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Tavi n Scratch


You cannot have joy without tasting despair.

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We always were kinda an unlikely couple, but I don't think I would've had it any other way. We loved each other and that was always good enough for me. And now, after she's gone, I visit her every week, bringing with me a flower and a song.

Written for a one hour Hearts and Hooves day writing challenge.

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Comments ( 23 )

A lovely little sad tale, could probably be fleshed out into a much longer story, there's potential, but I'm not complaining.
quick note:

Well if you need somewhere to stay I could get you a room to stay in at the palace, that’s where crashing.

The end there should be 'that's where I'm crashing'

p.s. It's four in the morning so my thoughts aren't very coherent.

This made me think of the break up with my girlfriend but i don't care this story is amazing keep up the awesome work /

OH MY GOD THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL :raritycry: SO GETTING IN MY FAVES BOX

2125176 You didn't hear it from me, but a longer and more thoughtful TaviScratch is in the works :raritywink:

She can hear you, Tavi! She can hear you! :raritycry:

:raritydespair: The feels.... THE FEELS!

I actually was putting off reading this because I knew the feels would hit me... ;-; Liquid feels.

Sweet Celestia, that was a most wonderful piece of work. :raritydespair:

2135071 If you saw the newest episode you mean your "liquid pride" and second OMG THIS ALMOST MADE ME CRY GOD DAMN IT THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:
thanks, i cried a bit over this.
:pinkiesad2:. go octavia.

Eeyup. I cried a bit.:fluttercry:

beautifully written i was captivated,it was a heart wrenching story :fluttercry:

:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2: it's amazing beatiful work :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

it's amazing beatiful work :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:

Brilliant. Shocking how this reminds me of my own story, The Letter, but hey, great mind think alike, I guess... Or something. :ajsleepy:
Anyway, very very evocative. Have a fave and a thumbs up. :heart:

.....I didn't cry......What's wrong with me?

2496559 Either your a heartless bastard or your supper dehydrated. Or there is something clogging your tear glands.

WAHAHHAHHA:raritycry: Vinyl... Died......how could you...

It bugs me when people say "Pon three." I'm glad someone finally got the DJ's name right. It is indeed "Pony." I mean, come ON, does anyone pronounce it Dead maw five? Don't answer that. But still. :twilightsmile:

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