? Should be easier than aiming the most useless weapon in the game, especially since she could just envelop them in her magic and not even lift them and they'd probably burn still.
Oh also, too bad the dude already explained the undeadness, it woulda been a cool moment if he "died" and then reappeared and THEN had to explain it all to a panicking Twi...
The more I read this the more I want to get dark souls.
2801649 Nah, I like her, I just like to use that "Part where you, fall down and bleed to death" quote, heard it alot in Oblivion, so it stuck.
I have a question.
Will Iron Tarkus and other summons/invaders make an appearance?
2804151Yep
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You did a good job explaining the Story of Dark Souls .
But for someone who hasn't played Dark Souls you should detail the enviroment a bit more .
Other than that it's alright