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Emperor Pilaf wishes Goku away with the Dragonballs. He finds himself in the land of Equestria, where a pegasus named Fluttershy takes him in. How will the residents of Ponyville react to the young Saiyan?

NOTE: Chapters 5 and onward are Edited by VunderGuy

DOUBLE NOTE: This story was formerly known as 'Goku in Equestria', though I've noticed that there are also two other stories with the exact same title lol.

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ogm dragenbal z & my litel poni is so orignal crosovre XDDD pls rite more!!!!!!!!!!!1

well, i thought that Dragonball was all about IT'S OVER 9000 and IT'S NOT EVEN MY FINAL FORM AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NOW I LOOK LIKE A BLONDE PINEAPPLE, not some wishing stones, expandable poles, flying clouds and monkey boys.
or probably that was Dragonball Z.

i know nothing about original story, but it looks ok. i wonder why do i feel that Goku is totally "stupid, but muscular and cheerful" type?

1969997

Because Goku IS the stupid, muscular cheerful type :P

I'm using the original Dragonball manga, not Dragonball Z. This was back when it was a creative adventure series, rather than a pure action series.

1969976

Can't tell if serious, or sarcastic. I'm going to guess sarcastic. :rainbowhuh:

Thanks for the read regardless.

not to bad a start dude

1970005
well, i think original Dragonball manga was more kid-friendly than Dragonball Z. also, ponies killed manga and anime for me >_>. mostly anime, manga is still... tolerable.
and tajjetone looks like a mix of fat troll who cannot into sarcasm and illiterate kid - denizen of internets.

Just a note: Fluttershy feeds fish to her animals. Yeah..

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Haha, yeah I noticed. Personally, I always thought that was weird. She cares about pretty much any animal, so why are the poor fishies excluded? :fluttercry:

1970753 Because fish are ugly and no one cares about fish. And even from a MLP point of view, fish are pretty much as (what we would consider) mindless as in the real world.

1970763

Hmmmm, I guess nobody likes the fish. :rainbowlaugh:

1970775 You know that thing I said about the fish in Equestria being just as mindless as in the real world?

Scratch that; either Fluttershy uses her charms to lure them to their fate or fish sacrifice themselves so that other animals may feed:
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1970815

Oh dear lord :rainbowhuh:

And I thought so highly of Fluttershy too...

1970821 It's fish (with cute smiles and all, sure), get a hold of yourself. :rainbowwild:

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whoa i didn't remember this. so, sushi are confirmed as possible. now i need to check if fanon "pegasi eat fish" is true, too.

I really like where this is going and that you're using the original DB just as this one (even though that story is after the 'King Piccolo' saga)..... Please continue this.

1974341

Ah dang it. Now I feel unoriginal :fluttershysad:

Oh well, at least my story is going in a different direction his is.

And don't worry, I am continuing this.

1975710 But I think it would be more interesting to have the Goku before King Piccolo.
And are you gonna introduce the nimbus to the ponies?

Ah good job starting out and I kinda understand why you didn't use old goku cause he could've just teleported his way back home. I say keep it up I'll happily read this

1975947

I've been thinking about introducing the Nimbus cloud to the ponies. I have a few ideas.

1979767 Don't see many DB/MLP fics with the nimbus. To many of the fics are from the DBZ or so far into the DB timeline that the need of the nimbus is just obsolete.... Pity, really.
But you 'have to' make it so the rule for being able to touch the nimbus-cloud, count for the pegasi too.

I can't wait for the inevitable giant monkey rampage.
How will Luna react when she finds out her moon turns goku into a monster?
I can't remember does goku know about turning into a giant ape when he sees a full moon? I can't remember when he actually finds out about that.
And I'm off to read DB while I wait for an update.
Also, I really like the story so far. Goku isn't the OP like he is in DBZ. He is the fun and adventerous kid that gets into all kinds of trouble and wacky situations.
One final question.
Are you going to do one big story or are you going to go for a more episodic adventures?

2002504

Goku knows to stay indoors because his grandpa told him a terrible monster comes out at night. Goku has no idea that the monster is actually himself.

This will start out with episodic adventures, but it will turn into a bigger story. I'm glad you enjoy :3

Hello fellow DBZ writer! Your story 'Goku in Equestria' has been added to our collection of DBZ stories in the group Equestrian Saiyans!
I hope your story goes well! I enjoyed it myself :twilightsmile:

Wow... Look at him go...:rainbowderp:

Just eating and eating...

And gotta love the happy-go-lucky attitude of Goku.
Can't wait till:
-Someone breaks a sword on his head.
-Someone tries to do something with the flying nimbus, but fail, resulting in Goku saying that they must be a bad pony.
-Starts throwing boulders (house sized) around as training.
-Use the ''tail-helicopter'' technique....
-Or when Goku suddenly have 8 arms (Hasshu-ken).
-The first time a pony sees him firing a kamahame wave.

Lets face it... Goku is the closest thing to being immortal, while still having the ability to die.

Putting on one of the original soundtracks while reading this..... priceless!

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Doesn't this tell us that Fluttershy is ok with fish getting eaten?

Lets just hope there's not a full moon tonight

I never thought I would see the day :rainbowlaugh:

2212263 Problem being that there always is a full moon in equestria every night.

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One solution, cut the tail :trollestia:

at first I thought that this was GT but meh it's still good
and Fluttershy took away Goku's dinner?! WHAT?!

I would've thought Goku was gonna eat more then that...

Haha, you did a great job with this! A lot better than I did, for sure!

At what age did goku marry chichi?

2754630 A specific age was never said, but it's safe to assume he was 17 or 18.

Nicely done. :pinkiehappy:. I like the chapter.

Yay new chapter!

i like it very well done, just like a well cooked humbuger at the out door restreat

I wonder what will happen when Goku goes Oozaru?

2847709 You'll find out eventually, I guarantee it :twilightsheepish:

2847717 Why do I get the feeling he is gonna go King Kong on the ponies?

2847723 I can see it now: Oozaru Goku is standing on top of Canterlot Mountain and the Wonderbolts are flying around him and he is trying to swat them away.

Took you a long while, but you finally made a chapter.

2754630

Like 15, or 16 or something.... I know it was during the world martial arts tournament, when he first got tall.....

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