A thousand years is a long time. That’s true in all cases, even for two immortal sisters. After Princess Luna is saved from the clutches of Nightmare Moon, Princess Celestia can’t help but feel that she doesn’t know her sister anymore. She’s tried to give her sister space and let her grow as a pony, but Princess Luna chooses to spend her time hiding away in her tower rather than spending time with her sister. In a desperate plea to spend some time with her sister, Celestia asks Luna to have dinner with her. Dinner is great. Except it goes a little… too well… Everything will be okay, right? Surely these new feelings in Celestia’s heart are nothing. Surely.
Rated Teen because this is technically incest. Here's a ship between Celestia and Luna! I will upload new chapters as I write them~
Well besides the tense it’s written in, I can’t tell why this was so harshly downvoted. Imma give it a chance!
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at this point i'm pretty sure there's a couple bots that auto downvote. its always comes in 5-10-20-30, depending on size.
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well, i like the story so far, the tense you use isn't one I personally prefer, but if you enjoy writing that way, then write it how YOU enjoy.
^^ and ya have my support!
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aint the author bud, just saw a comment to respond to. bout to read it myself. ill keep the tense in mind, but ill be damned if i wont enjoy a princest story.
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But I'm glad you like the story!
People downvote pretty much anything on this site, even if they haven't read it
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Bots would explain a lot
Been a while since a Princest (in the old meaning of the term) story appeared here.
Even the comments are all downvoted? Wow, someone is seriously malding about this story simply existing.
The story looks decently written in my opinion, not sure why people are crapping on it.
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I wanted to do my own take on princest since there isn't a lot of content based off the two of them
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Probably because the main ship is between two sisters
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Not quite what I meant. Back in ye olden days of the fandom, princest was used to refer to Luna and Celestia. However, the term was adopted by G5 bronies to refer to stories which feature romantic entanglements between Zipp Storm and Pipp Petals (who are both princesses and siblings).
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yeah its kinda weird to think about having to name the luluxtia ship name...whatever it is now.
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Luluxtia? Try saying that five times fast with a mouth full of popcorn.
I'm pretty sure most of the downvotes are because of the incest tag, which... Imma be honest I'm not a fan of but that's a my personal preference thing and shouldnt' restrict you from writing like fanfiction.
I will suggest however to use some pronouns because this happened:
I do love sunbuttt, but this is a lot. Why not use pronouns + Celestia's action. Eg. Her pink eyes briefly look out of the window. .... Her gold-slipppered hoof nudges aside the ajar door.
Other than that, professionally I wish you luck, and hope you find your audience, though, I personally won't be reading any further :)
I don't like incest, but I think "princest" is the most acceptable incest and here's why:
Why is pedophilia bad? one reason is that the older party has more life experience and thus has the ability to manipulate the younger. Partners theoretically should be equals.
If celestia or luna were to enter a ship with a mortal, it would be a several millennia old dating a several decade old, which is proportionally like a 100 year old dating a 1 year old!
There are probably other options like discord or something, but my point is the pool is small
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Thanks for the feedback~ I will try my best to incorporate this into future chapters of this story
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Yeah, this is the only form of incest that I can actually understand. Luna and Celestia are immortal and back when it was season one, they were the only immortal creatures we knew of. Not only that, but I honestly think Celestia and Luna wouldn't know each other that well after the thousand years and after the effects of Nightmare Moon on Luna's mind. I can see why, in some aspects, it could work out between the two of them.
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exactly!
dem sisters need all deh loves!
I'm not a fan of incest stories, but I've delved into the topic in my own work, and it's very fun. They certainly could be a beautiful couple character-wise if they weren't related or their great love weren't clearly implied to be pure and platonic
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True~ And don't worry about it. It's not for everyone and it's alright to see them as just purely platonic
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Oh, I've went into darker themes since, too late to worry about that. Incest was like an appetizer before the main dish
Kudos, your story is fun, would love to read more sometimes
I usually just make an old oc of mine into an immortal being and redesign them so they are a suitable partner for old moonbutt or sunbutt. But if I can't I usually rely on aro/ace.. I don't do/like insect for personal reasons but I think this is the only insect story that is acceptable imo.
Bam, now I'm tracking the story.
I like it. Maybe just because I'm starved for lunestia content that takes itself seriously, but I doubt it. The prose is alright, except for a few bits I'd change, and the characterisation is nice. So, overall, I like it.
Well, except the choice of tense. And some of the dialogue feels a bit stiff. And I'm not super fond of the gamer Luna trope.
I swear, I do like it even if I'm bitching a lot.Also,
Should by "thy own" or "thine own".
Should be "didst"
All right so far story is all right.
I do have a gripe with it and it's the fact that the characters names are said too often. I believe this story would benefit if it was in first person perspective.
Outside of that I'm just interested on where this goes.
Im really liking this so far, the sisterly bonding is what i really like, i just wish it wouldnt end with incest😔
Fever dream high in the quiet of the night
You know that I caught it
Bad, bad boy
Shiny toy with a price
You know that I bought it
Killing me slow, out the window
I'm always waiting for you to be waiting below
Devils roll the dice, angels roll their eyes
What doesn't kill me makes me want you more
And it's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa oh
It's a cruel summer
With you
Hang your head low
In the glow of the vending machine
I'm not dying
You say that we'll just screw it up in these trying times
We're not trying
So cut the headlights, summer's a knife
I'm always waiting for you just to cut to the bone
Devils roll the dice, angels roll their eyes
And if I bleed, you'll be the last to know
Oh, it's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
With you
I'm drunk in the back of the car
And I cried like a baby coming home from the bar (oh)
Said, "I'm fine, " but it wasn't true
I don't wanna keep secrets just to keep you
And I snuck in through the garden gate
Every night that summer just to seal my fate (oh)
And I screamed for whatever it's worth
"I love you, " ain't that the worst thing you ever heard?
He looks up grinning like a devil
It's new, the shape of your body
It's blue, the feeling I've got
And it's ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
It's cool, that's what I tell 'em
No rules, in breakable heaven
But ooh, whoa, oh
It's a cruel summer
With you
I'm drunk in the back of the car
And I cried like a baby coming home from the bar (oh)
Said, "I'm fine, " but it wasn't true
I don't wanna keep secrets just to keep you
And I snuck in through the garden gate
Every night that summer just to seal my fate (oh)
And I screamed for whatever it's worth
"I love you, " ain't that the worst thing you ever heard?
I would love to see this story continue