Twilight would love nothing more than for Rainbow to think about her the way she thinks about Rainbow.
Rainbow would love nothing more than if Twilight would just say what she'd love to hear.
Then Twilight messed up.
Bad.
A/N: Comedy? I'll tag it cause maybe...
Enjoy this odd idea.
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Well. That complicates things.
at first i thought
"okay, pretty standard twidash shipping.
-rainbow crashes in lib.
-twi and dash connect over daring do.
-twilight turns dash into a fill- wat.
took me for a bit of a loop there, lookin forward to more.
also will this be my first "first"?
Colour me interested. And this story Favorited.
Pretty good so far. I am interested to see what they do about there little dilemma.
1411336 ha ha
i was pitching this to a buddy through a typed chat and he was like "this sounds pretty standard" then i typed in the filly part and he was like "DO. IT."
Im happy to see this thing is getting a good response when i didnt take more than a few minutes to think about it ahead of time. Ill definitely keep this going for a bit
1411936 HAHA. I can so totally imagine that entire conversation... :P
"...Rainbow would love nothing more than if Twilight would just say what she'd love to hear. ..."
Next chapter plz
Surprisingly, ever so surprisingly, I have actually seen this done before.
I don't remember the title and I won't bother searching for it because I didn't like it that much anyways, but I KNOW it's out there somewhere.
1413451 *sniff* now I feel bad...d-do you like this one, though?
1413774
Don't cry on me now. I said don't cry... DON'T CRY, PLEASE!
Well, I can't tell from this intro if it'll be better or not, but as long as there's no evil ponies/griffins/gumaziwhatsits trying to kill Filly Rainbow it'll be a lot better than the other one.
I... what?
Yes.
Moar.
Arbiter
Wat r u doin?
Arbiter
Keep going.
Damn you cliffhangers!!!
Seems rushed to me.
Well, I've only ever seen one other Twidash where Dash turns filly, but it was a bit...odd.
The only things I noticed was 'threw' rather than 'through' & 'site' rather than 'sight'...
We'll see how this plays out.
Pre-reader. Use one plz.
Other than that, nice so far and looks to be an interesting plot.
I think she fealing mother love instead of love love. Can't wait to see more from you.
well, this is getting rather interesting isn't it? i look forward to seeing where you go with this.
These chapters are painfully short. But that's ok, I much prefer quality over quantity.
I'd like to read more.
Oops... unintentional pedophilia.
Rainbow x Fluttershy? Sorry, I came here for TwiDash. Fluttershy is my least favorite character. bai bai
1451184 what made you think it was rainbow x fluttershy? I dont think i implied that at all and if i did it wasnt intentional
Well that went rather well. Now onto the fun of Twilight caring for Dash. This is gonna be good.
1451373 this is what ive been looking forward to
btw the chapters may start getting longer because these were mostly just the exposition
1451893
Oh, longer chapters? This gets better by the minute.
1452050 Im flattered really
Twilight is attracted to filly Rainbow? That's... odd, but I'll still follow anyway as I'm now wondering how that will turn out.
1451184 I too must ask - where on Earth you got the idea that this was RainbowShy from?
I just read the other Filly Dash x Twilight fic from a while back. I gotta say I think this one is going in a more solid direction than that other one.
I don't find Twi's attraction all that weird to be honest though. She liked RD before she became a filly so it's not like a newfound feeling just because she's a kid. She doesn't like her because she's a kid, she likes her because she's RD. It might seem weird because she's a foal but...I dunno considering how this happened it doesn't feel any way pedophiliac to me.
That being said and going into things no one should ever, I'm excited to read the upcoming chapters.
I really am looking forward to where you take this story. I can just imagine Twilight totally going bonkers trying to deal with filly Dash. Great job!
Rarity approves this fic.
1452739>>1452360>>1452347 Still flattered... I love my readers a lot.
1452789 Great story telling needs to be complimented where it is found. To use a very overused internet meme: Inspired story is inspired
Cannot believe I just used that
I'll reserve my judgement until I read more.
Could go either way at this point...
I'll drop a watch and see where this goes.
1452897 mm I forgive you. and thank you btw
Yes, filly Dashie is very cute.
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Yes, this story is very good.
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Yes, it needs to update NAOW!
Is that... Is that cover image what I think it is?
Where on earth did you dig up my old art? hahahaha
(And no I don't mind that you used it at all)
1454575 well heres where i found it http://canterlotweekly.blogspot.com/2012/05/morning-art-roundup-again.html
"Are you my mom?"
Change that to "Are you my mummy?" and you win the internet. At least, part of it. WEELL, you win some moustaches, but still.
1457108ha a fellow doctor who fan i see.
1457108oh and....DONE!
Please don't be like that other filly Dash x Twilight fic where Princess Luna's assassins are trying to kill them.
1501196 FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! I GET IT THERE WAS ANOTHER ONE LIKE THIS! I PROMISE YOU ALL IF IT IS AS WEIRD AS IT SOUNDS, THEN THIS WILL NOT END UP THAT WAY! PLEASE STOP TELLING ME NOT TO LE- oops turned on the caps lock and went a little Karkat on you... Sorry bout that.
Anyways, like I said, if it as batshit crazy as it sounds, then this will NOT end up that way.
Sorry, this one was supposed to be longer, but it just didn't feel right to keep going past this scene.
I promise to make the next few chapters longer.
Very, very interesting. Only thing is this sentence:
Sighing, Rainbow closed the book, realizing that her own thoughts were overtaking the words on the pages in front of her. She say up, glancing at her picture of herself and her six friends.
THe word say should be something else, methinks. Sat, maybe?
1552585 oh thanks. i didnt see that
Twilight knows what she's talking about. Filly Dashie is always adorable!
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Well, normal Dashie is always adorable too!
And Twilight is so smoooooooooth. Just trying to suffocate her friend. At least she brought out a pillow as to not make Fluttershy go deaf.
Anyway, great chapter!
One thing, though:
Pretty sure "won't" should have a apostrophe.
1552920 Firstly, Thank you. Second, suffocate who? And Third, It said that "wont" without an apostrophe is correct, so I left it.
1553051
You can't always trust spell check! Wont (pronounced like want) is a somewhat archaic way of saying habit or tradition. For example: Rainbow practiced flying after finishing work, as is her wont.
Won't, on the hand, is the contraction of will not. Example: Twilight won't stop reading.
agh! gak! to! cute! need more filly dash adorableness!
Good news for Twilight. I wonder how she's gonna fix Dash though.
1553750 Y'know? I've hear that usage before. S'pose i should go fix it now...