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Serina


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Applejack takes on the task of organizing a Hoovesgiving feast at Sweet Apple Acres after Granny Smith's passing.

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(Why do you think it's acceptable to promote your stuff in another person's story? Not cool, dude. Don't.)

Edit: The comment I was replying has since been removed.

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Just report it, it’s likely a spam bot

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The comment has been removed. Thank you!

Another very well written fanfic from you.

Stars and moon above, you’re great at descriptions. There’re so vivid, so rich, so alive - it’s truly beautiful. Your descriptions of the food in particular are so good you’re making me salivate. Great work, Serina.

That being said, it does get a little flowery and wordy at times. And a fair share of descriptions are repeated a couple times throughout the story. Nothing a second pair of eyes and a little revision can’t fix.

All in all, I really like this. Thank you for it.

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Thank you!

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Thank you! Yes, this story was a tad rushed. I thought of the idea and wanted to get it out before Thanksgiving passed. I think I only reread it one time which is not my usual forte especially with my chaotic writing style haha.

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It’s okay. It was still a very beautiful read.

This, this is beautiful my friend.

Interesting. I added this to my read later list before I decided to follow you. I didn't know it was the same author as Mareternal. How serendipitous.

I liked this. Short and to the point. I enjoyed that Sugar Belle was used here a lot. Sometimes we forget that extended family is just as important as immediate.

Great message.
Great read.

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And I think Granny Smith would be proud

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