A pony of mystery in the darkness. Or I forgot to take the lens cap off. (They/them is fine.)
"Sometimes," Big Mac's wife said, "I really think you love that doll more than you love me."
In a moment of foolishness, not long after Twilight Sparkle first moved to Ponyville, the unicorn cast an enchantment upon an old doll of hers. Later that same day, the unicorn's teacher dispelled the malign glamour. Surely, not even traces of the spell remained.
Or so one likes to think.
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NOTHING RINGS A BELLE 😂
This is almost biblical parable-like in its style of simple but effective creepiness. Well done.
That ending...
We went all grimdark Twilight Zone there.
Appropriate, given whose fault this probably is.
Chilling bit of domestic horror. Thank you for it.
Ohhh that ending sent chills down my spine
Honestly, sugar belle probably should’ve talked to twilight.
Oof, what a nice little horror story.Maybe I'm looking too much into things, but I like to believe that this story is about certain addictions that can ruin a relationship, at least metaphorically:Sugar Belle getting upset that Mac loves smarty pants more, him arguing over and over that "not more, just different", SB forcing him to choose between her and SP, he picks the latter, SB dies(leaves), BM regrets it but...the addiction survives.
Well… at least the doll made it.