This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: Nine Elements Book 1

The story continues with season 2. Keep in mind, some chapters will be rearranged because continuity.

This retelling is partially inspired by SuperPinkBrony12's MLP (What If?) series. (Start here if you're interested.)

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S2 is here!

Hope that you enjoy your break. I’m looking forward to what you have in store for us this season.

And, man what a start to it

I like how you’re involving him more for this 2 partner

Quite a change up making Discord take Spike. If only Discord could listen to Spike and possibly help him see that there could be others that care for him if he took the time to actually listen instead of always causing mischief.

Well, Discord does listen to something Spike says.

That is something that definitely would happen.

Them worry for him make sense

Spike's name temporarily freeing Rarity and Fluttershy?

Thought it would’ve brake them free fully when it did

Hey there. Thanks very much for getting this first chapter of Book II of your series up. And thanks very much for liking a couple of my ideas enough to use them. Again, you did a really good job on the exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up. Definitely appreciated the added details on Discord at the beginning as well as Cheerilee being as alert as she was. And, yeah, the Princess Element distribution makes a lot more sense, as was the reasoning for the Princesses not helping more directly. Spike's dialogue with Discord after being dragon-napped was also good, as was the Mane Six's expressing so much concern.

VERY much looking forward to part two, as well as more of the series in general.

Good love it please more thank you

Sorry. It was a good start of the story. I didn't like how Spike was treated. I hate how spike is treated in the story please treat him better. Stop being mean to spike. It's not fair to spike being treated this way.

Yep. Let me know what you think of the chapter when you finish it.

Good to see S2 of these series back with Discord's debut!:yay:

Was very surprised with the early interactions between him & Spike here & even though he put the Mane 6 though the ringer like in canon he was pretty decent with Spike, even letting go to the bathroom during all this! Makes me wonder if they'll become O&O buddies sooner rather than later here?:rainbowhuh::moustache:

Looking forward to part 2 when it comes out, kerp up the great work! :twilightsmile:

It'll be interesting when we get to the Royal Wedding.

Great chapter, season 2 is now up, and oh boy, spike got captured and discord is love and got the group on a chase while finding the elements of harmony and turned twilights friends into their opposites, man this is gonna be really interesting and exciting, I am looking forward to the next chapter

Welcome back buddy, and wonderful chapter.

Keep up the great work. :twilightsmile:

So, are you going to post new a chapter every sunday? Like when you post every monday for book 1?

Actually, in Book 1, the first chapter was posted on a Sunday and all remaining chapters came out on Monday.

I'm really looking forward to see what you come up with for this book. :heart::pinkiehappy:

Your book 2 chapter is great! Can't wait to see more of your chapter and remember: No matter what, keep trusting, keep believing, be strong, have hope. The best is yet to come. If you're struggling today, remember that life is worth living and believe that the best is yet to come. Remember that you are loved, you matter, and never forget that there is always hope.

Here's a song that will make you do whatever it takes. Enjoy! https://youtu.be/HcNcOnIkQQU

Thanks, but, I’m actually good on motivation.

-The Return of Harmony: Spike and CMC, including Celestia are more focusing and they were immune from Discord's chaos, Spike is very devastated by what Discord did to his friends, especially his future girlfriend and his mother figure and the Crusaders felt very guilty, since they are the reason that Discord is free and corrupted her sisters and her friends on her opposite side, for which the 4 do their best to fix things, meanwhile, Celestia decide confort Discord. Instead of Twilight purifying her friends with her magic, they themselves purify the consequences they do if they continue with that behavior, and it would be that they would have been lonely and sad, Fluttershy, for being a bully, her animal friends are chased away including her rabbit Angel, Rarity, for being greedy, I know that a hermitania with no friends and her only friend is just a simple rock, Pinkie Pie, for being a grump, the same thing happens with Fluttershy, only she gets more angry because being a grump, she She has been left without a friend, Rainbow Dash, she feels bad for betraying her friends, she feels that choosing Cloudsdale more than her friendship with her friends and more than her number 1 fan feels betrayed by her attitude and Applejack feels terrible for lying Seeing that her friends broke up anyway, her brother is a dog, her grandmother went crazy and her sister no longer trusts her.
-Luna Eclipsed: Pinkie Pie realizes that Luna is not having fun, but rather sad because of her tragic past, and Rainbow Dash became serious at the moment when Luna became sad, the same thing happens with the Ponyville ponies about Luna's situation, who didn't know anything especially Fluttershy (Luna is his desing of Season 1)
-The Mysterious Mare Do Well: Scootaloo with other ponies they saw about the truth of Mare Do Well, and they were very angry about the Mane 6, the rest looks like the comic Alone with Scootaloo apologied Rainbow Dash for leaving it aside and the Mane 5 for being mean to their
-The Last Roundup: Apple Bloom and Big Mac also go to search Applejack. Applejack also apologized to Pinkie Pie, Rarity and his family

I’m not sure I’ll be able to use all of them.

Well, for starters, the CMC already fell victim to Discord’s magic before he was freed, Luna stated that without the Elements of Harmony, Discord could undo Celestia’s magic with minimal effort, and Discord’s influence over the Mane 6 is quite strong now even with two being briefly freed.

But if CMC evoid the Discord Influence, because they were on if it wasn't for Cheerliee

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