After Goku defeated the Shadow Dragons, Shenron appears to inform the gang that the Earth must be parted from the dragonballs so as to prevent the reemergence of the Shadow Dragons. Goku, as the happy-go-lucky adventure-seeker he is, decides to join the dragon on its last voyage seeing as the Earth is safe in Vegeta's capable hands. What Goku doesn't know however is that not only is he leaving the planet, he's leaving the entire universe to a new world where the dragonballs would be treated as they were meant to, a thing of extraordinary magic and power: something to be revered. And that world is Equestria.
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TEEEEEXT BLOOOOOOCK!!!!
other than that it looks pretty good, if you play your cards right you could have a good story on your hooves.
still, I don't see any kind of conflict that Goku wouldn't be able to resolve (since he is the gary stu of the anime heroes), but still i'ma track and see how it goes
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Nice I love dragonball crossovers!
Although, seeing how this is GT Goku...what in the heck could appear in this that could get him to worry at all, still, I'm looking forward to this!
>Tom2rules In all honesty it was because the already existing dragonball crossovers such as yours that inspired me to write this in the first place.
So is Goku going to find the dragon balls and keep them safe?
Seems like they should be kept with the EOH
this won'y end well
sorry AJ you're about to lose the farm
607572 i share your feelings bro.
Woot! Very quick update!
Ah Rainbow Dash...you are going to regret those words when you come face to face with the unlimited fury that is a Saiyan's Hunger! And there is no WT prise money to help pay for it all...may god (or Kai, whatever works in this) have mercy on AppleJack.
609212 I'm actually trying to keep updates coming at a pace people can be comfortable with without me having to compromise the quality. Some may take longer than others in the future. Or maybe not depending on how fast the ball gets rolling.
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Hey thats no big deal to me. I've always been more for the quality over the timeing when it comes to fanfiction, I honestly could wait for an entire month or more if I got a good chapter in return. Take your time, its your story and when YOU feel its right, then go for it.
the farm is already doomed
So Goku is not ponified.
Tracking
611761 Honestly I don't like the idea of ponification. It's one of the main things in the fics I read that turn me away. If you're gonna introduce a foreign character to Equestria, it should be in the way it was before crossing over to Equestria.
that is so goku.
goood, next chapter please
Wait till the moon comes up
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Yeah, Luna is definitely gonna get bad publicity for this stunt.
614397 "By royal decree of princess Celestia, the full moon is now OUTLAWED"
614405>>614397 Honestly I was thinking along the lines of "Since he had to take control over himself in ape form to obtain Super Saiyan 4, the full moon would just force Goku to transform to go Super Saiyan 4." Having done so naturally, it would be something he could do with relative ease. At least that's how I figure it.
614423 that's no fun
614429 Trust me. It'll still be fun. Just not in a way that's easy to see coming.
614445 OOOO I like surprises
NOMZ!!!!!! I want a piece of ajs flank too ;D
I see a fellow Dragon ball crossover maker as arrived YAY! Welcome to the group!
622235 Thanks. Glad to be a part of it.
lolz.........
O SHIT NIGER
Damn Rarity, I know you're sophisticated, but DO NOT TALK TO GOKU LIKE THAT
Ah, awkwardness. it's not a HiE without it
nice
Enter SS4! Nice!
oke its bugging me fore a wile now ... HOW DAMN BIG ARE THE PONYS HERE!!!
637143 The ponies are what I believe to be around 4 feet tall. I didn't get any real numbers or anything but I went with the train of thought that Goku was as tall as Spike.
That's it?
That is the epic reveal of SS4?
What a cop out.
I haven't seen GT in a while, but I know that going SS4 isn't triggered by a full moon. But I could be wrong since, as I said, I haven't seen GT in a while.
638128>>638178 Goku had to control himself in giant ape form to obtain SS4 yes? That's why he just went SS4 instead of going giant ape. Since the moon would turn him into a giant ape, I went on the premise that it would force him into SS4 since he has control over ape form.
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No, I meant why was there no epic battle for the fate of existence in order to reveal this form to the ponies?
637154 O.o... now thats...uhm ...would tought that he would be a bit bigger few inches taller than spike...till s4 till in kid from or grown up???
639643 in kid form he would be as tall as Spike. remember even Pan was taller than him.
639123 because they don't know of his gary-stuness yet xD
For some reason, the complete reactions of all ponies so far has quite...accurate...even with Rarity...that was nice
. Anyway, also, you put "Carousal Boutique" instead of "Carousel Boutique" (I'm sorry for grammar nazi mode
. Besides, most of the times, there is that one time that the keyboard hates us all
). And now Twilight is in for a big surprise!
Things are about to get awkward
. Great chapter and see you on the next one!
640834 Thank you. When I was writing this, I tried to portray the ponies' personality's as accurately as I could. In fact, the main reason I took so long with that last chapter was because I was having trouble running Pinkie Pie's reaction especially (which is why Pinkie's segment was shorter) and honestly I didn't know how to correctly spell Carousel
642828 No prob!
Besides, what you did that was key to the correct reactions, was putting Goku in perfect situations that HE would get in, and that somehow, would end up being in term with the ponies' reactions. Although I do admit I thought that Rarity's reaction was a bit too much (especially because she is kinda my fav pony
)...but then I remembered that a) she can superficial in some times, sadly, and b) with Goku in kid form, she WOULD be more susceptible to confuse him with something else
. And as for Pinkie Pie, I find that odd. After all, she would be the pony that Goku would be more fitting in with...although it could be that there were so many reactions that you didn't know which to use
"I never sensed a power like this before" - Goku
I can sense a fight coming, let the Ki explosions begin!
Wait, if he will saty, does that mean he will......
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Alright, time for a little critque!
Firstly, the opening paragraph had an adequate build-up to Goku's journey to Pony land,
although, it did fall just a teeny bit.
Because I'm too lazy to continue, all I have left to say is you have my interest.
I mean, they just saw a little monkey thing turn into a big red ape thing in the span of a few minutes, plus he's and alien... atleast in thier case, shouldn't thier reaction be a little less calm and a bit more over the top?