Second half of the chapter is in italics.

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Thank you. Fixed.

Holy crap that was fast

Edit: Pretty decent chapter, too. I liked it :D

Well now. Didn't see that cumming.

Sweetie belle and scootaloo vs diamond tiara and silver spoon

Another very enjoyable chapter. I look forward to the next one! Not as if Tavi-Vinyl is my favourite ship or anything >.>

Loving it so far! I do hope to see Pinkie Pie come up sooner or later, I do wonder though who could she go up against...

Muh dick.

2867554 I wish Tavi can win so she can bring the high and menty DJ down to her knees, hey emper fall sometime why not her in sex.

Vinyl to win and... maybe a M/M story should be involved.

Somewhere The Rock is reading this.

Random, creative suggestions:

Mane 6 ladder match

Mane 6 vs. "The Other Mane 6" battle royale

Twilight vs. Trixie cage match, magic is allowed

It would be hard to pull off, but a "floor-is-made-of-lava" style match where pegasi have to remain flying the whole time.

Thoughts?

oo Vinyl is gonna get creamed I mean

I guess this is what happens when Discord wins, gets bored, and can't troll anyone anymore.

How about Luna and Celestia have a match against the mane six

Luna vs. Celestia
Trixie vs. Twilight
Cadence vs. Alicorn Twilight
Shining Armor vs. Big Mac

Can I beg for Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust?

I'm totally awesome and up with all this, but...can you not make it sound so painful on Discord's victims? it makes me cringe if Sweetie Belle can't breathe because of Discord's Psychotic desires...geh....

So now we see how mind broken Rarity really is. Finding her sister as a cock sheathe for Discord, she not only says anything against it, she even offers to join in on the fun. Makes me wonder how good old 'Discy' was able to subdue her so completely.

Also, Vinyl against Octavia? Let's hope there will be a few music oriented jabs in there (like the infamous 'dropped the bass' line) and another good match. Though please don't copy the first fight more than necessary. Just noticing this but what about Pegasi? You introduced us to four fighters yet and at least 'one in training' but there was no pegasus amongst them. Coincidence?

And last but not least, ideas for match-ups. How about Iron Will versus Big Mac? I'm not too fond of male on male pairings but I think that both contestants could dish out crazy amounts of physical strength and endurance both.
Another idea would be Discorded Fluttershy versus Pinkie Pie (any version). Pinkies incredible amount of energy makes her a fearsome opponent to any mare or stallion she chooses, but a mean Fluttershy who never holds back in fear of being too aggressive? Could make an explosive match up in my oppinion.
And last but not least, Garble versus Steven Magnet (or possibly Gilda). This match-up, like the oncoming battle of the two musicians, would be a battle of clashing ways of life or in Gildas case which race is better in bed. (How about a fight between Dash and Gilda )

Roid Rage vs. Rainbow Dash
Thunderlane vs. Derpy
Discord vs. Celestia
Shining Armor vs. Sombra
Chrysalis vs. Iron Will

VS

Gendeer Bender Spike VS Rarity.

Spike VS Rarity

Spike will see his love of his life is Discord it by Discord and brake his heart too.

Lot of IKEA Erotica/bland description and run-on sentences (what I call "stage directions"--he did X, she did Y, etc). Also, I know it's kinda the point, but the characters are so OOC it's really hard to get into it. Those three issues together prevented my fap attempts.

PINKAMENA VS. FACTORY DASH Kinks:BDSM(probably too much)
okay lets get real here:
Luna vs Celestia
Lyra vs. Bonbon
Derpy vs. Time Turner
Kicker vs. Flitter
and for the MANE ATTRACTION
Filly Twilight vs. Twilight vs. Twilicorn vs. Human Twilight
and the winner will face Flash Sentry(i highly doubt Filly twilight WILL BE defeated)

I'm almost tempted to just tell you to drop this story and make one about how Discord was able to break down all the ponies into his sex slaves.

Seriously seeing Rarity like that probably made me harder than anything else.

Want more whats going on

Update?

Hey it's been over three years mate. What's going on?

Please update