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Yes!
Short with not much to read and several grammatical errors...
But yes

1784594 I don't quite like evil humans... but I will follow this just in case.
I'm warning you! the dislike bar is hanging over your head!
....I'm just joking, but seriously. not all humans are evil.

You got 2 out of 3 right bud, lets get this right :D

1788736 he might not be evil! We have not been given enough info to judge that yet.

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Evil is just a perception, just as Good.
You could be doing something Good, but it can be viewed as Evil for other's
There is no Good side or Bad side and there never will.
/endvadphilosophy

1799328 ....Umm with that logic, the world would be in chaos. Discord is proud of you.

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Please
Discord is my bitch, that I keep on a leash.

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Also it completely makes sense to me so either I have higher conciousness or I explained it wrong

1799742 Not gonna say I'm right and you're wrong, but you seriously need to consider the fact that me and my belief of true right and wrong, your belief of no good/bad, and Bob's belief of potatoes could ALL be wrong.

As for me though, I think that there is a good and a bad. if there wasn't any true line and everyone believed that- where is the need to do the things that are called "Right"?
There would be chaos, disharmony, catastrophe, you name it. There would be no internet for us to debate this over. There would be no morals that our country was based on. a country could not survive- nor even start with no foundation. Morals are the foundation upon which we build our country, whether the morals are good or bad depends upon the people founding it. But there still is a definite good or bad, whether others percieve it as good or bad is up to them. But no matter the perception it remains the same truth.

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First off, Bob is a douchebag and we do not talk about Bob.
And second off, that's what I wanted to say/write/type. But I couldn't persuade myself.
But you are right. Somewhat.
I could go with an example, but the only one I can find can be a bit sensitive for some. So I will just say that there are Unique situation's for an exact definition.

But as I said, I have higher consciousness and all of this is irrelevant to the state of this universe. Now go kid.
Go pay some taxes

Awww yeah, cant wait till the next chap though
keep up the good work mang

Nice chapter.

However these new chapters have a lot less words and detail. I don't think that you described what the room Celestia looks like, which is confusing as she can look around.

If this is because you are rushing it because of personal problems or school then take a break. We won't tear your head off. Maybe.

Excellent I have been waiting for part 3. This pleases me.

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Oh damn it, I knew that I've forgotten to read a story.
Well, there's only one thing left to say after this chapter....
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Awesome update ! I love your stories.

I love this so much but its so small

Nanomachines can effectively make someone immortal. By keeping a digital copy of your Genes, they can reconstruct damaged ones based off of the template they have.

WOW, just WOW. I love this version of equestria.

I wonder how the mane six will react to this knowledge.

1842767 A number of people have commented on the subject of the length of the chapters. Due to the way this story will play out, the individual chapters will be shorter, normally around 2K each, but there will be more of them.

awesome story, I figured that I'd ask something

how far has humanity expanded (percentage of the milky way)?

Very nice I really enjoy how this is playing out. I do have a question as well. It is pretty much a more extended version of auraravager's. I have no idea if you are familiar with Halo lore whatsoever, but civilizations in that universe are categorized by tiers. Here is a link to how it works: http://halo.wikia.com/wiki/Technological_Achievement_Tiers

What you would want to look at is 1 and 0. So would you say that they are between 1 and 0 or maybe even entirely 0. If you could answer that for me it would paint a picture of the extent of their power for me.

Also since 10,000 years have passed in reality and her existence in the Equestria reality has been less then that, how did they achieve that. Did they just bend time in the alternate reality or did they just replay it over and over? Additionally how would Twilight and all the others that are not as old work into that?

1843798 When computers can run thousands of times faster than the human brain and you can directly immerse someone in a virtual reality it should be trivial to adjust the subjective passage of time.

1843798>>1844342 The subject of time will be addressed in the next chapter.

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Damn I had to do a double ttake three when I saw that title.i got a story with the exact same name

“Why are they so.... volent.” She asked, her..... memories still fresh in her mind.

Should be violent, other than that this is awesome :yay:

That is the scariest thing I've seen all morning.

How can simply snapping a human's neck in this world kill them? I mean you'd think repairing that level of damage would be nothing to nano technology. At the extent we've seen short of a huge explosion that vaporizes them or a weapon designed to fry those nanobots I don't see how you could kill these guys.

1849126 the nervous shock.
It is the most effectively way to kill. it causes all nerve cells connected to the shocked nerve cell to shot down. and you will be brain death in less then tenth second and it is (at least now) to us unknown if it is even possible to resurrect a being after a nervous shock, till now mankind don't know how..

P.S. also like always a great work, extremely good balanced and the humans seem to be like there should be after such long time of existence,.. perhaps still too naive for such an old race, and so old beings. (no offense)
... but how should one even be truly be able to manage that... so really good work.

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Yes but we don't know how to cure or fix a lot of things, like how to cure cancer or other genetic problems. To a type 2 civilization something like rebuilding damaged nerves, growing a new arm or leg, and curing cancer by rewriting DNA would be nothing to them. Though I can also understand that a civil war between beings that really can't die unless under extreme circumstances wouldn't be that interesting to write or read about either.

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To a type 2 civilization something like rebuilding damaged nerves,

you misunderstand, a nervous shock don't damage the nerves it just cause them to stop working. And, not we aren't able to cure this, we don't have the slightest clue how it even should be possible, based on what we know, a resurrection of a being with died because of a nervous shock is just impossible, you can only keep the body alive, even the Brain isn't damaged it just don't works anymore, and will not response to any stimulation.

Though I can also understand that a civil war between beings that really can't die unless under extreme circumstances wouldn't be that interesting to write or read about either.

aw... well i have experimented with this kind of a scenario in the past, to be honest it is pretty interresting to imagine how two nearly immortal warriors try to kill each other... but it is extremely time consuming and need even more description. you can easily write 30 DinA4 pages only to describe a fight of just 90 seconds,

P.S. btw. say guys is the DIN a known term in the world?
(DIN Deutsche Industrie Normen / German Industrialist Norms)

P.P.S. correct me if I'm wrong. thank you.

Just dropping in to say that I read through all 3 stories in about a day, so moar is putting it mildly :twilightsheepish:

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again NICE work ^^ nothing to say.

*puts butter in you pockets* (buttering you up just because there is nothing to say but you deserve it!...)

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