Rainbow Dash has been waiting for years to find the pony whom she met as filly so long ago. However time changes all ponies for better, or for worse, and the stallion that she finds may not be the same as she remembers.
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Interesting story you have going on there. I'm looking forward to the next chapter when you post it.
Very good, and I can't wait for more! Keep it up
Good work mate. Keep it up.
Very good work.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
If you don't take my stars I WILL KILL YOU!
I can't hold these stars so have 5 of them.
Loving the fic, can't wait to see more!
Not bad. Spot on grammar and vocab. Storyline is great as well. Tracking.
Thanks everypony for the follows and feedback! I'm glad y'all enjoy the story so far!
Not bad not bad at all
269595 I'm watching you
Now I wish I could sleep on a cloud.
I want to keep reading! It's great
neeeext! ^^
keep up the good work
Hey sorry it's taking so long to get the next update up everypony. I've got the next chapter written just letting my editors go through it so it should be up within the next few days. Thanks for being patient with me!
an update
YES
and the story is building up well
just for future reference, dont rush
ive seen stories that build up well
then rushed the ending
yeah
kills it
but anyways, its a good read
Hey sorry the next chapter is taking so long. I've been having several other story ideas bouncing around in my head that I've been working through and filtering though everything has been a pain. However, I am still currently working on this story more than any other because I want to get this done before I become serious about any others so that I produce the best quality writing I can. Thanks again for being patient with me and I hope to get the next chapter written, proof-read, and revised within the next couple weeks.
Most people (including Hasbro) spell Pinkie Pie like that. Not Pinky Pie.
Good chapter.
I like the second song, the first one was hilarious.
Jesus what's with the bloody wait spans
@Purple Thunder Ok I fixed the spelling of her name, thanks for the heads up
YES
AND UPDATE :D
oh hoh hoh this is going to get goood
IT UPDATED!
Updates! But it clearly hasn't been proof read!
Aftermath is one word.
Can needs a capital. Sis doesn't.
Pretty sure sugarcube is usually one word when used in that context, I could be wrong. It shouldn't be capitalised.
Needs to be capitalised.
Eh should be capitalised.
Y'all is an abbreviation of 'you all', but AJ is only addressing a single pony.
Needs a full stop after later.
There should be a comma after her.
There were many more similar errors afterwards, but I stopped keeping track. Get yourself a proof reader, man!
Whoops sorry about this everyone, I have two proof-readers but I keep all the drafts from my work and I must have accidentally uploaded one of the older ones by mistake
BTW "Sis" capitalized is correct in this context because it's being used like proper name, also you are correct that y'all is grammatically you and all combined but in actual speech it is often times used to refer to a singular person as well.
Again I apologize for uploading the wrong draft the first time, I'll be sure to double check next time
Let's see what Rainbow Dash and rest of the gang finds in his dream.
Lets see and watch
"grabs popcorn"
When shalt this update?
Would this update at some point?