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Togashi


Just a worn out writer from a bygone age. Don't mind me, I'm just passing through.

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This was a request asked of me a week or so ago. Rather than going in my request section here, I decided to elaborate this plot and turn it into another multi chapter side project.

Hope you enjoy Sweetie's little foray into deep seeded lust.

adult sweetie bell lust after spike hmm looks neat will read

I support this shipping with all my very essence!
:moustache::heart::unsuresweetie:

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I wanted more SweetieSpike fics on FIMFiction.net.

BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR. :rainbowderp:

Really OOC, but I enjoyed this chapter's writing. ONTO the second one!

Well, lets see what we got here...

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This comment alone will make me read this now....eventually...

Oh jeez. How far into the future is this happening again? Middle school age?

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Sweetie is implied to be entering puberty/estrus, so you can use your imagination to reach whatever conclusion you like. She is still referred to as a foal in this story, merely meaning 'not an adult'.

I will certainly have to check this out! *added to read later* Sounds intriguing! :twilightsmile:

YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! is what came to mind when I saw this. :pinkiehappy:

:Edit: Please don't stop Faved

... DAFUQ DID I READ FOR THE FIRST FEW LINES??? I LOVE THIS DARKER SIDE!!!!:pinkiehappy:

So Sweetie is just wanting Spike to plow her and is completely obsessed with him. Ooookaaaaayyyyyy.

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I see you on all the stories I like... coincidence? I think NOT!
I... fucking... LOVE... this story.
Like, seriously. More than Doctor Who, and that's saying a LOT.
Faved, never stop or :pinkiecrazy: will be knocking on your door with cookie dough.

How disturbing, I barley read the first few paragraphs....:pinkiesick:

How disturbing, I like sweetie belle, she's my favorite filly. But this just makes her look horrible...:moustache:

Thanks for ensuring that dragon/pony relationships are guaranteed to work out, Scootaloo.

It would've been hilarious if the scale had fallen out on her way out of the library and she grabbed it in her mouth and ran. Twilight would still be sitting there staring.

One thing:

:pinkiesick: Ugh. Twilight, why did you make me read this?

:twilightblush: Uh, because... it's... um...

:pinkiegasp: Blargh!

:twilightoops: Pinkie... did you just vomit on my hoof?

:trixieshiftleft: What's going on in here?

:pinkiesad2: Sorry Twilight.

:twilightangry2: Pinkie!

you have my attention. Continue.

I would like, but it's already at 69.

And that's just perfect. :pinkiehappy:

good story you should continue it or sequal it

FIRST!!!:pinkiehappy: Heheh, I've all ways wanted to do that, But enough of that, Onto this new chapter! :twilightblush::derpytongue2:

Late night updates for a well written late night fic, good work! :moustache:

Crazy Psyco Bitch? Hell's Yeah

KILL RARITY KILL RARITY!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::pinkiecrazy:

and now begins the downward decent into madness.

Kill...kill... Rarity doesn't deserve Spike

hmmm.... things are really getting interesting with this story. I approve.

:unsuresweetie:, if you kill :raritywink:, then I send:pinkiecrazy: after you.
No doubt about it.

Is it some sort of family trait to fight with scales? I just remembered the scene with Steven Magnet.

Anyway, can't wait for more. :unsuresweetie: :moustache::heart::raritywink:

Like the darker characters.

Excellent. Cannot wait to read more. So long as Sweetie gets to fuck her dragon, I don't care what happens to Rarity. :heart:

It started off with some harmless obsessive clop and now I have a feeling things are about to get......dark. Please, do go on.

Yeah! Oncoming gore and stuff... * Rubs palms together*

1526587 i almost shat myself when i saw that.:ajbemused:

the godamned

its god damned

dont sweetie belle its not worth it

I'm really liking this story. You make Sweetie Belle's feelings feel so visceral. And Sweetie Belle using her tail to get a little contact and flirt a little... It's sensual, but it's pony. Clever. Hope this story doesn't turn too grimdark... but oh well :ajsmug:

“Nah, she just needs to figure it out on her own. A dragon and a pony…it’s never gonna work.”
Oh Scoots, you fail to know. In the fanfic universe anything is possible Exclamation point, Exclamation point, Exclamation point, one :pinkiecrazy:

HEY KIDS! Its the kill your family show!

:unsuresweetie: oh scoots i have to agree with CommanderRezurection

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