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Sirius Starshine


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Twilight Sparkle had always loved dancing. However, she was never very good at it, so she contented herself to watch others. When she heard that Princess Luna was starting Equestria's first ever annual "Lunaris Absolvo" Dance competition she immediately wanted to enter, but remembering all of her past attempts at dancing, with her birthday party being the most recent, she realized she would be laughed out of the competition before the first song even ended. But then she found a tutor in a pony she least expected.

Credit for the cover art image goes to Furor http://furor1.deviantart.com/art/Under-the-Stars-293944012

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 34 )

will be tracking hopefully if I get free time

I like this idea of Pegasus dancing. I'm sure Twilight will love to get in on it. :twilightblush:

I'm tracking this so hard. :rainbowdetermined2:

Just realised what song Rainbow was dancing to. ALL OF MY YES!! Perfect song for this :pinkiehappy:

If I remember correctly, the artist is...Furor
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Aha! Specifically...here:twilightsmile:

You have good taste in cover images. Consider me interested. Source is here.

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I honestly did not expect anyone to remember my name. I'm flattered. Though I do prefer it without the 1 at the end. I only have it on my deviantart, because just 'furor' was already taken.

i can't wait for more :pinkiehappy: it was so good.

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Sorry bud, I'll keep that in mind:twilightblush:

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Wow I love your artwork, and I assume since your not yelling at me to take the pic down I've got your permission to use it. Thanks I appreciate it! :pinkiehappy:
Oh, and I just realized your the person who wrote "Dawn of a New Day" I love that story! :rainbowkiss:

And thanks to everyone who's given support to my story thus far! I had no idea it would get this much attention. I hope to not let anyone down with any of my future posts. :twilightsmile:

I loved it, and also the idea. Please, post moar:rainbowwild:
Great job!

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I was hoping someone would get it! :pinkiehappy:

Just a tip, don't release a story with just a prologue, have at least a first chapter to go along with it.
Looks less... "silly" that way.

Well this storys premise has piqued my interest. I am now tracking it and hope to see chapter 1 soon.

Interesting. What song was that btw

For everyone who's curious and doesn't know, the song that Rainbow is dancing to in the prologue (and serves as the initial inspiration for this story) is "Wooderson" by The Gaslight Anthem.

I am interested. Please go on Sirius

FIRST!!:trollestia::trollestia:

But actually, I do like the story. The ending of the chapter was well played out.

Keep going, dammit. :rainbowkiss:

@Sirius Starshine... Well you have a solid premise for a romance story. Hopefully this will be more of a "My Fair Lady" kind of dancing & learning story rather than "Dancing with the Stars" competition & "reality" show story ;) .

Insta-win!! And chapter title? We see what thou hast performed here :raritywink:

brilliant! simply marvelous! now, on to the next chapter!

Holy cow, I was just looking at this last night wondering if it would update soon....I should try that with all the other unfinished stories.

Horray for Twilight and Spike interaction. :twilightsmile::moustache:

Huh, I'd have expected a record thrown by Twilight's magic to slice through a whole house:rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

UGH!!! Why can't I favorite this!!??!?!!?
:flutterrage::raritycry::fluttershbad::raritydespair::fluttershyouch:

Stupid bugs...:unsuresweetie:

Edit: Okay, now it worked:raritywink:

how do you make ruby syrup?:rainbowhuh:

Damn, just update already. does it take that long for you to type?:rainbowhuh:

Okay, DUDE. At least tell us you're busy or sth. Way too long since you last updated.:flutterrage::rainbowhuh:

Is this story dead? :ajbemused:

I love this story!

Really should continue this story, it's a great start! Awesome even! :rainbowdetermined2:

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