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Some Leech

I...I am a monument to all your sins...

Some Leech Joined 26th Jan, 2017 · Offline

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Drake Redwing
Drake Redwing #1 · February 1st · · ·
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This was awesome! Sequel when?

WubsAndCellos
WubsAndCellos #2 · February 1st · · ·
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I haven't read but this sound sultry af

Turbotune
Turbotune #3 · February 1st · · ·
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She's an Eastern style mare~
Cool performance!

Elric of Melnipony
Elric of Melnipony #4 · February 1st · · ·
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Splitting the chamber was a runway that led to a dias at the room’s center.

Should be "dais"

So without further adieu

"Adieu" means "goodbye"; "ado", however, means "trouble" (and similar words), as in Much Ado About Nothing.

Those were the only errors I spotted, and I agree with the other user who asked for a sequel.

AvoidingFever17
AvoidingFever17 #5 · February 2nd · · ·
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I was just talking about this cute mare on discord recently!

Sugar Spoon
Sugar Spoon #7 · February 4th · · ·
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Great story but The Tasty Treat is in Canterlot.

CoyoteXray
CoyoteXray #8 · 3 weeks ago · · ·
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Very interesting. Always liked Saffron, and her little experience here was both extremely kinky and yet still maintained her essential character, meaning that you could read this and actually imagine this character acting and reacting the way she did. No black magic here, just a new experience and a new perspective. Good work.

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