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After Twilight's big fight and clean up of Tirek's and Discord's mess with the power of friendship Celestia is on duty to clean the rest of the hysteria. But there's something that requires her attention first... something unworldly that shouldn't have known what had happened.

A single earth pony.

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You've really gotten me hooked here as I badly wanna know more about this mysterious earth pony and just what does he plan to do next.

But what happens when we get to the series finale?

He can't predict further than that?

Then again, there are is the IDW. :pinkiecrazy:

Is this story complete or not?

Toon #4 · Dec 23rd, 2023 · · 5 ·

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The story is complete, a one shot, I am thinking of a sequel of the more lustful variety but we'll see.

Comment posted by Theprophetice deleted Dec 24th, 2023

Pretty good

I'm extremely curious what could happen next

so like.. what was the point of this story? like, okay this was a mediocre opener with very little explaination, but what is it even about? 0/10 rating. mary sue threatens celestia and she concedes, what a read. 💀 and to think this is the story that got featured on the front page LOL

Toon #9 · Dec 23rd, 2023 · · 5 ·

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I- don't think you understand what a Mary Sue is? Or atleast understand that it isn't fitting this context. The guy is an earth pony with no special qualities to be told of, that was the whole point and it was never said otherwise. The whole point was to just poke at the idea of someone knowing the future and them having a bad personality, wanting power in exchange of knowledge.

Also with the whole featured thing- You can just say "Not my cup of tea" and be done with it, you dont have to be rude and insult me whilst mocking the story. It was a concept I put out as a one-shot.

Also the term for the male variant is Gary Sue

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ah, i see. so there is no point. well, i apologize for my rudeness it was uncalled for. good day

So was the guy bluffing with the amulet

3/10
Please check your spelling and punctuations before publishing a story.
I doubt you'll appreciate any other advice because this has already made it to the box, so I'll just leave it here.

"The final line is a dead giveaway."

- random guy who wants power and is "lustful".

Given all of that information I still have no clue other than some brony or potentially some producer of the show ("before we made...an episode.").

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I don't know if he's like a Mary Sue, but Celestia gave him all kingdom too quickly and for no reason.
I've already seen a fanfic that started the same way. It ended very badly.

???: yeah no that aint happening
Lets just not let this timeline occur
And...done!
Not gonna weave that one

I don’t know why he wants the entire kingdom of equestria . That’s a lot of work and responsibility to care for an entire nation.
He’s probably going to accidentally collapse the economy and get forceful removed from the throne . Plus what’s his plan now because of his choice he effectively diverted equestria from the show so his “ future vision “ is now useless

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