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TittySparkles
TittySparkles is pretty based, writes great porn that I can rub one off to on a weekly basis, and she has no problem telling societies leftie rejects to fuck off. - Anonymous
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I will read this later
Oh, look, my little---
Gets shot.
Bravo. It was very nice, I loved it.
Eew second person
Ill give it a shot anyways I guess
Edit: glad i did
I personally love second person, but after the 100th human in Equestia story written in second person, I get quite tired of it. I have nothing against you or your writing, I just see way too many second person stories written about a human either in Equestria or with an MLP character.
What happened to the second person Pony stories where you are a pony? Now most of them are about a human.
Sorry about my rant here, I just wanted to get it off my chest because I love second person, unlike most people, but I don't like all of the human second person stories.
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I know how you feel actually. This story was kinda challenged to me to see If I could write with a human and at first I really didn't want to but wanted to try it regardless. Considering HiE is overused, I tried to go with a Pony on Earth approach.
EPIC SQUEEE CHRISSY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yeah, we always see it through the eyes of a human, I want to see a second person story written about a pony as a main character where they find a human in Equestria, a twist on the HiE stories.
I enjoyed it :) u may want to have a proofreader look it over or rereAd if because there Are multiple spelling mistakes...typos and words missing from sentences! Lol at the end chrysalis' musings reminded me of the dove real beauty commercial hehehe
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Really? I'm a bit disappointed to hear about typos because I actually had someone proof and edit this for me.
I picked out a few examples
"Bakery's" should be "Bakeries"
Uhm the part where she says "I can please have another?" Would be better "Can I please have another?" And the sentence he says after that is misworded as well....
Also leans should be jeans etc...little stuff like that :) better give your proofreader twenty lashes lol
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Oh they'll get plenty.
loved it! please continue! 25.media.tumblr.com/e803e37fb61a04ff0edacb25bc395068/tumblr_mm8bcm1KpS1rcw5bwo1_1280.png
2546169 look at my avatar and....
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Mmm. Dat plot.
I am rather hoping for a sequel to this instead of just being a one-shot, I am very much interested in seeing some more of this.
This story is quite interesting.
That all I'm gonna say.
I love it.
Snark can be such fun sometimes, and you used it to very good effect in some of the interactions between the human and Chryssie. Shows that things aren't unrealistically smooth between them, and gives just a bit more immersion into the story. And she is utterly adorable as I imagined her while reading.
On a technical note I picked up on a few words that, while not necessarily typos, didn't belong. "Noticing you only has a few left", for instance...though it gave me the mental picture of a box full of tiny, love-filled cheezburgers. And "you were trying to be a bit more consistent of her plight" is spelled correctly, but likely should be "considerate". Truthfully that second one was the only one that was enough to jar me out of my immersion in the story, and it wasn't for much at that. Which speaks volumes for how much the story can be enjoyed, grammatical snafus or not.
Consider this a watch and fave...and I confess I'd love to see how this couple's relationship might evolve over time, if it's something you'd ever consider expanding upon.
I approved, though this fic looks like it needs a sequel. The premise is there allright.
This is interesting. I wouldn't call it erotic...but definitely interesting. I think I'd prefer this be a one-shot, though. A sequel would be likely to have a sad or dark tag, could possibly end with the subjugation of the entire human race...and I'm fond enough of Chrysalis that I'd rather her getting attention be kept at "interesting" rather than her getting attention necessarily resulting in destruction.
Chryssy got some love. Love that was intended for her. And that's a nice thing. I'd just prefer that it stay a nice thing.
I think this really needs a sequel~ i would just love to see the love bud between these two!
2547378 agreed.
Chrysalis, you aren't ugly, no no. You are a thing of beauty
Why does foalcon keep on making it to the feature box...
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'Cause our fandom is doomed and has always been.
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Figured. oh well, I'ma go see if any new episodes of game of thrones is out. Just cause.
'Plausible?' Do you mean 'pliable?'
Needs to be continued. That guy could be sucked dry and not in just one way. Bone-dry!
What a nice story with a nice touch to it. I like the approach taken towards this.
This is one Doctor who beleieves this should be continued in the future.
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Oh dear Doctor, is that a pun I see?
It was a different approach which was nice. Still wondering why she is so small, the size of a cat? Least she doesn't make all those yowling noises. The story itself flowed alright, but there were still quite a large number of wrongly used words and oddly constructed sentences.
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Quite.
But there's one thing I like more than a good story. And that's a big, flashy-lighty thing. Big, flashy-lighty things have got me written all over them. Not actually, but give me time... and a crayon.
I read this just because. TEH EPIK PLOTLINE!
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[In case you were wondering, that's an actual Doctor Who quote I was using just then.]
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I suppose this wasn't copy pasted? Maybe you should pay more attention to the keyboard instead of the flashy bits. Unless of coarse, your keyboard flashes as well.
ahhhhh hell yeah fallout is the best game ever
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Was that an attempt to be serious, funny, or just plain rude?
It wouldn't be considered quoting if I didn't use the exact words used by the original speaker of said quote.
Oh, and by the way, my keyboard is neon lit and can flash, smart-ass.
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It was an attempt at being cheeky.
I will have to find what episode it is on, the word order does just not look quite right.
Well then, color me impressed. I probably would be far less productive than I am if my keyboard flashed.
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My apologies for my abrupt forwardness. Its just that every now and then, there are always those people who enjoy irritating others, and I was the recipient of a few incidents.
Have fun looking up the quote. I recommend searching for my previous counterparts who have possibly said it.
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If anything, I try to keep my encounters light hearted. Though I know tone does not carry well over such impersonal means, so I can come off as a bit of a codger.
i have to say i enjoyed it too bad its a oneshot but oh well upvote from me :)
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Completely understandable. Every once and awhile, anyone can come off as such. I myself, one of such. But let's place this taboo scenario behind us. "Water under the bridge," as one would say. Hopefully in the future, we may meet one another again under more...appealing circumstances.
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>I recommend searching for my previous counterparts who have possibly said it.
I see how it could be inconvenient to occasionally be accused of plagiarizing yourself.
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Or in the past as may be the case.
"Complete"?
Awww, I wanted to see hive chapters...
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Quite right.
Cheeky as always.
i always enjoy these oneshot stories. nice job.
followin'
Guess what I'm gonna say.
Now imagine it directed towards this fic.
*Starts to nosebleed*
Fuck
The
Fanbase
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same here.