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Book III
Everything looks to be going well for Dusk. He has great friends, a good life and a mare he would give his heart to. It seems like, after all of this happiness, nothing could possibly go wrong and things can only get better.
But as he learns, things have to get worse before they get better. And they do, for after a thousand years trapped in stone, Discord is freed from his entrapment, to reign chaos over Equestria once more.
The only one not connected the Elements of Harmony, Dusk ends up being left behind for his own safety, seemingly useless in the fight. But that changes when Princess Luna sends him into the Everfree Forest, searching for something that might help them. Can he find this strange artifact, if it even exists? What exactly is it? What is this prophecy about?
Discord also starts to take an interest in him and soon, through the spirit's magic, Dusk must face his greatest challenge yet, an enemy thought to be non-existent: his darker side, created by the spirit of chaos.
Can Dusk survive and discover his destiny or will his darker self take over forever?
Cover again by the great Quillin Words. Thanks man!

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 127 )

Yay! Unity is up! I love Dusk so much. :pinkiehappy:

Oh, this looks promising. Um, good job and I'm looking forward to the next chapters... :yay:

Up vote and fav without even reading it. :pinkiehappy:
Now to go read it. :yay:

Alright! Got me thinking of all these new ideas for the cover!

:facehoof:Would the people who downvoted it please explain themselves. It might improve the story if the writer learns what he could have done better.

Well, I already gave the reasons I like the story on Fanfiction.net so I am not going to repeat myselfi.imgur.com/5JXsL.png

*Ooh learn to vector with GIMP, Let's if we can become best friends i.imgur.com/ZsI8b.png and lets make a vector of Dusk and his...jade eyed friend..i.imgur.com/z2R9A.png *

Comment posted by kyubbiman deleted Mar 30th, 2013

HELLLOOO ALPH! I know I've read this before on Fanficiton but I never did leave a review and now seems to be a good time to rectify that mistake. Honestly, reading this again is just as exciting as reading it the first time. It also allows me to see anything that I may have missed the first time around. Congrats on all of your success; you've definitely earned it!

2249954 Thanks kyubbi, but even though you have, can I urge others not to read ahead. I don't want to sound mean, but I just don't want you ruining the experience for yourselves. I'm especially proud of this one and I'd like to hear what you all think about what I do with it. Plus, it renders my posting it on here kind of pointless. It's nice to get some fresh perspective for this story and I update daily, so... please, stick with me? :fluttercry:

The draconequus was staring at him with a curious expression and perhaps a hint of... fear?

Something that even the embodiment of Chaos fears? :rainbowhuh:

Aside from a few errors here and there, it was wonderful. Loved these two chapters, and I'll admit, the part with BD toying with Twilight and her friends actually made my skin crawl, especially the part with the cupcakes. :twilightoops:

Dang cliffies! Why do you keep doing that to me?! :applecry:

Very clever idea, bringing in the other characters like that. Kind of surprised me, but I'm assuming the stones have something to do with the artifact Luna was talking about. Am I right? :pinkiehappy:

Yay! Double updates all the way across the interwebs! :pinkiehappy:

I see you've quoted Optimus Prime! :D

YESH!!!! First comment!

anyway i shall edit this and say what i think when i've read it:twilightblush:

Well, thanks for making me feel helpless....perhaps I'll make a fan chapter with my OC coming to help. He WAS a sniper in the Equestrian Marine Corp, after all.......

So Dusk and Rarity are like Sherlock Home and Watson?:pinkiegasp: That is kind of cool when you think about it :pinkiehappy:

DISCORD!!! I hate you like heck you will pay
:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Use chaos against chaos maybe, if you had discords powers use
Discords powers against himself by showing him lies and
Torment him to cruel truths and maybe...a darker side

"As will I!" Blackhole screamed and punched him again. "You see now how weak you are?" SMACK! "You flinch at pain, I revel in it." CRASH! "You suppress anger, I let it flow through me." CRASH! "You cower in darkness, I embrace it." WHACK! "You hide from your rage but... I AM RAGE!"

Its like what I see in movies when the enemy is winning and he is talking about him or something like that and the good guy is getting beaten then the good guy beats the bad guy after, Its kinda like that

Dang, that was EPIC! Almost done, I can feel it! I cannot wait. :pinkiehappy:

OMG! Cutie Mark change! :D So I wasn't the only guy who came up with that idea! You sir, are a genius! This chapter was great.

And DAYUM. Pinkie Pie be scary! :pinkiecrazy:

Pinkie Pie with a gatling party cannon? :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

THE SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn cliffies! LET ME KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! D:

Wow. Talk about a climax man. DAYUM.

Come on, man! Why the cliffies?Z :twilightangry2:

7th Element. Calling it.

"That's the hard part over."
:facehoof: Damn it Dusk...

It's things like this that lead me to believe that Discord isn't 'reformed'.

I've never gotten to say this before...
FIRST!!

OMG! I be so jelly....or more specifically, my OC Quillin is jelly.

I've always been of the mindset that if Celestia has her own student, so should Luna.

To be fair, and whatnot.

The conversation at the end is just too adorable :heart:

SO. FLIPPING. CUUUUTE! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I can't handle it right now, I am literally spinning on my chair as I'm typing this! Thank you thank you thank you for not spoiling their moment again! AGGHHH! MY HEART JUST EXPLODED!!!

On a side note, loved the cameo by the Doctor. :twilightsmile:

Yay, back to reading :)
I like the HP movie quote btw. Seems aptly fitting for the senecio

"I must say you're certainly… smaller than I expected."

Weither you intended it or not, that line is from something, and it's bugging me that I can't remember what!

You write really fast im having a hard time keeping up
:twilightoops:

HELL YES THERE'S ANOTHER BOOK COMING OUT!!!!

Yes! I have just finished Book 3 and man, oh man was it great! I absolutely look forward to Book 4 and I will begin to read it soon. Until my next post, see ya later! :pinkiehappy:





~ Super-Brony12

2393374 I want to say it's something from Halo 4, though I may be wrong.

Live long and prosper indeed! Love your stories, love your references, your characters seem real, and you don't leave any loose ends. To me, at least, you qualify as a master. Keep doing what you do!

manoeuvrable... you have a word error here just for you to know
(reading this to catch up xD)

Wish I were in the battle with my group :/

"Where did you find… this strength?" Blackhole growled.
"I'm not… about to tell you!"

Ah, final fantasy. Good times

Pinkie making explosives? I LOVE IT!

To the Bat-Ca- uh, library.
I love how she almost said batcave

Hmm ..... Dusk hiding stuff from twilight and twilight kissed dusk ? ....... Some pony has some talking to do:ajbemused:

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