This story is based on the Aviators hit song Applebuckin'. A new colt comes into town, a little confrontation at first. AJ takes the colt in and cleans him up and invites him for a job on the farm. He accepts, but only for work, or so he plans. As the summer progresses, AJ and this colt find there's more than just the summer sun giving off heat. Will these two lovers admit to each other how they feel or will both stubborn ponies break before they even begin?
(Link for the song.)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EeLY4KB838s
Chapters (7)
Yes, just, yes.
This is quite the marvelous. :3
will read later.
this is interesting
I LOVE IT!
someone who manages to crack AJ's hard shell, and make her have felings for him/her
wonder what he does in order to make her admit it 
Oh god, this ll get fun
no mater what i think AJ's reaction would be; didn't see that one comming
wel, set to read later, and waiting you to finish it. i hate getting hooked on gerat unfinished stories
i reward you with one AJ for creativity:
Cowboy Song - Thin Lizzy
Good story, but there are quite a few grammar errors. Maybe get someone with a fine-tooth comb to proofread the next chapters.
785076
, i'm a bit tardy with writing the Prologue to my story 
I think i'll agree with you
And if i were asked, i would also fix all the grammar errors at my best
But, i'm not the one whom are writing this, so i'm not the one to decide things about this story...
Well, i got to go now
And i really, Really hope the Author of this fanfic reads his comments
Later! :D
I'm actually crying...
this is just... this is just... so...
beautiful....
mearly=merely
"tell us about yerself."="Tell us about yerself."
Just being a grammar nazi, is all.
I like the story; it goes so well with the song. I think you gots it.
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layk=lake (first time)
layk=like (second time (I assume that it would be ok for this one time.)
I sighed time to start another fire.=Wut?
Dark.
That's just dark.
785076 Already on it.
bees(as she said)=bees (as she said)
Blahman2816, I think what thebigT125 meant is: In Co-Operation with the Author...
Not just spamming the comments with spell corrections
785324
1. Just trying to help a little, is all.
2. I don't know how you replied to me without having a link to the comment I made. That's just scary.
It's a start, but riddled with spelling mistakes that drive focus off the setting. A spelling mistake here or there is unavoidable for even the best writers, but more than a few make it hard for the reader to keep up with the pace of the story. Here are what I found in the first chapter:
Apple Jack = Applejack
Bystandard = Bystander
Begining = Beginning
This towns generosity = this town's generosity
Did the math that was next year = did the math, AND that was next year
Agap = Agape
I see that this one = I saw that this one
Vountry = I'm guessing you meant country since v and c are next to each other on the keyboard
There afternoon chores = their afternoon chores
Solice = solace
There are also several cases in the story where sentences need a comma or two to either break up the thoughts, or connect them with the following sentence. Best advice I can give here is read your story aloud, and if you paused during a sentence, you probably need a comma.
You've got the hardest parts down. The concept and setting are established well enough, and all it needs is some time and planning. Good luck with the story.
Other than the grammar errors this was veeerrrry cheesy like... ugg, just so cheesy. Nothing wrong with that but y'know.
Little fast moving don't you think ?? Might be an idea to drag it out more, add in scenery other than the apple farm and such
This fic........................................................
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ANOTHER CHAPTER!
Not bad, good concept, but the several spelling errors hurt its potential, as well as it feels a bit rushed. I suggest you rewrite this so that there's more content to it.
Oh no!!! Grammar is NAHTZEE ( I Know That's Not How Its Spelled)
I find this confuzling
I find this confuzling
please?
785147yes i do read my comments and i was acctually really surprised that this story got popular so fast most of the other ones i have didn't do this over night....
but hay you guyz obviously love a good aj shipping this is acctually based on Aviators song Applebuckin' if you've heard the song you'll recognize a lot of the lyrics. BTW i have an editor i just don't want to bother him he's got a big project but if you want to work on editng this story in the meantime just pm me. Don't overwork youself tho, i'm sure you have other work to finnish
785178thanks raibow scratch
785385i appreciate the help blam but max is right i'd prefer a proofreader I work on a lot of fics and i work a lot too so i don't have much time to reread myown fics lol i have an editor but ya i'm lookin' for a temp
Ok so it seems like everybrony want another chapter so I'll add the last one tonight when I get off work. Just a spoiler aler it doesn't end happy! And it isn't the last chapter! BWAHAHA!
784915
well how can i say no to a face like that...
ok so there it is the longest chapter in this story butI HAVE to tell you guys this because its soo friggen funny. At the begining of writing the secong paragraph i was like five words into it listining to my groovshark (my brony music playlist titled Octavia) and what should come on but the very song this story is based on. I swear I stopped and started lauging.
That was just funny, goes to show you that I was really ment to write this huh? lol
myown music is trying to set my mood for the fic
Y U SO GOOD?
790653lol glad u like it i was actually a nonofficial writer and poet about 4 years before i became a brony
final chapter will be added tonight after i get off work for now i gotta get some sleep dont worry guyz aj is fine
i wouldnt hurt my favorite pony thats why i made this ILAJ
791004 Fluttershy looks like a butterscotch color to me
and as much as I hate an overused fluttermac not everybrony has read my Shytime story so couldn't exactly do that...sides Sprinters not in this story... or in the Apple Family! whatever ppl say shes lemon yellow others say shes just yellow pale yellow WHATEVER!! shes butterscotch to me!
So, he wants to get a heart apple to fix her leg? How cute!
I like the story. But you should fix some grammar and re-read your stuff before posting. Finnish are people from Finland while finish is to end something you started.
793532 no hes not looking for a heart apple if ya read the begining adn end of most of the chapters the only time HE'S looking is after she tells him AJ is the one still looking because she's still thinking about Exiz. And i don't wanna bother my proofreader right now he's got a big project working on Will of Fire if you think i'm good you gatta check his out WAY better!!!
the shipfics about one of the mane six wit an OC are rare at best... assuming they are all lesbians
wrong just wrong but this fic is awesome, though i still feel it kind of rushed
Can't hold still... must see end...
793804 ok rainbow scratch here ya go im finnishing up the last chapter right now and WHOO dawgie is it gunna be a doosie!
I just... received a piece of heaven... So...beautiful... can't take it...
796369 many manly tears were shed today ANYWAYZ time to do some DARK work BWAHAHA! gotta work on the second installment of my Whyspers in Equestrai trilogy!
What is this... tear like substance that flooded my keyboard? What have you done to me?
i will say one thing..... that was a masterpiece!
Why does it still say incomplete?
Many not-so-manly tears were shed. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD TELL ME YOU'RE PLANNING A SEQUEL!!
I love this
797116I havent changed it
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797300 uhh... no im not sorry but i will be making another shipping after "demise" for luna and an oc if you lovelovelove my ships you should check out my story shy time it has(obviously) Fluttershy with an oc and its already been edited so there ya go.
797091 glad you like it(although as the author i still am not satisfied with the results, then again i never am
Finally! I was waiting for the actual romance!