Lets give this a looksee, shall we?

-Mis

I came for the dark souls, and I got the dark souls. Nicely written as well!

I wonder if Sparkle's magic counts as Sorcery or Miracles? Probably a bit of both.

Elite knight armor, Astora's straight sword, and I'm going to guess one of the kite shields. Good set up that... Still loving my Artorias greatshield.

liked it but you know, everyone uses the elite knight set. i would love to see a story where the dark souls character uses giants armor or havels

I shall keep an eye on this.

2636731 You never know ;]

Everything talks in Dark Souls. Even mushrooms. I doubt he would be surprised.

Well, that was pretty dern good I tell you what, instead of the Knight going to Equestria, Twilight goes.... and he gets invaded right after meeting her.
Was half expecting the invader to be in Giant's armor with the father's mask and a Chaos two-hander.

Finally! More Dark Souls!!

Thanks

So, the knight stabbed the fucker and stole his humanity eh?

dark souls and mlp? exactly what the doc ordered!

i was waiting for something like that since joining this fandom

Ying!

Gwynevere vs Celestia.

Amazing chest ahead.

Silly Twilight, now is the time for some jolly cooperation.

2636731 The knight's set is so iconic though! Oh what a world we live in when a DS player wants to see something besides our trademark armor!

I tried hamming up that last line, how'd I do?

In honesty, I haven't read enough DS fics to see the trend you say is happening. Though I have seen a Naruto cross where he took on the Thief set (or, at least I think it was the thief set...).

Dark Souls fic, and it looks good?

Praise the Sun! \o/ I look forward to more good writing from you!

Just a bit of editing: You put a comma after every piece of dialog. This is almost correct. Replace whatever punctuation you put inside the quotations with a comma is a "said" tag comes right after, unless the punctuation is an exclamation or question mark. In that case, simply remove it. Behold:

"Praise the sun!" shouted no one.
"Will you praise the sun?" no one said.
"I'm Twilight Sparkle," Solaire said.
"Good morning. I'm Princess Solaire," Celestia said.
NOT:
"I'm Solaire.", said Twilight.
"Who are you?", I said. (What you've been doing)

Last nitpick; you don't have to have Twilight go "AHH!" if you're going to say she screamed immediately after. Pick one or the other, it saves room.

Other than that, the chosen undead now has a purple mount!

2656427Thanks a lot for the help !

One minor problem i have with this.
You cannot be invaded inside Firelink, and i would love to see Twilights reaction to a giant armor, mask of the father, chaos Zweihander wielding ganker invading them over and over again just to be destroyed by the Knight every time.
Oh and could it be that this Knight is Oscar? The one you meet at the beginning and who gives you the estus Flask? Because he got around quite a bit before hollowing in the Asylum and after you send him back as a hollow to his own world wandering into Darkroot garden where you find his armor.

2661028I am aware of the fact that people cannot be invaded in Firelink, a very small amount of the world will be changed to make the story work IE : invasion locations, but the lore will be the same. The identity of the Knight will come in the next chapter.

This story needs some spell-check. I think you meant "caliber" and "plume."