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This story is a sequel to Rider on the Storm


Shortly after slipping out of Twilight's new school on account of it's boring lessons, the Young Six spend some quality time hanging out in the old Castle of the Two Sisters, deep in the Everfree Forest. With plenty of food provided by their friend Sandbar, they settle in for the night, swapping stories about their lives.
Unfortunately, one of Sandbar's stories involves the attack on Canterlot by the late Storm King.
This brings back some traumatic memories about Silverstream's own encounter with Anonymous - one of his commanders - during his separate attack on Mt. Aris, and how she only just barely managed to escape his clutches. And although Sandbar understands all too well what she's been through, the rest of her friends are in for quite a shock when they hear her recount the harrowing experience.


A little thing written in a few days to shake off some pretty severe writer's block, with the initial excuse of making it a Halloween special.
Takes place during the Season 8 premiere, School Daze.
Reading Rider on the Storm is strongly recommended if you want any idea about what's going on here. I'm told it's a fun read. :ajsmug:

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“Yeah, here here,” Smolder concurs. “He’s gone now. Whatever he was after, it doesn’t matter anymore.” She cracks her knuckles a bit with a toothy smile. “And if he ever does show his face again, I’ll be sure to let the Dragonlord know exactly whose tail needs a serious kicking!”

“Heh, I bet even he’d think twice about fighting dragons,” Gallus chuckles.

“Yeah, darn right he would!” she laughs.

I have a feeling you will regret saying that. :pinkiecrazy:

Anon laughing his ass off in the background be like.

“I shall return one day you fools!” Evil laughs

Heeere's Johnny!

So I'm guessing he needed the magic to return home

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I doubt he'd want to, depending on whether he keeps his Cypher abilities. If he does keep them, earth would probably end up on his shitlist for sure

Glad you had a chance to solve your writers block my dude! I was starting to love my grip with REALITY waiting for half a year for the sequel! But That's fine though, you've struggled with real life shenanigans like that storm months prior. Now I get to enjoy half-thrill half-wholesome story! Do see the potential of these one-shot chapters taking place in season 8 spread light on Anon's actions amid the characters too hear their thoughts on things. It will also give us poor readers much needed revigoration on not getting to read your works!

This brings back some traumatic memories about Silverstream's own encounter with Anonymous - one of his commanders - during his separate attack on Mt. Aris, and how she only just barely managed to escape his clutches. And although Sandbar understands all too well what she's been through, the rest of her friends are in for quite a shock when they hear her recount the harrowing experience.

Now THIS was what I was hoping for in the sequel! Anon terrorizing the normally cheery Hippogriff and make her fear him more than the Storm King! He will do it here and in the future alongside many other innocents! :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy: :pinkiecrazy:

♪ Knock-knock, open up the door, it’s real! ♪” sang a joyous and unnerving male voice she didn’t recognize, “♪ With the non-stop pop-pop from stainless steel! ♪

*squeals loudly* He returns! In a flashback at least....but still we haven't seen the most devilish of the MLP OCs in so long I'm so happy he's back! :raritycry:

“Man, I’ve gotta tell you, most of you horsebirds so far have been a solid six out of ten on the cute scale, but you? Solid eight, maybe even a nine! Just, oh,” - he gives a chef’s kiss - “Délicieux! Almost makes me feel bad about stealin’ your queen’s fancy pearl! Almost!

Anon-Kun has SOLID taste! Silverstream is either the 1st or 2nd cutest of the Young Six besides Ocellus. :rainbowkiss:

I'm still muddled weather or not Anon actually knows the show or genuinely isn't aware lol.

“Please tell me this guy was beaten,” Gallus begged out loud. “Please, please, please.

If he wasn't beaten, how would you, the school, and all your friends be here Gallus? :facehoof:

“Yeah, here here,” Smolder concurs. “He’s gone now. Whatever he was after, it doesn’t matter anymore.” She cracks her knuckles a bit with a toothy smile. “And if he ever does show his face again, I’ll be sure to let the Dragonlord know exactly whose tail needs a serious kicking!”

“Heh, I bet even he’d think twice about fighting dragons,” Gallus chuckles.

“Yeah, darn right he would!” she laughs.

*5 seconds later* Anon: Ahh! After 10,000 years, I'm free! It's time to conquer Equs! :rainbowlaugh:

Let’s goooooo!

Now this does put a smile on my face, great little snippet of another one of Anon's escapades.

“I-I, uh, found a super scary story one of my, er, weird cousins wrote,” Ocellus opened, fidgeting a bit. “It was about an evil changeling princess called Chitter that lost all her memories and became an even more evil changeling princess called, er,” - she scratches her head - “What was it again? Athleta? Atlantic? Um... W-well, anyways, it was super violent and went on for way too long, a-and I don’t remember it all too well anymore...”

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The group of six settles down a bit in their blankets, still hiding out at the place that Ocellus called the Castle of the Two Sisters.

How close is the Anon statue to that? Because Silverstream might have a bit of a heart attack if she learns she was sleeping only a little bit away from the monster that traumatized her.

Heeere’s Nonny!”

Motherfucker :facehoof: I knew exactly what he was going to do as soon as he started tearing through that door.

“And if he ever does show his face again, I’ll be sure to let the Dragonlord know exactly whose tail needs a serious kicking!”

Smolder, you might have had a point two seasons ago, but the current Dragonlord is built like a fucking twig.

“Heh, I bet even he’d think twice about fighting dragons,” Gallus chuckles.

Bold words for some within the range of a god of memes given form

D-F

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no, he just does it for the lulz - atleast, i think so

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Amusement of Ocellus fumbling aside, I have a hunch that her story is a reference to another story here on Fimfiction but I have no idea what it is or if this feeling in unintended on HK's part lol.

How close is the Anon statue to that? Because Silverstream might have a bit of a heart attack if she learns she was sleeping only a little bit away from the monster that traumatized her.

Pretty far actually. The Castle of Two Sisters is a mostly abandoned location, I don't see why the Princesses would put a dangerous overlord in such a place and not the Royal Gardens or Tartarus.

Motherfucker :facehoof: I knew exactly what he was going to do as soon as he started tearing through that door.

I got spoiled by the comments due to instinct sadly before I got the truly authentic experience :ajsleepy: but it was still funny to see Silverscreams and everygriffs reactions!

Smolder, you might have had a point two seasons ago, but the current Dragonlord is built like a fucking twig.

Think she also forgot the part where Nonny teared apart a metal door and defeated the princesses in a couple minutes? :p

I won't lie, when he first started singing, I thought his character and dialogue was gonna be unbearably cringe. But you proved me wrong, my friend. Enjoy the favorite. I'll be here if you decide to continue this.

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Bold words for some within the range of a god of memes given form

This is totally something Anon would say

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I have a hunch that her story is a reference to another story here on Fimfiction but I have no idea what it is or if this feeling in unintended on HK's part lol.

It IS a reference, but to one of HK's older stories (not on FiMfic)

Pretty far actually. The Castle of Two Sisters is a mostly abandoned location, I don't see why the Princesses would put a dangerous overlord in such a place and not the Royal Gardens or Tartarus.

No, you're right. :facehoof: Forgot they changed its location during the epilogue.

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It IS a reference, but to one of HK's older stories (not on FiMfic)

I had a gut feeling! The paragraph sentence felt different from the rest! Looking into it, this was referencing Thaumaturgy With Anon, which seemingly is HK's most worked on Greentext story.

No, you're right. :facehoof: Forgot they changed its location during the epilogue.

Took me a bit to get what you meant. You thought they simply left Anon in the Everfree Forest the whole time? They moved him around a lot of times during the after battle heh.

Outra obra prima meu amigo, deu até vontade de terminar a história pela quarta vez, é simplesmente incrível demais. E as referências?, Simplesmente Divinas. Me deixou ainda mais animado para ver o plano B dele em ação, e nosso incrível mordomo Cid executará com perfeição.

“Yeah, here here,” Smolder concurs. “He’s gone now. Whatever he was after, it doesn’t matter anymore.” She cracks her knuckles a bit with a toothy smile. “And if he ever does show his face again, I’ll be sure to let the Dragonlord know exactly whose tail needs a serious kicking!”

“Heh, I bet even he’d think twice about fighting dragons,” Gallus chuckles.

And just like that you've tempted fate.

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knock knock knock
who's there?
AC-130!!1

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