It was supposed to be a test, one of monumental weight that decided the future of Equestria. Sending Twilight and her friends to save the Crystal Empire. Celestia had doubts but she thought they were able to step up to the challenge.
But to her worry, she had not received a report or letter for the past two hours. What kind of heinous punishments was Twilight enduring? What vile, disastrous magic was being inflicted upon her?
Would Sombra even keep her alive?
Celestia quivered in the wake of the possible answer that Twilight was unsuccessful in defeating a true villain.
Chapters (3)
There is never enough inserts into Sombra. Please, continue this. It's so promising.
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I plan to update this quite frequently after a couple chapters of set up.
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Yesss, more socially inept Sombrero.
My phone autocorrected Sombra's name to Sombrero, and it reminded me of the one pic of Sombra with a mustache and a Sombrero. The one time autocorrect does good for me.
Exactly WHAT?!
What is this and why did I not find out about this instantly. THIS… THIS is what I call a good ****ing start. Like I want more like now. (In all seriousness I love the way this is written you take you time just promise me you’ll keep writing.
Twilight is going to have so many questions like why he wants this light show or even take over the crystal empire if he wanted to leave? I wonder how long has Sombra been possessed?
I love self inserts but I wonder where is Spike or the crystal heart?
Nice!!
Please go the route of “Sombra accidentally became a tyrant but is too socially inept to stop being one so he decided to go all in as much as he could and now he sees a pretty mare(Twilight) and decides he found a way to get out of it”
Because thats what im seeing here.
Interesting story so far, is this a reboot of your The Throw Away story maybe? I wonder why he wants to make a a fake fight with Twilight after taking over the Crystal Empire already if he wanted to lay low or not do anything Sombra related in the first place? Was the crystal Empire already under his control when he took over Sombra's body, or is it that he is a brony wants to follow the shows story? Or could it be he wanted to makes an act to be defeated buy Twilight so that he doesn't inevitably get obliterated by the Crystal Heart and act as if Twilight 'reformed' him so that he could still live and not be on the run for the rest of his dark unicorn life? Maybe he has a kink for Twilight and Celestia? I wonder what he did to Cadance and Shining armour sense they had arrived there earlier then the Mane Six, and is it bad enough that she wouldn't indulge his request?
"Would you defeat me? I'd defeat me. I'd defeat me so hard."
If this is HIE you should put the tag too author
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Hmm…
I cant seem to intercept what your words mean.
Would you defeat me? I'd defeat me.
This seems promising.
I'm gonna guess
Sombra is possessed by a human
Well, this got my attention, I look forward to what nonsense Sombrero will do next.
love sombra cant wait to see what you do with him
I like it so far. I'll definitely be keeping a close eye on this one.
Need MORE!
Alas, Sombrero learned there are two tragedies in life: not getting what you want or getting dumped by a cute mare.
Well that was unexpectedly wholesome
my attention is strongly dominated by the idea of this fic, although I have a doubt, is the original Sombra or is it us displaced pretending to be Sombra?
This story has every right to be liked,
And everything is wrong with us:D
I'm interested in this view
Absolutely love the story so far! Can’t wait for the next!
Because its funny
Yes! Redeem him
I wonder what funni shenanigans will this cause?
It started out great, and it's just getting better. Please keep going with this.
I had to check if I could like and favorite this again, I do so love "I'm stuck as something traditionally villainous and now I have to deal with it"
You think you can write Sombra (or whoever is in his body) as a nervous bumbling goof who is trying to ask Twilight out? You should know better.
Love the story though, keep it up! (At your own pace don’t force anything
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Definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
I'm gonna LIKE your story and there isn't anything you can do to stop me.
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No- NOOOOO
My favorite dead Sombra story of all time “Unfortunately, I Am the King of Equestria” is never getting updated. So I’ll lap up any good story with a similar premise.
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Never heard of it, I will look into it for research purposes.
This was unexpected, and when I say unexpected... I MEAN IT WAS COMPLETELY EXPECTED!!! (Reference to Perry the Platypus)
Damn, miss the update. Well it was nice, I think he now only seems like he need to be institutionalized as opposed to must friendship beam him to oblivion. I wonder what is his relation with crystals and why he seems to talk to him, and why does he need to put up the act for his brainwhashed slaves forces? Did Sombra actually had loyal or opportunistic willing to do his bidding and would seize and take his power for themselves, or is he just a doubleganger for Sombra being elsewhere and doing something more important in the meanwhile? I wonder what else he had done to damn himself further in Twilight's eyes? I am betting he caste Shining and Cadence in crystal or something like that.
How's it coming? I checked Fimfiction this time specifically to find out whether this updated.
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Going good! I've just been busy with real life stuff but It shouldn't be too much longer.
I enjoy writing how sweet our main protag is.
Really hope this story isn’t dead. Hope your doing well and hope you continue this story.
Next chapter will have more than 1.5k words, trust.
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Life started kicking you and didn't stop hmn?
Interesting development.
Hope your doing well dude and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Ay-yooooo! Update! Glad to see you didn't drop this, the premise is really fun.
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Awesome
do take your time though
no need to rush
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Awesome
do take your time though
no need to rush
Ayy glad to see you’re doin alright. Chapters will come when they come no need to rush it