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Lord Shadow Eclipse


I'm just an author and supervillain wanting to tell stories and spread chaos and destruction. Ultra Evil Plus Chaos!

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Will this story have a happy ending?

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Maybe. What kind of ending are you envisioning?

With the weather part I could hear the Phantom of the Opera song playing in the background

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I like the metal cover by Jonathan Young.

Please tell me the girls are good vampires.

Waiting for that Vampire hunter Luna reveal

Hey Shadow Eclipse, when are you going to update some of your other stories?

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You’ll just have to wait and see.

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No spoilers. You’ll have to wait and see.

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When I get to it. I realize I have this mental problem where I start something, but for some reason I can’t finish it. I don’t know if there’s a name for it, but I have it, I think.

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What does that mean “Mm”? Is that good or bad?

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I'm sorry if you do have that if there is something like that. Besides that, you make some pretty good stuff.

I like this opening so far

Well Spike got more than what he bargained for staying the night. Now he'll be hearing more about Twilight and the girls origins

Spike's got his work cut out for him, but his mom is a monster hunter. If she finds out what he's just been assigned to do will she kill the girls and Spike if it comes down to it? These kinds of things always test one's sense of everything.

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I actually got the idea from someone who commented on a previous chapter. I thought it was a good way to introduce future conflict to the story.

Haha guess sorta correct?

Looks like the Dazzlings are on their way, and sweet of Spike allowing Rainbow to use him as a body pillow. I can only imagine her response when she wakes up with him at her side. Or the others reactions at that

Yeah the worst situations are going come sooner or later so you better enjoy this moment and I'm team werewolf

Comment posted by Lord Shadow Eclipse deleted Jul 29th, 2022
Comment posted by Lord Shadow Eclipse deleted Jul 29th, 2022

I admit, I havent read this yet and I am interested and will take a look, but at first glance, Im wondering if there is some inspiration from the Story Spike's Night Job, where he is a library assistant by day but a superhuman monster hunter at night with Princess Luna as his boss...the desciption of this is giving me shades of it.

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I've never even heard of this story you mentioned. This story is my own creation. Like you said, you haven't read it. I recommend you read it before judging it.

So Sunset's a Lupine here. Nice touch. And Spike better be prepared because the other girls are gonna wanna sample his blood like Twilight and Rainbow. So he'll be in for a lot of blissful and loopy times.

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He sure is. He might even be opposed to being bitten. Strigoi venom is strong stuff.

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Ok, guys. I haven't read this story yet, but I think someone's actively downvoting your comments. For what reasons, I have no idea.

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Yeah a troll who just loves downvoting others comments have been harassing the comments on my stories and others. Just for the sake of being a troll

Looks like their chaos in the hunters group, and Discord's the one pulling the strings between them and the monsters. And now Twilight knows the truth about Spike's mom. I can imagine he'll be in denial when she tells him

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You’ll just have to wait and see.

What did they take from Discord

Pardon me for asking, but how old is Spike supposed in this story? The first sentence refers to him as a “young man,” but the next one says he’s thirteen years old.

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If Luna finds out that the new girls are Stirogi, she’ll try to kill them.

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Not by herself. Even the most powerful of the Hunters know better than to take on an entire Strigoi nest by themselves.

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The Fimfiction staff is against any fics of underage human/anthro characters participating in any sexual acts.

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Hold on to your knickers. I plan on doing something about that soon.

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