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A few years ago, a rumor surfaced that I creature of tall statue and thick clothing, made himself home in a cave on top of a mountain. He would offer insight into future events in exchange for food, as a tribute to his divine knowledge and has been known as The Oracle ever since. For years he has given out knowledge sparingly, now Princess Celestia, Luna, and Cadence have made plans to visit him, but Celestia’s question might be a little risky, but curiosity is killing her.
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A lot of fun, thanks!
This story is so amazing keep up the great work!
I really enjoyed it
That was an interesting take on the brony in Equestria scenario. Could use a proof reader as there are a few grammatical errors. I do like the fact that when something deviated from the story it changed the show. While I wouldn't be a hermit in a cave, I can very much understand his moral and ethical dilemmas to knowing the possible future. Being terrified that your influence could ruin everything.
A novel idea well executed.
I enjoyed reading it.
Definitely one of the better ways to interact with a known fantasy world without deviating from the canon.
The twist where our version of Mlp is the one that Anon’s changes caused is nice touch and certainly unique.
This story slapped
That was fun.
Anyway, you should write at your own pace, you're doing it because you like to tell stories, right? I don't think you should make it a chore
Brilliant story! I love how this scenario brings up the question, “Would you change a world you already know by knowing its future?” (If that even makes any sense XD)
It’s fascinating seeing your take on something like this and gets my mind thinking, especially in different fandoms. Hopefully, you do more like this in the future. Hell, I’d be more interested in a sequel to this to see how Anon would truly adapt outside of his established knowledge on the show’s events. More or less, he’d probably go into retirement like Cele and Lulu. Anyways, I’ll say it again, brilliant story!
I really enjoyed this take on a brony in Equestria scenario and acting as an oracle to those seeking advice or to see the future.
I trust it's a good story, but I'm still in the beginning and I noticed a few things. First, introducing the backstory was done a bit awkwardly, using a bit of the 'As you know, Bob' style; and second, you keep flipping tenses around seemingly randomly. And there are just missing words, like in "The first him was when rumors".
It'd be good to fix these. Making the reader dodge potholes degrades the story.
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Yep, I’ll do a re-read and edit these minor mistakes as I go. Thank you. The urge to write for me happens when I’m tired and getting ready to go to bed, that would explain most, if not all those minor mistakes like the missing words.
The only thing I could pick at about this was how easily Celestia got over it. I expected her to say something to Luna and Cadence along the lines of 'He was right about the existential doubt and while I don't regret it, I'm going to take his advice next time' instead of 'yep, I got a satisfactory answer'.
>error in the description
This bides well for the rest, I'm sure.
By personal rule I dislike all anon fics, but this shit is good
This is the top of the featured box, huh?
Sign of the times, I guess.
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Makes me wonder if people even read their own stuff before they click publish.
This is definitely an interesting spin on a familiar take.
Really nice story, but it needs some serious copyediting.