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I respect this clop. A tip of the hat to you sir. Thank you for doing something correctly.
That was long, insightful, and you can skip over the clop if you don't want to read it. I wasn't honestly expecting it to be good. You made me genuinely surprised.
Have an a like, favorite, and an Earl:
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I suggest getting a cover picture though.
I'm apparently having sex with a changeling...awesome
Why thank you very much you two.
I would grab a pic, in fact I have one in mind, but I have no idea who the artist is and it would be rude of me to post it without knowing who drew it.
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I'm pretty sure it's fine.
i haven't found a fanfic of Chrysalis that I really enjoy until this one it's the best I've read by far great work
Thank you shadow, and sure, I guess I'll throw the pic up.
Great fic! A good read!
1683713 It's amazing isn't it
*looks at the cover pic*
Futa Chrysalis . . . I keep thinking of Futa Chrysalis
Chrysalis . . . with a dick
and I liked it
I liked it a lot
Oh and I absolutely loved this story, well done Sir Author
Thanks all!
I enjoyed this Clop quite a bit. And having it with a changeling is a twist that, in the end, played well. A few things, though.
1) I felt as though the relationship developed a bit too quickly. It seemed... "rushed", for lack of a better word.
2) I had a bit of difficulty buying into the fact that you'd randomly find an enemy of the state and help them out just like that. Add in a little pity, or make her look like she'd been through hell, and it might be a different scenario.
3) Celestia seemed to give in far too easily. If the main character had put in a good word for Chrysalis before hand, or if there had been a bit more dialogue...
Really goo. Now have a random gif.
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Artist is KP-ShadowSquirrel . As Atlas Nebula noted, was used as the cover pic of the somewhat famous "futa chrysalis and twilight sparkle have sex" series, although that doesn't preclude other stories from using it. As for this story, I'm not much for second person fics of any kind, so *shrug*
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Basically, all those happened because fic itself was rushed. I tend to get bored of things very, very quickly- so I rushed things along to keep myself interested.
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Alright, thanks. Updating.
you should make more although rushed it was in the top 3 ive read since ive been on this site tbh My Little Dashie is the best by far
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1689486 Don't worry I'll help get over that feeling
im pretty sure he got that sex scene from watching a CERTAIN clop animation done none other then tara strong herself: id be lying if i said i wasnt rather curious to know the back story of that lucky fellow in that pov. but this is absolutly......beautifull, the clop is there for a reason, but other then that, well written and lovably chararcters all around, i will be keeping tags on you. cheerio.
crap. posted the same thing again sry..
Vampiric Changelings, very well written.
Thanks everyone!
I really liked how a couple of things were handled in this story. How the human was given a sword, but then it broke. As if to say; he wasn't going to need it anyway. I like how Chrysalis suggested that she could assume the form of a normal pony, but then was caught in the library. The clop was very romantic, and I enjoy that kind of thing. I give you a like sir. Well done
1686578 That would go well with another HiE fic. Chains of Friendship I think?
Great story, one of the only clopfics ill read and proud of it.
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Thank you both for the kind words
astonishing! really well written, keep at it and you'll be famous like TAW. the sex scene could be more detailed but i sense great potential here.
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at the beggining
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from the love part all the way to the end.
nice fanfic by the way
Thanks everyone!
sequel?
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I have no clue. I tend to write in spurts so we'll see I guess?
Oh, I would love to see a sequel for this This is just to wonderful to stop writing
THIS IS DELICIOUS!
Well YOU actually wrote one of those rare fics where you can make a first person, nameless story. Those are rare.
Really good story, and I just realised why all the stories I have been seeing are clop. I filtered the clop by accident
please make a sequel. i beg of you! make a sequel! -on knees almost in tears, grasping upwards to some invisible pony's hoof-
This was a great read. More would be fun to see.
Cool story, bro
No, but seriously, cool story, I enjoyed it greatly
God fucking damnit, what is with people using the "Oh hey let me look at your brain see if your good or bad 'nd shit" It completely spoils every story for me. :l
But its a clop-fic so I think I can overlook it. :P
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Lol, I've always seen it as 'if you have the power of a god fucking use it'.
Loved it. Would like to see a sequel because this by far is the best clopfic I've read
well, good job Rarity, cause of death: embarrassment
Amazing story, one of my favorites
I hope there's going to be a sequel, that would be awesome
Rushed as hell, but good otherwise.
I must admit it was a good story, not bad and very well told in first person. It surprised me by the choice of the setting, but it was a story with love and I have to say not many stories I like, but well thought. This story is about the love between a human and the Queen of the Changelings and this is more a clopfic, it is a love story as well. I bow to your choice of ponies. And one more thing dmgd_mind, don't let others tell you to make a sequel, this story is yours you can go on with it if you so chose. A thank you and enjoy writing more stories from, DarkKnight.
YES!!!! HOLE PLAY!!!!! YES YES YES!!!!!! SO MUUUUCH YEEESSSS!!!!!
Sequel?
lol that ending
well id like to see a follow up or sequel but that just because i loved it
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stay classy
This was nice. Though a bit quick. I wouldnt mind a sequel either.