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MOER !!!!
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2392826 Someone's eager!
2392837 yes im super eager
Ok three things.
One: I feel sorry for Twilight and Rarity for invoking the warth of Pinkie.
Two: Much love for ya for giving Spike a twin set.
Three: Great Story!
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Gonna do my best to make sure the next part is thrilling. Each chapter should be 2000 words each by the way.
2392857 yay
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Thank you so much! Great things come in threes as they say.
Can't wait to see how this goes on!
I shall say this was entertaining, but I'm gonna take a guess and say that Spike's around... 17 now? Maybe 16? Fav'ing for the moment since I wanna catch updates, but I'll reserve my upvote for later.
curious to see where this goes, not bad not that good but it has my attention =D
"My virgin"
Lols! Made me think of that newgrounds animation about bronies.
At the end, batman says "My ponies". Was that intended?
Also, lots o spelling mistakes in there.
Still, while it seems rather rushed, it's pretty funny.
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I would be extremely grateful if you pointed some out.
The ending here speaks volumes of a pure and innocent, slightly naive love. I can't help but feel that Twilight and Rarity are an item, dating, it my just be for the sake of the plot but the flimsy excuse that Rarity had to leave to become Twilight's personal dress maker, while believable, would've have taken much longer to actually come about. From here we can mostly imply that Spike was going to pieces, you don't actually explain how, did he lose sleep, organize the library wrong, simply didn't want to do anything? This stuff to be considered.
This ruined it, ruined it... no thanks.
2395213 What ruined it?
You could at least tell me what I did wrong in your opinion.
2395213 please explain in a little bit more detail friend. if you think the author did something bad you should explain why. otherwise you may end up hurting the feelings of the author who is writing a story he is putting his heart into. to the author, i like what you have done i really do, but you should go back a re read the story, i couldve sworn i read someone instead of somepony in their. also why is twilight prohibiting rarity from getting togethor with spike? just a few minor things, all in all i enjoyed it. you have my upvote!
The reaction of the characters, Pinkie, Twilight specially rarity was way too out of character, this ruined it for me but it doesn't mean it's a bad story just personal preferences.
2395311 Twilight isn't prohibiting anything. She was just saying, if Rarity leaves for Ponyville, she'll need a new wardrobe designer. In other words, Rarity would be fired. I'll explain this in the next update. As for the whole someone vs somepony thing, I've fixed it. My little mistake.
2395329 Oh? this should be interesting then. and yea it happens a lot its a very minor thing though just wanted to point it out ^.^
2395317 Out of character is seldom a perspective thing. I honor yours, of course, but I must dispute it.
I asked myself, would Pinkie confront, or ignore this situation? My overall thoughts was she'd take it head on, keeping with her free personality. Rarity tried to conceal herself, but with the thought of somepony else loving Spike eventually drew her to throw a mini tantrum. I asked myself if these reactions were correct, and the answer in my head was, yes.
Let me ask you, then. How would you've done this? Pinkie just acts like it doesn't matter? Also, there needed to be drama, and this was the perfect way of bringing just that. If there was any other way for the story to lead into slow escalation, tell me about it. Otherwise, thank you for reading, commenting, rating and being honest with me. This comment isn't intended to sound rude or snobbish, but I'm sure in the eyes of many, it does.
i don't know why but i can totally picture pinkie using spike's cum instead of milk in a strawberry smoothie
2395386 I'm gonna use that.
I might be reading too much into this but it seemed that Rarity might not quit her job. Anyways, confound these ponies!!
Plotting behind Spike's back, planing to take his virginity as if it was a commodity, this got all my yes at the time, but Twilight using the flimsy excuse that Spike is her brother?! Come on man!! I'm all for the depraved and S&M direction this appears to be going in, so don't use that type of excuse in this fic!
Still this is very good horra for Pinkie standing up for Spike, boo for what Rarity fails to do, update MOAR
2395470 Updates will come daily. If I update it again today, it won't pop up in the update box, and it wouldn't get more attention. Be patient, please. On a side note, I'm not a fan of incest.
I know, I'm a horrible monster.
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WHAT?! YOU'RE NOT A FAN OF INCEST?! 
Well everyone has their own opinion, this is mainly going to be a PinkieXSpikeXRarity right? I could see Twilight being Spike's moral compass, of a sort, if she's not going to be with him romantically.
2395513 Yeah, Twilight's like that of sorts. I do plan on including a deep conversation between Twilight and Spike, but that's a while away.
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Sweet! I'm all for TwiSpike but having them in a deep conversation is sweet, simply cause you could hit on so many things between them. I can't wait to see what you do.
2395547 Glad to hear it!
OMG! Update
2395619 A Spike x Pinkie fiction with some drama thrown in for good measure.
2395603 Tomorrow, I promise.
2395708 Why not?
2395724 Perhaps, instead of yelling at me, being all accusing like, you could point some examples out? Honestly, people telling me my grammar is flawed doesn't help unless they assist me by showing where I'm going wrong. Thank you either way. I'll see who I can find.
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Desole
Sorry!! Cole tends to be a little vocal when it comes to grammar but don't take anything she says seriously. She blows up from anything, a misused comma, saying see when it should be saw, little nit picky stuff. Again apologizes I let her say what she wants but she doesn't always have something nice to say.
2395824 Cole? Sorry, but I'm a bit confused on names. Maybe if she came in here and pointed out my flaws...? Otherwise, she's not doing any good by having someone else read the story and get them to nag about errors but not help by showing anything.
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She's a little rough around the edges but a better proofreader you would never find. Like I said dont take what she said seriously I'm sure not that many people are as nit picky as her.
Yes Cole is my assistant when I write my fics, I doubt she's going to come and read this fic anytime soon.
You have my attention.
2395959 Sweet!
As a clop critic, I believe this had potential. I warn you however not to break Pinkie's character any further than this, as I don't see any alternate universe tag slapped to this fic. However if you are going with the whole pet thing where I think you are going, I will probably lose interest of it, as alternate universe fics rarely catch my attention, let alone clopfics.
2397062 The whole pet thing will prove to make sense most likely on the next update.
Certainly is a interesting project. I don't really care for the OOC that appears to be showing in, frankly because it's not a major issue. Everything is a little OOC at some point. I can deal with it.
Basically, what I'm seeing is that it's appearing to be a SpikexPinking pairing, but there is the rising action that Rarity is having second thoughts about what she did to Spike prior to leaving for Canterlot. As a result, it is completely up in the air. The only thing I see a little issue with is the complete naivete that Spike appears to be when it comes to carnal urges and anything sensual in general. But that's just me. I understand that Pinkie's there to let Spike in onthe benefits of morning wood as much as the next, but to be completely oblivous to it, is a little hard for me to believe it.
Carry on!
2397104 OOC or not, I think people will love the overall outcum!
2395227 i actually think Rarity was in character, and so was Twilight. Rarity is a shallow bitch and Twilight is pretty much Spikes mom.
2397359 Thank you! As for Pinkie, I guess she might've been a little OOC, but that's so debatable, it's funny.
2397399 well, the middle zone for pinkie's character is massive, if you consider her psychosis.
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Super happy I randomly found this fic
Don't you dare fucking stop
So...um Rare, are you sure he a turn off now since he have two dicks?
Also I'm finding this story funny for the fact Spike is a sixteen year old teenager and dosen't know about sex. Damn you Twi and Celly!
Lol the gantlet has been thrown down! I've got my money on Pinkie Pie.