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Juke Denton


A lone human from the Center of the Universe who is unsure what to do with his life...but has a passion for writing when in the right mindset.

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A young Floridian boy and his father take a boat trip to a remote island. But when an ocean storm hits, the boy is whisked away to the magical land of Equestria; more specifically, Mount Aris.

At the same time, Silverstream has just finished school for the year at the School of Friendship and is upset since her friends from the school don't have any time to visit her at Mount Aris. She first finds the boy unconcious and later decides to help the boy find his lost father when he awakens from being unconcious.

[Rated Teen for potential dark and mature elements later on.]

[Special thanks to LavenderRain24 for making the cover art!]

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 65 )

Haven't read this yet and I already like the concept and want more of it :D

I guess Silverstream needs to be careful what she wishes for.
Let's see where this goes.

so far so good. keep it up and we'll see what happens. ^w^

Off to the great start for this story. Kind of wish there is a romance element in this story but I am fine with this story.

The start is spot on, and all i can say is MOAR :flutterrage: please :fluttercry:

Can't wait for what to come hehe :twilightsmile:

You have my interest! I'll read this after you write a few more chapters, make sure to stay focus on this story of you want to finish it. :)
Please update!!! AWESOME start!

A human in Equestria story, where Silverstream is one of the main characters? I like where this is going, and look forward for what is to come. Keep up the good work!

Finally ended up reading this yesterday, now I come here to check for updates every hour :)

Keep going; this is great!

well, at least she's getting help

Read the new chapter, it's great :D

AH! Com' on! A cliff hanger!

WHY, I HATE WHEN A STORY IS GETTING TO THE GOOD PART BUT A CLIFF HANGER HAPPENS

I've been waiting so long for the next chapter

And it has finally come :)

Hey!, Continue this becomes interesting

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Say, when will he update the story?

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It might be awhile. Between being busy in real life and not having the creative drive to write, it can be frustrating at times.

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Point taken, take your time.

When next chapter? Plz update soon.

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Nice! So you didn't forget this story

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Oh no. Of course I didn't forget. I've just been caught up with other things in life.

Keep them coming...please.

I'm all caught up and looking forward to Kyle meeting Silverstream's father. Keep up the good work.

Great chapter. I love it. Waiting for the next ones :)

potential dark and mature elements

Of what kind?

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Haven't decided yet. Probably won't be until much later on in the story.

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Was that Wind King related to the Storm King?

I'm wondering if this Wind King is related to the Storm King?

Ah, I had forgotten about this fic! Thanks for continuing on with it!

Anyhow, the plot continues to thicken! I wonder if Kyle and his father will be on opposite sides of the conflict, at least at first.

Yaay thank you for new chapter :) Waiting for more.

I hope that Wind Soar gets put into place by either Queen Nova, Princess Twilight, Princess Celestia or Princess Luna for treating Kyle like he's a threat but the truth he's actually a scared child who knows completely nothing about the Storm King.

Thank you for great chapter. Waiting for more :)

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You’re very welcome! I’m currently in the process of writing the next chapter.

“Yes! Thank you Dad!” Silverstream said energetically as she hugged the older hippogriff, before she realized he was drenched from the rain outside. She tried to shake the water off of her fur which garnered a chuckle from her father.

Will Kyle ever get out of the prison? What will silverstream do in ponyville? Find out on the next chapter; "the great aris escape" or "attack of the wind empire"!

I'm so very thankful to see a new chapter from you, I do hope that Princess Twilight can help out Silverstream with getting Kyle out of this predicament that he's in. But like the old saying goes: Anything that can go wrong, WILL go wrong.

With that the hippogriff exited the cell, closed the door and locked it before leaving the cell block. Kyle sat alone, wrapped in his blanket and silently sobbed at the dark details from Air Burst’s story.

Stay strong for us, Kyle. Good to have a new chapter from you again

New chapter yyeeeaaahhhh! ) Thank you so much!

Waiting for next chapters :)

LETS GO KYLE!

I really like where this story is going. I want to read more!

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