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Onyxfire408


Hi, I'm just someone who just writes for fun. Don't expect great stories from me, or a lot of productivity. I'm also a Samurai if you've seen me at Babscon.

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It's not everyday you meet the perfect mare, Whiplash, a cowpony from Dodge Junction has competed in the Equrestia Rodeo in Canterlot. There he faced stallions, bulls, and even clowns...ugh. But there he faced the mare of his dreams, a hard working, southern talking, all beautiful orange earth pony mare. Whiplash is skilled in only one respect, he is extremely lethal and dangerous when it comes to his bull whip. But why is he smiling every time, even in defeat? And why does he always carry such a dangerous whip?

Cover art belongs to Reikomuffin on Deviantart.com

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 20 )

Equestria: Where everypony is beautiful and the mares are always horny.

...That being said, this is quite alright for a quirky romance fic.

this very good i will have to see where this is going:pinkiehappy:

Damn you school you have never done anything good well there was sleeping in class but that's it o there was the cute girls ok now that's it no still something... Oh yeah I passed all of high school with out even doing most of the crap they wanted me to do ahh high school why you so easy.

"Yes, AJ," spoke Big Bag.

Who's Big Bag? :derpyderp2:

2186371Crap lemme fix that.

lol great chapter im really starting to like this story:pinkiehappy:

Suicide ......... Woow

you could waited a bit with the whole suicide thing. other than that great chapter

so sad :pinkiesad2: nyt sø good:pinkiehappy: and Are:pinkiesad2: + :pinkiehappy: = :pinkiesmtile: so
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: yay for you :scootangel:

Epic dawww moment on this chapter:pinkiehappy: but you may want to find a good proofreader and expand your vocabulary:facehoof:

LET THE FANART BEGIN!!!
(I always say that on a story with one of the mane 6 X OC)

Comment posted by Darkflare deleted May 1st, 2013

(Singsong voice) DRAMAAAA.

Ya know, I always thought of whiplash as Indiana Jones.

This
IS
GREAT.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

I stand up and begin to applaud this history after finish... Great job!

From your friend of Brazil

Allec Fox

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