Bhuna, Cheesy, Judge and Dermo are four "humans" who have been alive for a very, very very long time. They have been through some of life's most enduring trials but have remained friends. However, what will happen when they are sent to Equestria. Will they have fun or go more insane than they already (technically) are?
(IF YOU ARE HAVING MAJOR ISSUES READING SOME OF THE WORDS THEN JUST SAY SO. IF I GET TOO MANY PEOPLE SAYING THEY CANT UNDERSTAND THE WRITING I'LL CHANGE IT!)
This is great! It gets to the point where I am at the point of spewing with laughter. Kepep up the good work
THANKS BRO2338986
I Was Hesitating On The Last Three Chapters (But I'm Still Reading It ) And The Hesitation Was Blown Away By The One-Shot
Wait.....Are They Scottish?
EIGHT TITTIES
Yesuesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyeyseyesyeseysyeysey
2368182 Yes they are
Getting good bra. KISSY FACE
Good
Good
2372529 Thanks mate
2373409 *In Mr.Burns Voice*
Excellent
What Can They Say,They're Death-defyingly Cute
2390020 Ummm who is it you speak of kind sir
2390704 Is Dermo Clutching His Heart Because Of Cuteness?
Or Sadness?
2390715 Cuteness. Because Rarity is crying
YEEESSS
Let The Name Memorization COMMENCE
2430557 Indeed
2430690 Quite
Quite
And Then,In The Shadows Of The Tank.....A Tall Bi-Pedal With A Purple Suit And Green Hair Emerged From The Shadow,Due To The Radiation Produced By The Tank,The Shadow Acted As A Temporary Portal Of Sorts,And The Bi-Pedal Kept Hiding In The Shadows Of The Tank,Smiling Wickedly At The Devious Plan That He Conjured Up In His Head."Better Wait 'Till I Know What This Tank Is For,Then......I'll Bring Out The Party Favors".
He Patted His Pocket,Which Is Larger On The Inside,And He Got Out His Trusty Knife.He Killed,Skinned ,Stabbed,Decapitated,Slitted,Knocked Out,And Tortured Many Victims With This Knife.He Walked Up To The Trees To Do A Little Spying To The Creatures That Lived In This World.He Also Knew There Were An Abundance Of Feminine Voices He Heard And Also Some Masculine Ones.
He Sneaked Up On A Nearby Bush And Was Fake Surprised To See A Bear Hiding Behind It."Oh Bother,This Teddy's As Huge As A.......Bear AHAHAHAHAHA!I'll Make Sure Bats Will Get You As A Housewarming Gift,If I Do Come Back That Is."He Then Grinned Widely And Took Out His Knife And Started Slashing The Massive Mammal.The Animal,In Turn,Lashed Out On Him,But To No Avail,The Bi-Pedal Figure Has Slashed The Beast Too Many Times And The Blood Loss Has Caused The Bear To Go Unconscious,"Still Sleepy? Maybe This'll Wake You Up!"He Then Stabbed The Bear 57 Times In The Chest And Now Skinned The Bear,Leaving A Mass Of Muscle On The Ground."I'm Missing Bats Already,Let's See What The Animal Right's In This Place Will Say About This".
He Then Left The Area Where He Left The Muscle Of The Bear While Still Carrying It's Furry Skin While Humming A Happy Tune..........Then A Butter Colored Equine Trotted Into The Are The Bi-Pedal Was Leaving From.......
2460794
Well That Was A Fairly Interesting Tidbit............
2466972 Why whatever do you mean?
2467021 Nothing
2467036
Theron Guards
Sorry About This But I'd Personally Just Get Either Organization XIII Or Some Nobodies...But Hey,That's Just Me
2476098 Yo Theron Guards are bad ass. Also remember, these Theron Guards are Black Theron Guards. Elite Theron Guards.
2476110 And Organization XIII Have Black Cloaks,While Regular Nobodies Are Just White With Black Linings...I'd Personally Pick The Dusks,Samurai's,Dancer's,Etc. And I Have Demyx With Me So HAHA,
2476234 Post a comment if you know or understand this.
2476358 I Understand DIS
2476361 Good
2476449 Yeah
i like it... some of it was hard to read but i figured it out, every last part
I think you did the whole introduction to the humans a bit to quickly and made twilight and dash trust them to soon plus with all the excitement they wouldn't have heard shy. that is what i think
things are going a bit fast now
sorry about all the complaints... but don't you think they would have known that the humans were under control when they stepped out of the CARIGE... and again with my bad spelling
that one was good and i liked it you little pervert
booga booga that was good
2479297 Good points all. However I don't see Dash as stupid. I don't think she would get into a fight with something that is three times her size and made of metal.
2479422 I'm sorry. It's my first story!
2479445 I don't know anymore.
2479492 Pervert!
2479722 Thanks!
Fortune favors those that survive a Man with no history of anger's fury
While those that get angry on a daily basis...not so much
2552299........True.........
2784778Well then. Wait no longer good sir!
Fucking awesome keep it up and tell sean I said hi
i thought cheesy had skin noww
FDAHECK YEAAAAA
2831741 It acts like a hologram. He can turn it off and on when he wants.