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After having a dream about Big Macintosh, Sweetie Belle realizes that she's in love with the red stallion. For obvious reasons, this crush embarrasses her. So what happens when her two friends find out?

And what happens when she finds out something shocking about one of her friends?

This is by far the most RANDOM story I've ever written. A bizarre mix of comedy and emotion. At least that's what I hope this story accomplishes.

Story Inspired by the Cover Image, which is done by JoeDash: http://joedash.deviantart.com/

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Comments ( 41 )

I look forward to reading this! :twilightsmile:

I am heading to bed but i will read this tomorrow im really tired

This seems wat. I shall read.

Liked da story.
Late at night.
Too tired to say more.
:ajsleepy:

Little Sweetie Belle having a crush on Big Mac :rainbowlaugh: And the other "love" story is also very funny

I enjoyed reading this. paw sweetey bewle

I soul be going to the hospistol BUT I DONT CARE

Well, well, well. It's like you went fly hunting with honey and caught an Antagonist in your sticky little web. I shall read this..

That finishing line
:applecry:

That was truly, truly awesome. A little sudden at points, but nonetheless, fun, decently paced, and above all believable. Once again, I'll just say that was awesome.

Well written, funny, thats enough for me!

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Awesome, hope you enjoy :twilightsmile:

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Awesome, glad you guys enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowlaugh: The last line was PRICELESS!
I know! XD
:rainbowderp: I went to see the shrine scoots made of me
how was it?
:rainbowkiss: AWSOME
This story was well written don't you think
:rainbowdetermined2: I may not read anything but daring doo but I have to agree with you
:rainbowdetermined2:Well written, no errors I could see, good format, a background...
I agree. Shall I give them 5 moustache?
:rainbowdetermined2: Nah.
Why?!
:rainbowdetermined2: Make it 20% cooler! give them five heats as well
oh ok
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:

1432256 OH NOOOO its the antagonist he is going to critic us ALL!!!!
on a real note this is a excellent read, i will be waiting for you in the feature box this shall be up there shortly.

PedoMac?
Ugh, no...

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I have diagnosed you with bipolarism.

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I wish. But I think it'll take a lot more views and likes.

Still, that's my goal so I hope to reach it eventually. Thanks for the compliment. :pinkiehappy:

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Actually Big Mac isn't a pedo in this story.

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Oh, and also congrats on getting into the feature box :pinkiehappy:

Spike's gonna be SO jelly.

That ending. I like this story.

Dunno how I feel about AB's crush on Rarity...
But favorted regardless :scootangel:

I'd love to see how Big Mac and Rarity react when they find out, but hey, beggars can't be choosers. :duck: :eeyup:

1433507 Close enough

Funny story! It always seems to be funniest when Sweetie belle discovers this stuff. And the cutest! :scootangel: Great story!

So THIS is the story you sent me at 1 am at night on Google Docs....

"Oh, come on!"

this whole fic in a nutshell:unsuresweetie::eeyup:

This was great! I laughed, I cried, I laughed REALLY hard... it's cute, it's funny, and it seems reasonably in-character. Thumbs up from me!

OK. Now I'm wide awake!
First off, yes, we all know it was a filly crush that Sweetie had.
And I think Mister Macintosh handled the situation well.
Didn't expect Applebloom to have a crush on Rarity.
That could make a decent sequel. :trixieshiftright:
Pretty good story my friend!
Standing Ovation!
fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/139/e/0/lyra_clap_by_samabayon-d50ch1i.gif

At first I thought this was going to be a clop fic...and I uh...was going to rant about how bad and horrible...it...was...damnmyfilly-rapingbentmind. Anyways, I loved the story...that last line made my morning...considering that's when I read it. Favorited this...ugh...now coffee time....chow.

This story was so sickeningly cute, I loved it.
And that last line...
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Applebloom.png

xDD The ending I never expected Applebloom and Rarity

That was actually quite good, the mental of differnet age groups can be very difficult to show but here everything was pulled off just as well as you imagine it could be. The children were beliveable children and the adults were adults.
The one flaw I saw with the whole thing is most of the time the story is being told and not shown, the lead example is the bit after the first break. It's just so "x happens y happens z" happens that I found myself starting to skim.
All and all an adorable story and possibly something to keep in mind for next time.

:| Well. Let me just pull off this thumb of mine... >:C *CRACK* *points it upwards, gives it to author* ...The powers-that-be saw fit to give me a spare. *also hands you a piece of train track, a casio watch, and somepony's favorite thing* >:|

The ending was priceless :twilightsmile:

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