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this is epic ......AJ next/
I'm normally not one for forced regression stories, but this wasn't bad at all. My only critique is that I felt the beginning was a little rushed between Twilight cancelling on Fluttershy and Fluttershy coming up with her plan.
Keep up the good work!
I say next should be either Pinkie Pie or Applejack. Rarity could work as well I suppose but Rainbow Dash should likely be last as I can tell she's not going to be very keen on foalsitting.
Also this wasn't bad but it seemed a bit rushed and to be honest it seemed to feel a little like Pattycakes. But now I see that you've marked this as complete. Perhaps you should post the other mane six as a sequel kind of like what I'm doing with my latest fic. Or alternatively just mark this as incomplete.
Oh look, another nutty Fluttershy fic. Where have I seen that before?
this looks like a complete story to me , and you have set as complete , if you were to continue it it'd have to continue with fluttershy going back to twi again like she said.....
2198588 *Cough* *Cough* Pattycakes *Cough*.
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It was a rhetorical question.
PLEASE MORE OF THIS TYPE! Make it... ANY OF THEM! Pinkie pie since she's... Pinkie Pie, RD cause how she is, Rarity cause of her dresses and make sure FS had made dresses for just rarity, AJ cause of the farm, and maybe coop a foalsat with mac, maybe?
Also it says complete! Fix that!
Rainbow Dash is a good target. Kind of overdone though. Rarity could be cool.
2201895 Not to mention Pinkie Pie already foalsits The Cake Twins.
Any decision on where the story will go yet?
Hey Twilight,
Windows. Smash them.
Who cares if she doesn't have magic, there's gotta be something heavy around the place to use.
I think, AJ Could need a break, too.
Well...people have different ways of relaxing.
I for one jerk off to Lolicon, pr0ns, and most types of hentai. Sometimes I just listen to rock music.
Why am I telling you this? I feel
Pinkie Pie would be too boringly predictable, can I trust you to spice it up?
Also, could you do Rainbow Dash or Rarity next?
don't forget cmc
This was a cute and funny story I like it do AJ next
Applejack, Rarity or Rainbow dash seems like a good target for fluttershy