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This was a cute story, it seemed a bit rushed at some points, but over all it was a good story. I must say I don't like humanized stories, but this one was pretty good, keep up the good work.
Thumbed Up, Following.
Quite enjoyable, a few chapters felt rushed. I think if you had mad them a bit longer this could be a big hit
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I saw this story before on another site which name actually escapes me.
But from what I saw back then was pretty good in its own right, you did a pretty good job portraying the Mane characters and I like what you did with Spike.
I wish the chapter was longer or conjoined, but still loved it :)
I guess there are some things you just shouldn't attempt to create. Looks like that potion is one of them.
The only question is whether Rarity makes store brand diapers or her own cloth ones.
Not sure if the teleport was really necessary.
Rarity you might actually have to look. Otherwise how else will you know if you put it on right?
I knew Rarity would likely mess it up.
Aw that's so sweet of you Spike.
Fluttershy's maternal instincts are kicking in I guess.
There there Rarity you'll get better with practice.
Ah poor Spike.
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See Rarity you're getting better at this already.
Those diapers sound very cool, not to mention it would be eaiser to tell if they needed to be changed or not. Seriously Rarity you should advertise those diapers as part of your new baby wear, I know they'll be a big hit.
Ah that mask sounds like another good idea. Come on Rarity think of how big a hit it will be, everyone will love it.
Oh boy time for one of those crazy adventure stories.
Hm not sure if the potion will work on the Cake Twins but I guess time will tell.
Nice try Spike.
Uh-oh!
Ah a vist from the royal couple. Well as long as they can stay away from the paparazzi they should be fine.
So the potion is working. Well better late than never.
Hm could Twilight be having issues as well or does she just want Spike to not feel bad about needing diapers?
I could totally imagine Twilight or Fluttershy having bed weting problems when they were younger.
Aw that was so nice of Cadence to do that.
That's actually a good reason for why Twilight would wear diapers. She gets so wrapped up in studying she forgets to take bathroom breaks.
Not bad but a bit short.
>>GlitchyProductions The site you're thinking of is Daily Diapers. It was posted in installments on the Story Forum.
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Yeah that's the site.
Excellent job as always. I liked your Nanny State story too.
thought the cake twins were put to sleep right before this.....
Oh...this is going to be very awkward...
Stand enough I enjoyed this...
Though I would argue with the rating...
so are the pegusi basicly just angels? If so that's pretty much what my fantasy character has for a wife,daughter and brother in law
2360434 Yeah, the way I imagine it is that earth ponies are ordinary human beings, unicorns are human beings who can cast spells, and pegasi are human beings with wings and the ability to fly.
Short and to the point. Not what most readers like--usually because of poor construction.
This is a prime example--of an exception!
Good work, but I emplore that it would be a little longer in upcoming chapters.
WAY too short... But I like how everyone is fully human--and Twilight having Spike as her little brother.
Decent flow, but chapter length is lacking somewhat.
But on a high note, you've brought some realism into this with how human everypony is.
I can just picture Rarity summon her drama couch with a snap of her fingers and flopping onto it while stating 'worst thing ever!'
Dhaww!!!!
that was just priceless!
One the one hand she did do it blindly and with magic--and mentally imagining Spike decently may have had his oriented opposite of his he actually was.
And I take back the fully human remark. I was under assumption that since both Rarity and Twilight were channeling their magic through their hands that they didn't have horns and the humanized pegasi wouldn't have their wings. Or was I right about the unicorns--no horns?
Aww! Little Spikey-Wikey being the big brother!
The twins are just adorable in this!
First we have the all-powerful INTIMA-STARE and now we got HYPNO-WINGS!
What other secret 'weapons of mass pacifacation' do you have Flutter Shy?
Let's hope Auntie Rarity and Auntie Fluttershy don't break into a fight over Spike...
Uh-oh....
Rarity might have just blown it there...
Yay!
The twins did it again!
They taught Pinkie how to be responsible, so they can teach Rarity how to be motherly.
I love that idea! And its nice that everyone is making up and being nice again!
Yeah. It'll replace the gas-masks some people wear when changing a stinky.
Personally I just hold my breath and move quickly.
Onwards!
Something tells me something went wrong with Twilight's newest experiments...
Agreed. And one detail seems off to me.
At the beginning, a drop of the fails potion was swallowed by Spike, not splashed onto his crotch. So wouldn't the potion have to be injected for any effect?
Lolz
Twilight would do that to make a point!
"Since it has been so overused I will no longer say 'I told you so'. Now I shall say 'I informed you thusly."
-Sheldon Cooper
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Ditto.
