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Togashi
Just a worn out writer from a bygone age. Don't mind me, I'm just passing through.
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Hmmmmm....
HMMMMMMM....
MMMMM.
Well done.
Very descriptive on the clop scenes, I guess it was enjoyable.
very sweet! and very hot! but i would suggest putting the sex tag on this story.
5424778 How did I miss that?
5424990 eh, everybody makes mistakes.
Is it weird that's I'm eleven and I understood every word of this? O_O Anyway.. good story. Made me laugh
-Cassy
You had to work on Christmas? What kind of hell do you work for? I enjoyed the story though. Scoots sure had a wonderful Hearth's Warming. I hope yours was good once you got home from work.
~SolidFire
Nice and naughty.
Please note, that our winged friends' race is written as one Pegasus, two or more Pegasi. :-)
But a nice little naughty story no less!
Scootaloo's parents really should get a visit from the local authorities - looks to me as if they're very bad parents ;-)
Excellent description work! However, you could use some work with the grammar and spelling. Since I "translated" the story out of habit, though, it was a good one, for being foalcon.
5425554 Yeah, it kinda is. You're only 11. You're still a child. Honestly, you should be more focused on getting good grades, not clop.
Writing foalcon at work... PRICELESS!
5425554
You're only 11? Aren't you supposed to be at least 13 to be on here? And that's ignoring the fact you're surfing 'Mature' stuff...
Apple Bloom is two words.
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most
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This was quite an interesting fic. Kinda sad it's only a oneshot.
Nice one.
Have a up vote
5434804 Thanks, fixed these. I'm leaving Applebloom since I've seen it both ways, and I've always written it as one word.
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But in the show, and merchandise (official Hasbro) it's two words. Those who write it as one are doing so incorrectly ... I can get Applejack being one word (it's also canon) since it refers to Applejacking (freeze distilation form of hard cider). But Applebloom isn't a word. At least not in the English Language. It's two words, like in the show (I know I have on this site canonical evidence to the show having it as two, as well as the stuff from the CCG, Toy Lines, and Build a Bear. If it'd help).
5437035 Has it been spelled in the actual show? I'm simply going by the MLP Wiki and Wikipedia.
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and http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Apple_Bloom the MLPwikia has her as two words.
But yeah also her merchandise has it as two.
As does her CCG card.
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5439343 Er wait, confusing this with some other name, my apologies.
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No problems
. I got a question though. There aren't a lot of good multi-chap ScootaDash foalcons out there (well none that aren't dead), is it possible to get a continuation of this? There looks like a lot of potential with this fics set up.
5439438 Yeah I agree, most of the ScootaDash is usually single chapter. Unfortunately, this was destined to be single chapter too, and I don't have any plans of continuing it. The next project I'm going to be starting is a multi chapter story about a genetically engineered Dash type pony with the mind of a human.
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Oh noez! While that does sound like an interesting idea (genetically altered), but don't ponies have a higher intelligence than humans in the show? What with Cheerilee teaching advanced astrophysics to her elementry school students (on the black board in her class there were some formulas (proper ones too) used in astrophysics). What do you mean by a human mind though? As in she thinks she's anthro, or has human instincts in a ponies body?
5439571 Actually this topic covers things more in depth.
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/12/clopfics/thread/145196/deserving-of-a-rainbow-tag
It's along the line of the pony transformation series. Think 'blank slate' body with some hapless human's mind inserted, and then given subliminal imprinting to make them act more like Dash.
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Ah! Well on the tag part feels more OC than Dash tag. But could be interesting for people who like human/pony transformations. Is the real Dash going to show up, or only the human in a Dash suit? Regardless, best of luck to you ^_^.
5425554 U wot m8
There's a difference between "I like it" and "it was pretty good".
I like it.
That being said, the story was missing a lot of necessary stuffs.
1.) Scootaloo has only ever kissed one pony before, Apple Bloom. So, how wasn't she shocked when Dash kissed her? Has she had a crush on Dash for a while? Is it just the fact that Dash is Scootaloo's idol?
2.) I'm pretty sure it would take more than a little dirty talk to get Dash into such a state where she would rut Scootaloo without a second thought as to her age or issues of morality. While I have no doubt they'd end up together, it's still nice to explore that dynamic a bit.
Oh, well. It's porn. It doesn't need to have a fleshed-out universe with fully-developed characters. Though for me, having emotion and love involved makes the experience much more enjoyable than porn for the sake of porn.
Still, I'll give it a thumbs-up. Happy Hearth's Warming to me.
Great story, hot read for a hot night! (Literally, it's 42 Celsius at 2:56am? What's up with that?)
Thumbs up!
I almost died inside when scoots opened... Yeah...
I don't know why but dude make more of these types of fics there really good
nice i enjoyed this fic a lot since there are not a lot of scootdash fics out there
Just a bit of friendly advice.
Pegasi is the term you use for multiple winged ponies. "The pegasi were flying through the air."
Pegasus is the term you use for a single winged pony. "The pegasus suckled her mother's teat."
I didn't see it come up in the story, but another rule of thumb for Pegasus, is when using it as a title for something. You would say the pegasus Guard(s), not pegasi Guard(s). The pegasus in this is an adjective describing the type of guards, not the actual noun (guards) that is singular or plural. Again, this one is just for future reference as I didn't notice any instances of it in the story (or don't remember any, at least).
If you want more complicated rules on it as well, feel free to ask. I see the terms pegasus/pegasi misused more often than not, after all.
On an end note, though, I enjoyed the fic. It was nice.
5847614
The -us plural being -i is from Latin. The Greeks don't speak Latin. Pegasus is a Greek name. A Greek masculine name.
The correct plural is pegasoi.
May the multiple Zeoi atop the many mount Olympoi strike me down if I speak untruthfully.
5857585 Aye, but we aren't speaking Greek. We're speaking with the English adaptation of the Greek word.
Also, there was only one Pegasus back then. And it was the name of the hoers.
5859325
thus the reason I talked about Zeus and mount Olympus in plural.
Oh, my...
5434804 When you said "Apple Bloom is two words." I thought this going to be some illuminati confirmed thing.
6021370
Nope. Just pointing out that her name, is in fact spelled with two words like 99% of her family. That and Apples do bloom, but applebloom isn't a word. Unlike Applejack which is a process for making hard cider.
6022428 is no process. is drink. forgive me for my horrible grammer it is late for me.damned circadian rythm. nocturnal person is best person.
6266803
Process. Applejack comes from Jacking, or Freeze Distilling apple cider. While it's also a beverage, it's named after the process used to make it. Thus Applejack is a process for making hard cider.
And I know how it can be trying to do good grammar at ungodly hours of the morning / night (it's 6:30 AM over here and I've been up since 4:30 ... way to early when the sun's not even up. )
6266818 Close, hard cider's produced by fermentation. Freeze distillation turns hard cider into apple brandy. And don't try freeze distillation at home, kids. Unlike evaporative distillation, it doesn't get rid of the other alcohols produced alongside the tasty, tasty ethanol. Wood alcohol is not your friend, unless you aren't fond of seeing or possessing a functional liver.
6417774
Actually it is a form of hard cider, not brandy. Brandy is produced with a similar, yet vastly different methods. Brandy using a still, Applejack using fractional crystalization. The difference being, stills force impurities to be left behind, while "freeze distillation" has the impurities in the alchohol.
Even then, the difference between hard cider, and apple wine (or it's distilled form apple brandy), all depends on how its processed. But yeah, Applejack isn't Apple Brandy ... but I do agree that noone should try it at home. Unlike other forms of hard cider, those impurities are what gave it it's legendary hangovers.
Adorable.
“Well, okay. But why won’t you tell me what that is?” Scoots said, trying to get a better look at the floppy facsimile as Dash tried to hold it behind her back.
The mental image I just got is HILARIOUS
Reaching out again, she firmly grasped it,
Aaaaand THAT episode of SpongeBob is ruined for me now.
"Scoots trotted over, holding the dildo in her mouth, much to Dash’s horror." That made my day.