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RunicTreetops


Hug your nearest alicorn.

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Anon and Zecora, two outcasts accepted by Ponyville's residents, found kindred spirits in each other. A few months ago, they started dating. Since then, Anon practically lives in Zecora's hut, learning everything there is to know about potion making... and his beloved zebra.

However, neither of them are quite used to the level of affection that they both want to give the other. The result is a blushing mess of awkwardness and confidence issues.

Somehow, I think they'll be okay.

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Comments ( 26 )

WRITING DIALOGUE FOR ZECORA THAT DOESN'T SOUND SUPER FORCED IS SO HARD I'M SORRY :raritydespair:

I think you did a wonderful job:D

"According to the princess, I am the only citizen living in the Everfree. They have no official rate with which to tax the property. Besides, with a few exceptions I have little need for money, as this forest provides nearly all of my essentials for me."

I cant see the rhym

This is so cute! :rainbowkiss:
Iā€™ve never heard of this ship, but itā€™s so adorable! (We finally get the Zecora/Anon fic u were hinting at :yay:)
I havenā€™t even tried to write Zecora, but I can imagine the rhyming is hard to make it feel natural. But you did it really well. Props to you.
Zecora deserves more appreciation, and I love how she shows Anon that there is so much more to her than what meets the eye.

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'Everfree', 'property', 'money' and 'me' all end in an 'ee' sound.

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ah thank you:D

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It's been around for a while. You just have to go looking for it.

"Haha! If what I'm thinking is what you really meant to imply, then by all means!" Zecora sits on the bed, pats the space next to her, and begins to remove her many rings. Despite the fact that they don't really cover much, the scene makes Anon blush all the same. " I'd like to see you try ."

I'd also like to read/see that

I do love the fluffy fics! Now and then, a bit of fluff does a weary mid good!

Also, don't worry about how you write Zecora! If it doesn't sound natural to make her rhyme in a specific situation, then don't! The way you wrote her here was fantastic!

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Thanks! I didnā€™t know. Always love learning of cool ships that are new to me.

NGL, I was hoping this story would he a sequel to the one where Cadence hunts down Anon to tease him. Would've been the ultimate revenge on her for how she's treated him.

Also, yes, writing for Zecora is tricky. She's one of the few characters I've never written.

JD1

Props to you on being able to come up with so many rhymes. That alone must be hard. Also great job as always.

Hye

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Same here. Maybe even somepony or someponies could finally get her to release that ironclad/Alicorn grip on that ā€˜idiot/conflict/jerk' ball she must have.

D-F

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maybe a prequel?

Letā€™s go! I told you I was excited for a Zecora/Anon story and that writing Zecora is either a major success or a major failure. And you did it so well!:rainbowkiss:

It was cute and fluffy and my girl got the love she deserves! The only thing I hate is that Iā€™m not in Anonā€™s shoes.:fluttershbad:

Great story and excellent job!:twilightsmile::raritywink:

Everything, from A(non) to Z(ecora)

The alphabet of a relationship together ā¤ļøšŸ˜. A very poetic rhyme.
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Zecora representation. Letā€™s go!!!

Dan
Dan #16 · Sep 1st, 2023 · · 15 ·

Too short. Unsatisfying vignette.

Not asking for lengthy Alcor or Pusspuss-tier romance, but flesh it out a bit, pls.

This was really cute. And I feel your pain, writing Zecora dialogue is HARD.

You did pretty well though, at least I think so. Keep it up~

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If you're such an expert, then do it yourself :facehoof:.

You're great at these romance fics, they're always really cute.

SRY

And... the next day Zecora was walking funny and you would have needed a crowbar to remove the smile off Anon's face.

Yeah I would say she is easily the most challenging character I can think to write. Even if you can easily come up with rhyming words pentameter is likely to trip you.

I can only imagine how much of a pain it is to rhyme, let alone make sure it flows like a river.

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To be fair, it's usually one of the princesses or Mane 6 in this spot, not Zecora. Because apparently the mutant hairless green ape is better looking than actual ponies for some strange reason.

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True. I donā€™t ship Anon with any specific characters mostly because Iā€™ve only recently started reading/enjoying fics with him. I feel like heā€™s a blank slate, so as long as you write him good, you can ship him with anypony. I searched up the ship in Fimfic and Iā€™m happy I found some fics, this was my first time hearing about it.

Oh my god this is fuckin adorable :raritydespair:

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