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TheTalentlessPony


I make fanfiction sometimes. Just call me 'Talentless'.

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Don't get Pinkie Pie wrong; she hates Discord, and didn't mean to set him free...

...Well, it's not that she hates Discord.

She likes him.

...I mean, she likes the chocolate rain he made, but she hates the chaos.

...Um...actually, she doesn't hate the chaos; it's kinda fun really...

...Technically speaking though, she dislikes the chaos, but it's cool to-

...

...

Oh geez, what has she gotten herself into...

A DiscordXPinkie Pie ( DisPie / Pinkord ) fanfiction.

{This story voids the episode of 'Keep Calm and Flutter On'}

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 131 )

Now this is interesting. It is a really good. It has me interested, smiling and looking forward to more. I do enjoy seeing Pinkie's struggle with her thoughts. I do hope to see more. So good work. Mustache for you. :moustache:

Yikes! Who knew chaotic thought could work that way.:eeyup: me following.

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Thank you! :heart: It makes me happy that you like it!

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I'm glad that you like the idea of Pinkie's chaotic thoughts causing it. I hoped that people would find it as a good idea. :pinkiehappy:

I like it so far, there just isn't enough Pinkie X Discord around. Keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

I very much like the title, of all things. That and the description compel me to read this.
Lemme take a look...

Post-read edit:
Perhaps you're being just a tad too hard on yourself.
I don't often find stories with Pinkie Pie written in such a believably in-character fashion (bonus points for having to write her very thoughts in-character).

I think you did a fine job, and I look forward to seeing how this story progresses.

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I know, right? I looked around everywhere for DiscordXPinkie Pie and found very few fics! SO TRAGIC! :raritycry:

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If I had a nickel for every time I heard that line. :pinkiecrazy: Yes, I've been told that soooo many times before. I can't help it I suppose. :twilightsheepish:

And thank you! I take that as a high compliment!

Hmm, the game is afoot, it seems.

A very nice little story you have here. I always like a story with a bit of DiScOrD. :pinkiecrazy:

Looking great so far. I'm enjoying this a bit more then the show's version already, and you only started! Please, go on. :twilightsmile:

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...Wow.

Bravo to you good sir. *clap* *clap*

You already caught onto my plan.

...Well...you're close at least. Still though, VERY perceptive! :pinkiehappy:

Lol this is another great chapter. I do enjoy reading this. You have great grasp of Pinkie's character and a rather good Discord. I look forward to the next one.

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*sees that someone's posted a comment* Oh shoot shoot shoot. They didn't like the chapter, I just know it!

*reads your comment*...Oh...

...THANK YOOOOOU! :pinkiesad2:

awesome!!! it's short, too short for me but i LOVE the idea and chapter

I agree with PinkPearl a little. It feels short, A little cheesy as well. But I'm having so much fun here I can't call these real complains, just something I noticed. Plus the cheesiness is kinda adorable. :twilightsmile:

Wonder what the talk with Rainbow going to go? I can only a imagine. :twilightoops:

I'm sure I said this already but I'm saying it again. Please keep going! :pinkiehappy:

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It might've been a little rushed because I knew that I had something to go to when I typed it out. I finished WAY before I left, but yeah; I was still a little edgy on getting it done.

interesting, a rather good kind of interesting :pinkiesmile:. I look forward to seeing MOAR :flutterrage: from this and from you.

I like this story!
It's good!
Oh and im guessing that the chapter titles are going to spell out DisPiez, but at the same time I don't want them to because then there would only be 3 chapters left :fluttercry:

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Oooo~ So close!

Sorry, but there's only two chapters left. :fluttershysad:

It'll spell out 'DisPie'.

:raritydespair: It's happening too quick! Before I know it it's going to be ALL OVER! :raritycry:

Oh well, I am founding the ship adorable and I very well may look more into this one now. :pinkiehappy:

Can't wait 'til next cap! :yay: Or can I? :fluttercry:

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IT'S OKAY. JUST A LITTLE LONGEEEEER~ :pinkiehappy:

2622911 I'm still unsure if that's a good or bad thing? :pinkiesad2: ... :derpytongue2:

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It's a good-bad-maybe-sorta-average thing? :rainbowwild:

the whole realising their feelings for each other thing is going to be cleared up pretty quickly, its dealing with everyone's reactions that's the natural direction for something like this

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So I'm...doing okay then? ^ ^'

Awwww, how sweet of Dash to confuse the neighbors by shouting such a claim of love for Pinkie :rainbowlaugh: Still, I can't wait to see what you do from here, and Discord being confused about a cutie mark, of all things, is amusing. So, until next time, stay golden!

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Thanks! ^ ^

Also, he's not really confused about the cutie mark itself, but the fact that he doesn't have one. He had meant to give himself the cutie mark of chaos, but it wasn't there because he made himself a pony, who's cutie mark represents what their meant to do or what they strive to do. With Discord being so torn, his cutie mark could not represent chaos, as that is not his true calling.

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Only two chapters left? Aaw. :ajsleepy:
But you've been doing very well with the pacing, so I look forward to reading the final part.

What fun is there in making sense?

This is one of the most adorable shipfics I've read, and I'm a sucker for well-done romance fics. You sir(or madam) are a marvallous writer.

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Indeed. :twilightsmile:

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Awww! Thank you so much!

And I prefer the term 'young lady'. I don't think I'm quite old enough to be called 'madam'. :twilightsheepish:

You get a thumbs up and several moustachioed spikes.... If I wasn't writing this on my IPod. I do approve of this story.

Hello there! You see, I'm apart of a group called "PinkieCord" and I would really appreciate it if you joined it. This group hasn't had any activity and no stories have been poste, despite how long it's been up. It's alright if you don't, but would you please join?:fluttercry:

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Feel free to add my story to your group, but I'm not one to join groups.

I like it, ANOTHER! :flutterrage:

:pinkiegasp: your anything BUT talentless, I mean have you even read Applejacking Him Around? If I'm not mistaken you wrote that.

I think its Mr. Cake and Mrs. Cake not Mister Cake and Missis Cake but besides that its great.

You need a sequal for how Pinkie tells her friends...or will she keep it a secret and Discord only goes out as the earth pony?

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I guess I just don't hold myself or my work in very high regard.

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Well, I never did like using abbreviated words, and since Mr. and Mrs. are abbreviated words of Mister and Missis, I decided to just go with the non-abbreviated forms.

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That's for the reader to decide! :raritywink:

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