2nd person fic
You are a pony that has found a job working on the one and only Sweet Apple Acres. You have been happily working on the fields and playing what you play best, the guitar. You always love those classic songs, pop, and even country, anything to do with acoustics. One day you work the hardest you will ever work, the Apple family reunion, the apple family makes you work till you drop, but you don't mind one sort bit, you gaze upon looking at every family member of the Apple family, but one mare spots you and she goes wild when it comes to strings.
This story contains anthropomorphised ponies (aka humanized ponies)
cover art belongs to atryl on deviantart
Chapters (7)
Yay... First fav... Either way, the idea is awesome, though the writing could use a tiny bit of work... It's nothing big and by no means makes it unreadable... Mostly just niggly little things that annoy me and probably me alone.
this is a good story can't wait for more
im interested go on.
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(sugarcutie? come on AJ really!
Good story so far but I feel AJ is a bit oc. Though i guess her continued effort could be chalked up as her being stubborn.
this is great. keep it up!
followin'
2078058Arigato Gozaimasu
(It's japanese btw)
you... how could you not love applejack
well i's an interesting story
very awesome story.
Giggidy
2078218Why do you think Fiddlesticks is the cover? I mean what were you expecting?
2078748Thanks for pointing out that spelling error.
am i the only one who notices that i dont give a buck about granny's watch?
wow, she works fast.
very nice thou. would a Ménage à trois be out of the question?
2078769no problem just doin my job as an active reader like a boss
Rainbow: still not as awesome as me though.
Rainchaser: course not dashie, that woud be impossible
Rainbow: you know it!
Yay this fic good really good makes me smile like pinkie pie.
2084991Arigato Gozaimasu
Oh my goodness, One of my inspirations favorite my story
.....okay first off, i like the story. It's nice to see fiddlestick getting some love. And i like how babs is her sister, nice touch. and the bloody mare cracked me up and how we proved our pride by drinking 3.
but the problem for me is that it's moving too fast for me. they literally met the day before and she loves him now and he loves her. maybe it's just me but i kinda feel like its rushing.
but i do like it so i'm gonna keep reading.
2087125Well, one I want to get this thing out of my head as soon as possible so I can work on my other stories.
two, I suck at making things longer (No pun intended)
and three, I can't help it.
2091028What?
It should have gone further man oh well good fic.
2091395Just like I told sweetapplejacker, i wanted to get this out of my head to I can continue on with my other stories.
...over already? daww. great story, dude!
2092102might write an extra chapter.
...granny died.
But then "i" found the poket watch that i thought "i" did't give a buck about.
BUT I WAS LISTENING TO THIS WHEN I READ IT!!
4 years for permission? Thats long, did they keep her in dungeon or something?
Here's a link to a song I would have played.
Here Comes the Sun Acoustic
Oh my god! Thanks for the song! Some students performed this in my school a few days ago and I made a note to find out the song but never did. Wonderful coincidence. Great story too! Lived well over my expectations so far.
2233958Thank you.
Very nice
Nicely done
Anthro is not humanized, so your description is confusing.
2244169 I agree why people keep using human tag when the protagonist is a pony?
2078072 Anthro and Humanized is not the same
this is anthro
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i.imgur.com/6zmkL.jpg
an this is humanized
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2390181
Thank you. I really do not get how some think that anthro and humanized is the same. Knighty just needs to make an anthro tag already.
Has Fiddles? Is added to group
2393306wat?
I think what you're asking is why Fiddlestick's isn't in the characters slots.
1. is because they don't have her as a character.
2. I used other character because of the first reason.
3. and because well... I don't know
2393365They need a Fiddlesticks character tab--slot
I had to put Octavia and "other" in both my Fiddlesticks stories, and will have to again for the next. She's growing in popularity since that Apple Family Reunion episode--Knighty, we demand a character tag soon!
But seriously, I added the story to my group dedicated to her (under Fiddlesticks and my own name I gave to her (Country Fiddle) before she appeared again in season three... yeah...
), hope you don't mind
. There are all the stories of her my humble group has found in there.
I haven't read your story yet, but I will!
And Congrats on writing a story about Her
EDIT: I really like your avatar!!!
2393408Thanks
Loving your fan fic so fare. Love that green day song. It makes me think about my life so fare.
2397916I love that song too, it's my favorite, more than dub step. It will be until the end of the entire world, pony universe, ecetera ecetera
Good Story. I wish it was longer though oh well. Thanks for the great story.
2398269Hey at least I made a bonus chapter didn't I?
2398590 You did but I wanted to know what happen next. Like did they get married or what not. But this is your fan fic. So can do what you want.
2078879ME TOO!
Besides all the grammatical errors, this is a very good story! Thumbs up!
FUCK YOU LOLOLOL. Not really with the fuck you that is not serious you almost got me in trouble because of my laughing. Are you crying? No it's just liquid pride. That cracked me up.
3558219
....................what?
Prequel maybe?