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ISKV


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The key to power isn't immortality, nor is it strength. It is the simple spear and the will of the soldiers that wield it. Power to force peace, and war. Power to save, and kill. The standard-issue spear of the Royal, Lunar, and Solar guards are identical, and have been identical for hundreds of years, differing slightly only in style. They were passed down from their father, and his father, and his before him. Each has a story, and the oldest have a particularly interesting tale to tell...

A thousand years ago, we fought them with sharpened sticks. As you might've predicted, we lost. No, we didn't even put a dent in their numbers. But if there's one thing we humans were always good at, it's living in caves. No pony in their right mind would ever enter a cave. Too small, too dark, too dangerous.

But to us, it was a sanctuary.

Oh how we wished for a glorious final battle where our very species would be ingrained in myth, to be spoken of as mighty warriors that would rather face death than dishonor. Unfortunately, we faded away with barely an afterthought. The princesses returned to their thrones, and the ponies to their homes. Only the oldest of texts hints to our existence. Only the oldest of dragons have drawn human blood. Only a few beings clearly remember our faces.

Let us embrace the sunlight. Let us sleep under the moon. Let us smell the fresh scent of a spring forest. It is time my brother. Whether by eagle or by dove, we will return.

Let us march. The overworld is calling.

-The Key to Power.

The events recorded here are small snippets, from journals, transcripts, interviews, etc... All focusing on the history of humans. My name is Prof. R█████████ H██████, and we will be going on a little journey down memory lane.
They're a curious race, one filled with violence and love, honesty and greed. They're a chaotic species that managed to live in harmony. My personal journey started here, in the archives of the Manehattan University. I only have snippets, so if something appears in the middle, it's there because I organize my information in chronological order.

Are you ready?

Good. Let's go.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 53 )
Comment posted by Malefactor Blue deleted Apr 18th, 2013
Comment posted by Malefactor Blue deleted Apr 18th, 2013

I'm an honest simple Guy. So all I have to say is I dig it.

Interesting so far, I wonder what modern day will be like. . .

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'Humans, Fuck Yeah!'
Basically human wanking.

2448471
Hmn... I dunno. I haven't planned that far yet.

2448484
No, that is what HFY means.
'Humanity Fuck Yeah!' is supposed to be the 'Muerica' version of showing human superiority.

2448505
Yeah, definitely know what you're talking about.

Thanks for the definition!

2452148 humanity fuck yeah...

you just happened to cite one of the most popular HFY quotes by accident?

2459727 read this to get a pic of the whole thing and an example of a few of the best threads or read this 0-media-cdn.foolz.us/ffuuka/board/tg/image/1336/86/1336864725053.jpg

this is one of my favorites. i assumed that he was at least familiar with it as the intro of second chapter was more or less a quote of a popular HFY quote.

and if TL;DR. HFY = humanity fuck yeah. the common scenario is that humanity is more or less in every way inferior to aliens/ other races. HFY (can mostly be found in the 4chan /tg/ archive) says "fuck that" and writes something where humans are better then aliens at something (war, engineering, resistance, numbers or something else) that makes us awesome.

The idea of steam as an infantry weapon is really interesting.

2461243 I have an entire folder full of HFY, with dozens of stories.

Fireless locomotives do exist albet in only industrial applications. Now, once the humans surface the best bet would be to keep the fireless locos, or convert to electric, in the tunnels for the mines and such and use coal burning conventional steam locomotives for the aboveground work.

I do love this novel idea and will be watching closely my good sir.

I like it. Nice world building.

It seems the early Humans use 1800s technology.

I wonder what "modern" Humans use? Contemporary technology? "Near future" (2020-2050)? Or far future (2100 and beyond)?

I can't give this a like. It is a fun concept but nothing is really being done. It is like trying to read the Silmarillian.

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According to the original idea, the humans will have steampunk tech. True, steampunk is interesting to me, but I've had a little trouble imagining it so I've stuck with 1800-1900/Industrial Revolution level tech.

Can't imagine them a century later. I've tried.

I find this world your building quite fascinating. Exactly what you plan to do with it eludes me but I have little doubt that I’ll enjoy it very much.

The ‘Steam Rifle’ especially caught my attention. At first I thought it would use steam pressure to fire spikes, a little like the railway gun from fallout 3. Naturally I was surprised by it when, from what I can tell, it instead used a jet of steam to cook the target alive. Of course this led me to question it’s effectiveness at range and back to the steam spike idea. Eventually I figured out, would it really be all that difficult to get it to do both? A quick flip of a switch to channel the high pressure steam between a nozzle and a barrel containing a loaded spike.

Just thought you might enjoy the idea. :twilightsmile:

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I got the idea from flamethrowers, without the flame. It will kill your target, choke any who are still alive, and it makes a nice steam cooker. Of course when they go aboveground, the spike launcher might be useful...

Anyways, thanks much!

2482214 My pleasure. :twilightsmile:

Steampunk tech has always intrigued me even if I'm more of a Sci-fi guy.

It seems like this fireless steam engine just runs off of pressurized steam loaded in from an external boiler. I'm not sure how much range something like that can have.... If you want ideas for possible advances by the time they reach the surface, maybe they could have discovered gunpowder? Gatling guns are pretty steampunk.

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Here

Says that a 60-ton locomotive @ 200 lbs. pressure can go 95 miles. The one in this story is much smaller, and is also the first in a line of many.

I'm actually not sure about gunpowder. Maybe.

2486509 That's pretty cool! But it also says that with just three freight cars, the range is reduced to 21 miles. Still pretty interesting though! Another advance might be automatons, or do you want to keep things slightly more realistic?

2490562 Well, regardless of whether you include automatons or not, mechanical computers are definitely a possibility! They existed back then, and were called, depending on exactly how they worked, difference engines, or analytical engines.

Very interesting, but also very short and featureless. If you are doing this like a diary i'd put dates or other clear defined markers, and i'd try to aim for longer chapters overall.

Interesting concept/story so far in reading though.

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It's in chronological order, but when it exactly happened is unknown. It's seeing through the eyes of someone who is reading a journal and wondering what the hell went on then.

It's a fun little project, and short chapter length is something I absolutely love, because anything over a thousand words and it would take months to write. I'm weird like that.

nice shit man, nice shit.

you know? if you where to make a group, name it after this universe you are taking your story in and give permission for people to make spin-offs...

im just saying that i really think you would get a fuck ton of members and this idea would possibly become on par with the conversion bureau or chess game of the gods

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Step 1: Finish the story.

Step 2: Make sure more than one person is behind it.

Step 3: Do it.

I think it's an ok idea, although I won't be writing anything. Reading, maybe?

Was wondering when this would update. Hope to see more soon.

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Yeah, sorry about the wait. End-of-the-year exams, graduation, paperwork, and early summer laziness were all factors.

Anyways, thanks much!

2737353
Pretty interesting, if short, story so far. When's the next update going to happen?

2832574

I have absolutely no idea. The story is built, but I'm wondering on how to tell it.

2854584

I know. I got really lazy.

Might be a good idea to redo the first chapter.

Step One - Ascension

-Cough From Darkness Cough Cough-

Nice to see this story alive and kicking.

4776892

That was totally unintentional.

But actually kind of cool that it worked out like that.

I like this! It's a very good concept, and you've handled it well. Good job ISKV, good job. Onto the next chapter!

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