A long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...
STAR WARS
A new discovery has been found that will shake the very foundation of the Galactic Republic. On the once undiscovered system of Equestria, the native species known only as the 'Ponii' have shown an unrivaled connection with the force. Two members of the Jedi order have been sent to negotiate with the monarchy of this species, hoping to secure them as allies for the Republic...
Little do the Jedi know, is that the evil Sith Empire is hot on their heels, and looking to obliterate the Ponii from the face of the Galaxy. Their plans are foiled, as one Ponii, the former infant Princess Luna, had been rescued from her planet's destruction...
Now, she must learn the ways of the Force under the teachings of Videl Yindect, a young Jedi Knight. Videl must teach Luna how to control the power that lays dormant inside of her, while also swaying her away from the path of vengeance...
(I realize that Star Wars crossovers aren't exactly new, though this was just an idea I had on a whim. I might continue it, depends if you guys want me to or not.)
i like this so far rather intriguing
Always liked the SWTOR timeframe. Oh yeah, is the prologue set during the Great Galactic War, the Cold War or the New Galactic War (The one in Chapter 3 and onwards.)?
5590387 Well that's an interesting question, isn't it lol. I'll be the first to admit that I'm not the leading expert on the Star Wars timeline, nor the EU, though to my understanding the Old Republic MMO takes place roughly 3000 years before the battle of Yavin, correct? Personally, I think it would be interesting to explore the timeline between those 3000 years.
(Keep in mind, I haven't reached end game Old Republic. I only have a level 37 Sith warrior :P As I said, I wrote this story on a whim)
Why did this get put in the "hard sci-fi" folder?
5590631 Oh jeez, that was my fault. I must have submitted to the wrong folder. Apologies, and fixed.
5590622 Yeah, but it's simple: Great Galactic War means during the timelines and trailers (Return, Hope and Deceived.) Cold War means the Prologue, Chapter One and much of Chapter Two (In-game. A Level 37 would be at early Chapter Two.) Second Great Galactic War means Chapter Three, Rise of the Hutt Cartel and Shadow of Revan onwards (Which the Trooper ended up kicking off,)
5591619 Ah, yes. Well I'd imagine that the prologue takes place some time after the events in the MMO. At least enough time for the Jedi to rebuild/reclaim their temple on Coruscant.
When is the next chapter ? i am loving this store and your way of writing.
I find your lack of updates disturbing.
"Master, is the unedited better than the edited?"
"No, only the more seductive, quicker path to posting."
"How do I know when my story is ready?"
"You will know, when you are at peace, and knots in your stomach you have not."
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Shouldn't be much longer ;3
good vary good .
5658681 What time period is this? I am assuming this is around Darth Revan or Lord Vitiate's time.
5707612 This story would be much closer to Vitiate's time, as Revan would have been dead for hundreds of years by this point.
I don't think I'm going to enjoy a story with a dark Celestia. This seems like it could end up a really good story but unfortunately that's just not something I enjoy reading, sorry.
Celestia taken by the Sith and Luna by the Jedi? Well, that's different than expected.
I love the idea! But, i think i would have been better to just, have celestia die along with her parents.
But all in all i really like it. Keep up the good work.
Still waiting for this story to update, hope never dies.
Please don't say this story is dead
I saw this about five six months ago and still you haven’t don any improving on it?! Please finish the story, it is too good to die!
WOOOO
But Luna is best pony.
Ooooh craaaaap Celestias evil.
Update?