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When life gives you lemons, make pancakes, sprinkle on sugar and lemon, roll it up and enjoy.
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Whos the sex between?
6093603 I didn't want to take any risks on the rapes, language and there will be sections of a sexual nature later on.
Hmmm....who's the most weak and likely one to get raped?.....oh god spikes doomed XD
6098069 NO CHILD RAPE!
Pointless rape, bad grammar, stupid plot. I've lost my interest.
6099935 jeez, at least make it constructive criticism. Can't improve if you don't tell me how.
All info beyond this point is Spoilers
Anyway the plot has yet to be fully introduced, with points on: The brotherhood, Rampant, Legion and Benny
Characters will make appearances: Dean Domino, Christine, Lone wanderer and their companions, Trixie and Sweetiebelle.
Twilight will also go through more changes: Scars, Cybernetics and more
I plan for this story to be at least over 75,000 Minimum, so don't get your nickers in a twist.
And the focus isn't on the rape itself, it's on the trauma caused by the rape.
END OF SPOILERS!
I myself disagree with the term 'if you have nothing nice to say, say nothing at all' because you need some form of criticism, but try to make it constructive. you yourself are an author so you should know how helpful constructive criticism is.
(it's my first story anyway.)
Anyway, iv'e said what I wanted to say and I will leave you to your own devices.
Hmmmm... well, seems all right so far. Promising introduction. Let's see if the rest of it holds up...
Also, it's Latin, not Roman.
6110200
Yeah, need to change that. Thanks
Well, it's full of typographical errors, as well as grammatical ones. Plot-wise, shouting like that doesn't really seem like Discord's style. If you ever rewrite this story, I'd find some way to rephrase that particular bit of dialogue.
6110241 Duly noted. Thank you
The list of the Courier's accomplishments was more than a little lengthy. I ended up skipping most of it.
6111783 can't blame you, it was mostly just displaying what my playthrough was and what I did to affect the ending. A majority of them will ne mentioned throughout the story anyway.
I'll give this story a chance
Great story can't. Wait to c more
Great chapter can't wait to c what happens next
You know she kind of like me in a ways. Very crazy and does stupid things for shits and giggles. We would get along. So perfectly. Excellent chapter.
Mojave, mo' problems, amirite?
Well folks, you know what that means - it's time for some news.
New reports show that violent crime is on a sharp decline in Outer Vegas. The reports credit the decline in the population of Fiends in the area. In possibly-related news, local Chem Dealers report a large decrease in their standard of living.
Also,
A Package Courier found shot in the head outside Goodsprings has reportedly regained consciousness, and made a full recovery. Now that's a delivery service you can count on.
Well, that's all I've got for you right now. As always, stay classy, New Vegas.
Gonna play a song for you right now about a man who is cold on the exterior, but deep down, he's a good man. And his name, is Johnny Guitar.
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Wow uh that's a first I got my mind temporarily brokeded.
good job.
I was waiting for mention of Project Nevada, it's too useful of a mod to not use in a modded playthrough...
noppppeeee
Damn. twilight isn't going to hear the end of last night is she? Excellent chapter
uh did I miss somthing why does she drink blood
6290857 She was fed it while at vault 3 by rampant and she developed a craving for it.
............
*queue Rainbow Dash's major laugh moment*
*Poke*
In all reality the set up of the plot is very unique even to the point that it sound like it should be part of the mlp Lore (besides the fallout crossover of course)
I don't even
Poor Trixe
Know I want to make a character with those S.P.E.C.I.A.L. stats
I lost it at Boones sleep wear
I think so far, Twilight is adapting pretty well. She is able to rationalize her actions in a way that helps keep her balanced along with the physical anchor that is Spike.
I should start greeting people with headbutts
Will Twilight and/or Spike be badass in this story?
Aww I wanted to hear the rest of the story
Well then ,interesting chapter.
im kinda curious as to why everyones gay not that its bad just curious
6740991 Veronica and Arcade are both gay in the original game. My character was always female in that game and Willow was my favorite follower, so I always followed the romance quests. Twixie is one of my favorite ships so I was going to include that in my first story, no questions asked.
Spike, Boone and a majority of the other characters are not gay and they will either get more time or be introduced later on in the story.
P.S. A lot of my friends are somewhere on the LGBT+ spectrum, myself included (I based Red's sexuality on my own), so it's sort of a thing for me to include at least one LGB+ relationship.
Can't wait to see some familiar faces at the Sierra Madre
Plus, lets see how sane Danels is after the "field trip", I have a feeling Boone's randomness will probably make him snap
When drool attacks
When are they gonna find discords daughter?
6936121 This is going to be a relatively long fiction, I knew I said no shorter than 75k a while back, but that has changed to probably be closer to around 150k (big goals I know)
Plus it's his sister, not daughter.
6936135 Oh... Sister... Well still
I'm not surprised the Courier has a penchant for chaos.
6099935 How is this rape pointless? Its the wasteland.
I'm so used to Arcade being an antisocial, adorkable wallflower and I'm guessing Cass lives in Goodsprings.
yes she would, because your tje fucking idiot whos gonna end up killing someone someday
I know this is a bit phycopathic of me, but HA! FUCK U TIA! #WorstPrincess
Although I am really enjoying this story, I feel like Red is a bit of a Mary Sue. Almost everyone seems to like her. And she survives getting her eyes and arms gouged and cut-off while keeping a cool head. I believe this is extremely unrealistic and believe she would be either dead from the blood-loss or screaming out in pain. I hope that Red is fleshed out more and that I will eventually see her in a more realistic light. Instead of being a all-time god.