Anon is just a normal guy who enjoys video games, anime, and streaming. You know, all the traits of an otaku shut-in. One day, he went to Comic-Con dressed as his favorite FNAF character Springtrap. As he was walking around the place, some random lunatic started shooting up the place, killing Anon. He dies, but it's not over for him.
When Anon wakes up, he finds himself in a different world. A world ruled by technicolor anime-esque ponies of all things! As he wanders around, he realizes that his suit has somehow turned into an actual springlock suit. And to make things worse, he's been attacked and framed for murdering a child, causing the springlocks to close and kill Anon. But again, it's not over for him.
The reason why I've submitted this is because I don't want to have to go back and look for it every time I want to work on it. I hope you understand.
One; She deserves to get punched in the face for saying that crap!
And Two; Doesn't she freaking remember that he was completely innocent in all this!? The princesses should deserve what's coming to them.
He's not like any typical "bad guy"!
She should be reprimanded for saying that dumbass comment.
And the fact that he was completely innocent this whole time, will basically make him immune to the elements anyways.
Good luck with that.
Thanks to those two princesses, poor Anon suffered one of the most worst deaths EVER!!!
And even then, had one of the worse fates than death afterwards.
And after enduring all of that. Do you really think he will ever freaking forgive the two princesses!?
NOT for a million years, I will tell you!
Humanity's unforgiving hatred is almost everlasting.
Besides, if either one of you had also suffered the spring lock suit, I highly doubt every single one of you will ever forgive the one that set them off either!?
HOLY SHIT I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
Great first chapter, wish the likes were on so I could like it
This is really good, keep up the amazing work!
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Thank you
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I’ll try
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Happy to see that you seem to enjoy this story
1st comment on chapter 3
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You enjoying it?
11786150 Yep I am
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This is good
Can't wait for the next chapter
I don't think the sisters would cry that much maybe a couple of tears but thats it
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Well, they would if they found out that they murdered an innocent being and let a killer get away.
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It’ll be good
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I'll hold you on that 😁
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You won’t have any control over it
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Lol true
It wasn't really "petty". If you went through the same messed-up torture/death and "undead purgatory" like our poor displaced have suffered.
You would have done the same thing to get justified vengeance/revenge on the people that set off the damn spring-lock suit!!!
Oh Nightstick, you should know you can't reason with the dead. They can't change after all, their dead set on their goal. Anyway, Excellent chapter! Really ramping things up. And Starlight being the kid that got away, is very interesting. I'm very interested in seeing how this evolves
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Just you wait. I have something very special planned!
This was a great chapter
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Thank you!
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Np
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Yeah. Polar bears
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Wow already a new chapter that was fast can't wait to read it
Read chapter and thought it was good keep up the good work
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Trying to pump out the next one by tomorrow
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K
And this is why he will never forgive you for a very, very, VERY long time.
Doubt you would "convince" him to give up his justified vengeance. Besides, you will have to also deal with the vengeful ghost children ( Glamrock Animatronics. ) too.
Let us finally begin their judgement.
I'm hoping for a more kinder ending to this, but know FNAF, the kindest ending is one of fire and smoke. And an absolute banger of a speech by Cawthon
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Heh.
This was a great chapter I loved it
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Glad to here it!
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Np
Seriously!? The princesses just basically received the ultimate bombshell of finally meeting the murdered four children spirits/ghosts that started all of this brutal mess of a case.
And instead of freaking out that not only they got their own animatronic bodies as their own, but now realize that the poor kids are on the exact same vengeful side like Springtrap is.
BUT, they just ignore that huge "plot twist"/bombshell reveal, and only care about Springtrap's whereabouts???
The heck with this inconsistency of selfish behavior?
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I’ll work on that. TBH, I was really tired writing this and just wanted to get it done. I’ll work on it more tomorrow.
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It's funny that I actually hope that Springtrap and the "Glamrock Kids" won't end up like that.
The ONLY one that deserves to burn like that is the real 🟣 🔪 that started all this. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Take your time with the editing.
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Don't worry. I have a plan for that.
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I'll try to address it as best as I can, but I can't make any promises
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Probably shock, you tend to not focus on those details when your inside of a death trap
Oh my god what a twist I never expected this this was amazing
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Thank you
Edit: I'm done.
Ha!!! A Donkey Kong reference. It will be funny if one of the Glamrock Animatronics/Ghost Kids actually beat Rarity's high score to screw with her?
Never thought to see Rainbow Dash and Twilight act opposite of each other.
Because if I remember correctly, in a few chapter ago; Rainbow Dash was very cocky to think she could take on Springtrap, despite knowing that he was once an innocent victim.
But now, she is realistically scared of trying to face a little undead and vengeful spirit trapped in a zombie-like body.
None of the MLP Villains that they face so far isn't horrifying or tragic like that!!!
And Twilight should feel the same way too.
Fricking rude, Rainbow!? When you realize that these are the murdered ghost kids, you should really apologized.
Hot damn! That was really f**king genius of Springtrap to think so far ahead like this. Then again, he planned this for 30 YEARS!
Ha! You did kind of deserve it, Twilight.
Oh Yeah!!! Enough said.
See, this is why having hooves sucks. This is why I mostly prefer Anthro's, so they can at least have hands.
I know what you're trying to do, Starlight. BUT, both Springtrap and the ghost kids do deserve to have vengeance, and he is right that you know NOTHING of what he and the kids went through.
Heck, you would have been a vengeful spirit too if you died with your friends back then.
Never thought of him hating the princesses to call him his "nemesis'"? Then again, I wouldn't blame him after what he went through.
I am quite happy that you're finally addressing the ghost kids inside the Glamrock Animatronics.
Although, they should be more shocked more than a "surprised". Thought they will react more emotionally?
He is totally correct that you would have done the same thing if you were a victim of those nasty spring-locks.
And I actually hope that they'll have PTSD and unending nightmares SEEING that!
Then, and only then will they finally realized his pain!
P.S. and I hope that the Princesses will feel like total garbage and really disgusted with themselves that they caused a once-INNOCENT being to this!
Technically, it did. Since the ghost kids did move on when William Afton finally got what he deserved, TWICE!
Okay, that is nice and all.
But, you still need to find the real killer.
And two; Springtrap does deserve to have his own vengeance. The princesses need to have Bad Karma at least.
Seriously, come on! He was so close!
S.O.B!!!! Neighsay is the William Afton in this!?
I know that he is a total racist/xenophobic dick, but why would he kill pony kids when he's not only a "pro-pony", but also apart of the school board or something like that!?
Even though that he is a psychopath. You could at least explain his motives before he gets what he deserves.
Also, why the hell would Neighsay stop Springtrap from spring-lock the princesses, when he's going to kill them as well, eventually!!???
Please explain this silly plothole? Because if he really wants them to suffer and die, he should have let Springtrap activate the spring-locks anyways!!??
P.S. Both Applejack and Rainbow Dash should definitely take back what they have said about cheering for the real child/foal killer!!!!!
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Long reply, but glad to see you’re enjoying it.
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I'm now finally done, and you can respond what I have said.
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No problem