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Onyxfire408


Hi, I'm just someone who just writes for fun. Don't expect great stories from me, or a lot of productivity. I'm also a Samurai if you've seen me at Babscon.

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Snow day, an experimental hybrid of a unicorn and a windigo is being sent by Celestia to begin his new life after countless years of solitude and research. He acquires the powers of ice and snow as he lives and feeds on his own source. During his life in Ponyville he finds somepony he somewhat likes but cannot express his feelings. All he can express with is snow.

Cover art belongs to Bronynumbah1 on Deviantart.com

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 51 )

"What what is you....name..."

"Wait, what's your....name..?"
:twilightsmile:

Ok which one sound better?
What is your name?
What's your name?

See most people write what is your name and it sound too.... Robotic I guess and doesn't really flow that well, especially with a character like Dash. :twilightsmile:

Other than that great story and and also great ending :rainbowkiss: kill off you character in the first chapter awesome I know that hasn't been done before :trollestia: (joking, this is pretty good)

Y'know it's strange, it starts o randomly snow today and, like, two hours later there's like four new stories about a snowy theme (two with Rainbow Dash :rainbowkiss:)

:facehoof: stupid CMC
(I can't help thinking your OC is kind of a Mary Sue)

2126897 a really over powered OC :rainbowkiss:
E.g. Having the. Power defeat armies without taking a scratch
Or being more powerful than Celestia, Luna and the Elements of Harmony combined

2125392 I never said that he was strong (strength) he just as the powers of ice, (like jack frost from the Guardians movie)

I didn't say he was a Mary Sue I just said he's kinda a Mary Sue
totally different

Why do i forsee Cutie Mark Crusaders Popsciles in the future? Or mabey an ice bed? Perhaps all is frozen save for their "special" places :rainbowwild:

2131420Y'know there will be CMC popsicles, just not in a way you expect.:raritywink:

2131594
What can i say? Im have selective foresight on alot of things. since i some how KNEW there were going to be some kind of Popcicle Cutie Mark Crusaders

2146419you already said that:rainbowhuh:

2146069:facehoof: why? You can't be first IM FIRST :pinkiecrazy:

Also I like tis chapter :rainbowkiss:

2146069 :ajbemused: Really.... :facehoof:Serously... :ajsleepy: Im Dissapointed in you :/

2146682 GOSHDARNET!!!!!!! IT.DOESNT.MATTER!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
Incopetent dunkophs!
(but rlly the first thing is just gonna get you hated on -_- and Rainbow87Dash i care for you more than the other guy so yeah :/)

P.P.S. When i saw what twilight was reacing a turned around got out of my chair and did this to a small table (ノಥДಥ)ノ┻━┻

2151790 sorry I got pissed off at the other guy for doing it so I tried to piss him off and /)

2151796 If you wanna know where she got the book, read my other story, Her knight in Dark Armor, that will help.

:rainbowkiss: :derpytongue2: :ajsmug: :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile: AMAZING CHAPTER :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug: :derpytongue2: :rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by Onyxfire408 deleted Feb 21st, 2013
Comment posted by Rainbow Song deleted Feb 21st, 2013

2157308 :ajbemused: shows what you know meany pants :ajbemused:

Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!

:fluttercry: awww i didn't want that story to end so fast :fluttercry:
:twilightsmile: I love this story alot and can't wait for some of your other storys :twilightsmile:

Short and Sweet.

AWESOME ENDING (INCLUDING WHOLE STORY):pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::twilightsheepish::heart:

This should be made into an actual animated video! I'm not a animator so see if you can find someone else

2322124Uh.... there's a reason why my favorite pony is Fluttershy....I'm...shy to ask anyone :fluttershbad::fluttercry::fluttershysad:

Scoots isn't purple she's orange you inclent FOOL:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Do you think you could make a sequel to this where it takes place sometime after this? Your choice to do it or not.

2477508Well it hasn't really occured to me yet and I most likely won't because I don't really have the inspiration to do so and I'm already working on two stories including this one and 2 new stories. So alot is plaguing my mind.:facehoof:

2350581
The tail was purple...

In the Artical you said Snow Drop So I"m like who is that a Twin or something:rainbowhuh::rainbowhuh:

Oooooooooh shiiiiiiiiiiyut

what was the gossip i have to know.:fluttercry: :please

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