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Unwhole Hole
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Unwhole Hole
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I first read the title as under-ped, instead of un-derped. Was briefly confused.
someone needs to teach dinky some respect
(r.i.p. time turner)
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Same. Also, I wonder if it's Flowers for Algernon-kinda plot.
Oh no, this is so sad...
Oh dear. This hurts on a deep level. There's an argument that I probably just shouldn't read this, but I find myself morbidly curious. I dread seeing where this goes from here, but I'm still going to see.
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That was my first thought when I read the description. If so...and even though I know where this is going...I'm going to keep reading.
...but I know this is going to be one of those tales that will haunt me for a long, long time...
How many bodies are in her basement?
Oh boy?
Oh God, Derpy. She remembers... Degenerative diseases and disorders are soul-crushing when you still remember yourself. All you can do is the mask, and hope it doesn't slip.
Well, this is not an auspicious start for our heroine.
Lovely to have you back as always, dear author!
Delicious? More like dielicious.
poor derpy. seems equestrias healthcare is not good enought to tell she needs help and someone to at least keep her company
Just what kind of superpowers did that pony get? Asking for a friend.
Holy shit, Spoiled. That was too much even for you.
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Everywhere he goes "Thunderstruck" automatically starts to play.
How is she not sued to oblivion?
Spoiled Rich was later found in her bed, her throat slit with surgical precision. But that is a story for another day.
For now, Derpy has a lot to think about... which, for this instance of her, has a number of issues.
Thought Spoiled went to far she is kinda right to. Though Derpy is a well meaning pony she is also a very dangerous pony as well. Her thoughtlessness has hurt a lot of innocent ponies or worse if she continues on.
This is so perfectly awful that it's beautiful
don't do it!!!!
She really does only have the two options at this point. Let’s see what comes of the determination to live.
something tells me she is gonna wake up with a clearer mind then ever before
Uh.
At least not for long.
Derpy continues to have everything go wrong. The poorest wubby, and it doesn't sound like things will be improving...
Why do I feel like that's maybe not a sign that Doctor Horse is a great guy?
I always love to see nod to the classics.
I don't love to see unforeseen surgical complications. Let's hope there's still a living brain left to repair when all's said and done...
poor derpy. hope she finds more things she can do now
What does underped mean? Google doesn't recognize the word.
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It means that both of Derpy Hooves’s eyes look normal now. Please respond to this comment.
Are you ever going to do something similar with Fluttershy’s brother?
We can finally start the Undertale crossover.
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I'm pretty sure it is "Un-derped", but one can dream of it being UnderPed.
And just like that, I realize I've been pronouncing the title wrong this whole time.
smart people do not use contractions. it does not seem so smart to me, they save valuable time after all
(roll credits)
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hi!
im guessing this is less derpy suddenly being amazing and more that she suddenly has something that helped her retern to who she once was. wont dinky be shocked
I'm getting Flowers for Algernon vibes from this
Dinky never knew her mother with an intact brain. This must be the most confusing day of her life. Also the most embarassing.
As for the steam coming off of Ditzy’s little muffin… I fear I see how this goes horribly wrong. We’ll see if I’m right.
This is great, but why does the "Dark, Horror, Sad" tags make me nervous?
He's fine, he became a lawyer.
Uh. Relearn what you lost? I don't really see the problem yet, but ok.
Ah. A terrible price to pay indeed. And there's also the question of whether the crystal knows when to stop. Especially if it's eternally trying to repair damage caused by its own presence...
Is this a "This is the Last Train Car" reference
Bullshit, this is amazing. You're like the best existential horror writer on the site. And this chapter is where you really start leaning into that. Your comedies on the other hand... can be hit-or-miss.
Damn, way to lean into your tags! I had expected "Flowers for Algernon", but THIS is unique!
Sucks to be an early adopter of mind augmentation.
Woah. Great concept here. A very different twist than I expected.
Best break I've seen!
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Well Unhole keeps his lore pretty continuous between stories. So I would hazard a guess that the crystals is somehow sentient.